Keilah H.

@gwyndalf-the-wise @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h

Thanks so much!! 😊

@keilah-h

I’m a little late to the party, but I do want to mention something that’s helped me: A lack of action doesn’t make a scene boring; a lack of tension does. You can have a scene without any action at all that still moves the story forward and feels interesting to read as long as there is tension of some kind that relates to the overa…[Read more]

@keilah-h

XD XD yes it’ll be quite the blow out

And yeah that’s okay!

@keilah-h @loopylin @mineralizedwritings

XD Allen is not having it

SERIN

Ellie walked down the hall ahead of the group, while Allen wirled on her. “You shouldn’t be.” He growled. “In your condition, you’ll slow us down–if that noise turns out to be from a hostile, you’ll put us all in danger, or hurt yourself again.”

Serin looked down her…[Read more]

@keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @loopylin

Yeah I was just about to do Serin! (;

sorry it was so late though

SERIN

The pain… the.. burning..

Her thoughts were muddled. She had been dimly aware of the group moving her out to the huge ball room. Then a strange face appearing as she’d been layed out on the marbled floor. Now she rest with her…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Thanks!

Anyway, those are the main races I’ve drawn. I have Falcor and Arcanin somewhere, but can’t find them… The Falcor are pretty much talking birds, and the Arcanin are just bears with stars on their foreheads. Here’s a quick drawing of the solar system, cause I can’t find the one I drew earlier. The picture is kind of bad, but…[Read more]

@keilah-h

@keilah-h

It worked! Ok, I’ll do the rest now. 🤣

Can’t remember for the life of me if I showed this one of Rina already, but I’ll show her anyway…

@keilah-h

Oh… That makes sense, then. 😅 I’ll try and see with Quelin… The picture is kind of faded, but it should be fine.

@mineralizedwritings @power @keilah-h @awsumfaith

Y’all’s artwork looks amazing!! 🤩

@keilah-h

Unfortunately, the pictures won’t come through, but I’ll get you descriptions later!

@keilah-h Oooo I really like the way you did the camo!

@power I reeeeaally like his armor, and the shading as others have mentioned.

@awsumfaith OOOOO I like how clean your lines are! Arwen looks nice. ALSO THE PATTERN ONE IS AMAZING, HOW DID YOU NOT SMUDGE THAT.

@keilah-h Cool! I love all the trinkets surrounding him

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @gwyndalf-the-wise @lightoverdarkness6 @princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @anyone-else

Could some of y’all read this chapter to see if it’s realistic and paced well. I know it’s only the second draft, but I’d like to get some feedback specifically on this chapter.

Ev couldn’…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Love it!!!! Such good quotes to represent him!!!

Aww THANK YOU!!!! ❤❤❤ Yeah, I love the quotes too!! They fit him soo well!

@esther-c

AHHH!!!

I LOVE IT!!!! 🤩 😆 Great job!! 😄

AWW Thank you girl!! Sorry it took so long 😆😅

@esther @keilah-h

So I just search like ‘girl with blonde hair and blue eyes’ or something, sometimes I’ll be…[Read more]

@keilah-h @freedomwriter76
elissa

Elissa clenched her fists as Hitchens spoke. She could see Crosshair in front of them, tensing and tightening his grip on his rifleas he listened. “I think, Elissa started, “That what someone does during a chaotic moment tells you a lot about them.”

@keilah-h

Thanks!

They are more or less in the same orbit, though some are a little farther than others. Lupus is slightly farther, while Leor is the closest. Aavian, Arcania, and Lacertilia take their places in between the distances of Lupus and Leor.

@esther-c

Cool! I may try Canva sometime to design my own mock cover… 😏 (Though I may not, cuz I have a friend who wants to design a cover for me so she can put it in her art portfolio that she’s going to show to the colleges she wants to go to. I gave her the info a month ago, but I don’t even know if she’s started yet. 😂)

You could design…[Read more]