@keilah-h
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whaley replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 1 year, 8 months ago
I used Simublast, it was the first website I could find that didn’t take forever to load. 😌
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whaley replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 1 year, 8 months ago
it could be your character speaking if you want, there’s no confimation so it’s up to the reader.
Yeah totally. I saw the hat line as my own character’s line, since he has a hat, but it works for more than one character.
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whaley replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 1 year, 8 months ago
I’m leaving the dialogue up to interpretation. XD Although I have my own idea of who was speaking
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whaley replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 1 year, 8 months ago
@keilah-h @esther-c @lydibug @loopylin @jonas @godlyfantasy12 @freed_and_redeemed @smiley @grcr @highscribeofaetherium @rae @lightoverdarkness6
Warning, everyone… this part is pretty chaotic because everyone is in the same room, trying to figure out what is going on, talking over each other. This is also the exposition part.
Briefing Over…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@keilah-h
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
@the_lost-journal
@linus-smallprint @hybridlore @raxforge @keilah-h @raeIs it just me, or does anyone else think he’s lost his mind?
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Ahhh that’s great!!! I love it!!! 3D animation is easy and hard at the same time, but ahh that’s awesome!! Good job! 👏
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freedom replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@rae @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @ellette-giselle @any-other-marvel-people-here-idk-lollll
Steve and Ryo (an OC…gosh, I need to write a scene with them again😭) ughhh their dynamic is the cutest thing ever😭😭💜

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freedom replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 8 months ago
@ellette-giselle Thank you! 💜 I’m excited for Book 3 too😁
@keilah-h thanks! 💜 And Book 3 is plotted out, but I haven’t officially began writing it yet😊
@ellette @keilah @koshka @rae @esther-c @elishavet-pidyon @grcr @anyone-else
Leon/Riker Aesthetic for 3rd book👀💜😭

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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@keilah-h @ellette-giselle @rae @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @grcr @anyone-else-idk-lollll
anyone want a random possible scene from the 3rd book? 👀
Ngl, y’all, I think this brotherly dynamic is going to be the best part of Book 3😆💜💜 It’s just so freaking adorable and sweet and just AGHHH I love my…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
HAHA!
I actually love some of the tron soundtrack!!! Some of it I can’t stand, but this song and a few others I really love!
Here, you should listen to this song. Honestly, the whole soundtrack is great!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Glad that makes sense. Some people have thought I was a little crazy for adding that and shouldn’t be playing around with adding demonic powers to my books. But we LIVE IN A WORLD with demonic powers people. *sigh* Glad this makes sense to someone.
From the way Linus asked the question I’m wondering what his response will be.…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 8 months ago
@theducktator @ellette-giselle @rae @keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @anyone-else
Riker Aesthetic for the 3rd book👀

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freedom replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 8 months ago
@ellette-giselle @theducktator @rae @keilah-h Thanks y’all! 😁
@keilah
like in Freedom’s Fire you see him as mostly heartless and cruel, but in all the other books he is more humanized–he has a brother, he has a family, he has reasons for why he did what he did. Not that they were good reasons, mind you, but it means that it upsets you that…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h
NEXT SECTION!!
Joseph sat at the table staring at nothing.
In the corner, Sabina was holding a sobbing Eric, and Asher was sitting beside Noah, his face pressed against him. Alicia was at the other end of the table, her hands over her face.
Darrien had a hand on Joseph’s shoulder…
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Ruth replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
So…I started reading and couldn’t stop.
I found myself really enjoying the story, and I forgot about critisims until now. My only mental note is it was pretty obvious that Spy was Huntresses and Scouts father from the point that Huntress entered his room and saw his stuff. That and sometimes it feels like the scenes are too short,…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h
Here is Joseph!
(Adrian was posted at the bottom of page 8 for anyone that missed that.)

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Ruth replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Thanks for sending the link!
I started reading it (just got to the part where Huntress sneaks into Spy’s room) and so far I’m really enjoying it! Thank you for letting me read it!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
LOL.
Oh 😂 Sorry about that. I wasn’t thinking about the POV shift at all. I guess with Adrian in so many of Joseph’s scenes, I forgot that it’s just Joseph’s POV. @Linus is probably right, you should keep it consistent.
I think you meant to tag @keilah-h up there, because those were her words.
You two have some issues with tr…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h
Does anyone want to see a Joseph or Adrian aesthetic board?!?
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