Keilah H.

@keilah-h

As a person who knows a lot about phonemes and stuff cause of my very meticulous tutor, I get it, but I don’t know if all the letter sounds and stuff will confuse people.

Yes, I was a little worried about that. My Grandma taught me how to read, and she also was very meticulous. I tried to write the scene as the closest thing to what I r…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @keilah-h @the_lost-journal @ellette-giselle @highscribeofaetherium

I think I tagged the right people

Do you remember the beginning scene of A Visitor in the Night from The Baron Chronicles where Simeon is reading something? So, I just spent 27 minutes changing that scene because the thing he reads is from an actual book that isn’t…[Read more]

@keilah-h @hybridlore

Thanks! He made it there safely, and he flies back Saturday.

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It was late into the evening before the meeting finally broke up. Julian’s words had shaken the little church, and they were ready and open to hear more. As Leon and Julian took turns speaking to them and en…

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@keilah-h    @linus-smallprint    @hybridlore

Okay, here’s a question for y’all.

So, I personally really like Julian’s speech/sermon, whatever it is. (I cringe when y’all say sermon because I’m a woman and I wrote it. But I guess Julian is a guy. 🤣) Anyhow, I really like some of the themes it hits, I like the flow. Basically, I perso…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Well, first off, this is Julian we’re talking about. Leon had more understanding for them. Second, this is really their first time going through something like this. The last time was in Ardenta, and Ardentans have a certain brute stubbornness and willingness to just hang on that a lot of other cultures don’t. (That’s part of why…[Read more]

@keilah-h ^^

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The next morning after breakfast, Julian and Leon began making their way along the streets looking for the homes of the three men they had left to lead the church: Konner Krüger, Reinhold Meier, and Fox Keller.…

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@keilah-h

Got it, good to know. I didn’t remember what color he was before anyway, so this helps.

Got some scenes for Crosshair too? Or is he dead in the first ten minutes? LOL in that case sorry Cross

NO comment. 🤣

@keilah-h

yoooo this still a thing?

The answer is… complicated. I dropped most of my writing over this last school year because of senior year craziness, and because I wanted to prioritize my friends (of which I have nine immediate ones who all need my love and care because they are beautiful human beings).

But I still have the full outline for…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

Hmmm…….. is that more out of jealousy or pride…? Maybe both…. So I guess you wouldn’t! More for selfish reasons….! (but that is me just making an assumption! I could be wrong)

I’d say just competitiveness. So more selfish reasons, but not necessarily wrong ones. Now I work out just to be stronger.

Oki doki! This one is differen…

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@rae @keilah-h @anyone-else-interested

@rae @keilah-h ok! I can start it tonight or maybe tomorrow morning.

(This does not mean im giving up on the school rp, though.)

@keilah-h

Me too. Hue’s a fun character.

agreed.

Not gonna tell ya. 😈

@highscribeofaetherium @loopylin @keilah-h

Thx

@loopy

Maybe we could resurrect one of the old role plays? Or maybe I could start a new one. I had an idea of making one that’s just a giant labyrinth with monsters and things hiding inside. People don’t seem to be very active rn though so maybe I should wait.

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@keilah-h

lol that’s awesome.

I don’t need to work much today so I plan on trying to finish portal 2

@keilah-h

yeah, it’s just a first draft, those are never, ever perfect. Some can get close to how the end story is, but there’s inevitably gonna have to be at least one scene you cut, one set of dialogue you rework, one characters whose role changes, etc.

Thanks, Keilah!

@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

Chapter 27 out!

This chapter took an unexpected direction. I never thought I would be writing that sort of thing. *shivers* But then again, Andrew Perterson had something like it in his first Wingfeather book.

@the_lost-journal

Would you exercise for your family?

I mean, yeah?? I don’t quite see what my family has to do with it. Sure, I want to be healthy, but is it wrong to want to do that just for me? Or just because we should take care of our bodies? Same with 2 and 3. Maybe I don’t quite understand what you mean, sorry.

Would you chase your dreams…

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(btw, there was a short section before this that only Hybridlore commented on, and I’m not sure if the rest of you got tagged. I’ve been told tags are acting up.)

Julian and Leon stayed in Clonabay for two week…

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