Koshka

@godlyfantasy12

Grimmy? Oh my, that’s… adorable. I can see how Lyn is with nicknames.

(Of course they stay snarky. Brothers are snarky.)

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Mikkel

This room wasn’t a very defensible position, but if the window was filled with sand bags- non-existent sand bags…

Hours upon hours of filling thousands of sandbags…

Mikkel lay down with his back to the door, his rifle beside him where he could keep his hand on it. With his…[Read more]

@queen_of_alvastia

You’re fine! =) It is an interesting tool though, but a hard one all the same.

@queen_of_alvastia

ONLY DO IT IF IT WILL HELP THE STORY! If the book’s good as is I wouldn’t add one just to deepen it.

It may cause trauma you don’t need.

*Weeps*

@godlyfantasy12

I enjoyed that way too much. I mean really, why do I enjoy reading about character deaths? I despise tragic endings, and a book that makes me cry is probably not going to be high on my list of I just want tos.

But that…that was beautiful.

And now I plead for more!!!

@freedomwriter76

Yeah, that’s really the only reason I’m still going through with it.

And the way it all works out is just so beautiful to this author.

@freedomwriter76

And this is why you can’t let that happen!!!!!!

@freedomwriter76

You said that so much better than me. XD

@godlyfantasy12

Good idea. *Sigh*

Well, the why Oswald dies is…um…to move along the plot by making Mikkel try to commit suicide.

That sounds awful.

And this is why I feel so cold hearted.

There are other reasons…although most of them are about as bad.

@elishavet-pidyon

I already know, so if you want to… 😉

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon

Y’all are making me feel so cold hearted. XD

@godlyfantasy12

Oh. No.

That’s…heartbreaking.

And so sweet!!!!

Why would you do that to Grim? Just why?

But no, that is a good character death.

@elishavet-pidyon

Aww…

Confession: I’ve only ever cried over one of my characters and that was because someone else started first.

@freedomwriter76

*Deep shaky breath*

I was pretty sure this was going to happen.

*Sniff*

It’s okay.

I’ve been considering killing Wilkins, but y’all didn’t hear that so…

Hehe…

@godlyfantasy12

*Stares for a moment in stunned silence*

WHAT!?! Nooooooooo……..

What about Nyx?!? What is HE going to do?

Wwwhhyyyyy!!??!

Actually, now I’m curious. Why?

@godlyfantasy12

YES, do tell!

But to make us even, then yes I do have at least one I’ve got figured out, and an almost death.

And none of y’all actually know either of these characters like at all, but anyway.

So, I vaguely referred to this in the RP, but Mikkel has a close, close friend named Oswald who’s the medic for his group in the…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

*Staggers back from hooded figure, then rushes forward on bended knee*

“Don’t touch November-Ara-Paxton-Grim-or Luna! PLEASE!!!!”

*Settles back into seat.*

“But, please, do tell.”

@whalekeeper

I hope this will be helpful…

• Loosely plot your book out on note cards, with about how much time in the storyline you think that section should take.
• If things are going to fast, step back and  try writing a character point by point through a scene. Add some description or dialogue.
• If they’re going too slow, look for…

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@whalekeeper

Yep, I’m doubled. =) If you ever have any questions, I can try to answer. (Within reason, of course)

@godlyfantasy12

Would you like to go? =)