KattheWriter

@koshka GASP!!! THIS IS SO COOL!!! Mind if i join? Also, quick question! No humans allowed, but are they able to be mentioned? Or no?

Cuz with my Nyx, he’ll obviously be missing his girl/bestie, Lyn.

@grcr

Hello and welcome to KP! Sorry I’m a bit late 😅. I’m Lightoverdarkness6, (or just Light 😉) A home schooled teen girl who enjoys writing, drawing, exploring the great outdoors, playing piano, ranting about books and movies, and our Savior, Jesus Christ. ❤

Andddd it seems since I’m late, everyone has already asked mostly all the newbie…[Read more]

@FREEDOMWRITE76

NOOOOOO RIKERRRRR 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

AAHHHH IT’S SOOOO SADDDD

😭😭😭😭😭😭

I love your writing sooo much!!!! But…

FrEeDoM Noooo DO NOT hurt the J baby pleaseeee 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

And

HANS…[Read more]

HEYO!! Sooo not totally sure where to ask this so I’ll just ask here lol!!

Im currently drafting most of you all know…

And I just realized that…Lyn’s inciting incident (Zolten’s death) might come a bit earlier then I figured it would. I’m not entirely sure…but yea.

This is because…the perfect timing for it to happen has come up (that sounds…[Read more]

@power ROFL!!!! Bruh u crack me up lol!!

@whalekeeper well, everyone has a different opinion, and while I see you agitation over people trying to Censor things due to it sounding “so harsh” such as calling a baby evil or something, there’s also just the truth of the matter.

Because then we are also saying God has created an evil being.

But again, I’m not going to speak for God so I’m…[Read more]

@whalekeeper if u don’t mind I’m going to move myself on from this topic because I don’t really care for it 😊 thx.

oh, did u get to read what I posted!

@freedomwriter76 i know… 😭

@whalekeeper also, I understand a bit better now 😊

but to add a bit of perspective, if I may, I believe a lot of it is because of the old adage “Write what you know” and many people struggle with insecurity, in many forms.

In fact, I believe if you’re a writer, you probably struggle with insecurity (not always but yea). Writers often do, t…[Read more]

@whalekeeper well I’m no theologian so…not sure I can get into that topic accurately lol.

But if you’re going to ask that question, you’d also have to ask- If we are ALL born into sin, and you have already placed he label that anyone who sins or is under the influence of sin is evil, then that means we all are/were evil at one time.…[Read more]

@koshka oof! I’m sorry 😅 I didn’t mean to go too far or anything… heh…

Also as for being born evil…

No I don’t believe anyone is born evil.

we are ALL born sinful. But I don’t believe you’re born evil. That depends on what you allow into your life, your heart, soul, etc.

Unless God has divined otherwise of course (God always has last word in everything so whatever He says goes lol!)

At least I don’t consider them sin in this instance, it depends on if your flaw is causing you to fall/sin. Then yes, it is a sin.

But things like characters flaws, unless that character flaw is a sin (such as unforgiveness, hate, etc) but insecurity is also a character flaw.

And ACTUALLY…if you go to far with insecurity, it can turn int…[Read more]

@whalekeeper I was just about to come on here and say…

A flaw is not a sin 😅

Sin- an immoral act considered to be a transgression against divine law.

Flaw- a mark, fault, or other imperfection that mars a substance or object.

@koshka…heh…yea 😅

so it is kinda…surreal and dark and mad?? But I actually really really like it 😂

it has a Tim burton Alice in wonderland feel to it lol, and just…I like it a lot.

Plus it really just speaks to me about Lyn and how she views things…I’m happy with it (needs editing obviously but yea!) really one of those HUZZAH! Moments!

&…

@whalekeeper AHHHH I LOVE THAT TIDBIT ABOUT ZOLTEN RELATING TO ARA’S INNER LEADERSHIP STRUGGLE!!! AHHHH!!!

@whalekeeper also…if what you’re saying is Active arcs are characters who basically say “I need to change everything about myself” (and they do that) IMO that would be a very negative arc/story.

Yes I understand people need to change…but that is through growth, not technically changing everything about themselves. Villains even have to grow t…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Hm…I’m afraid I’d have to disagree with you there.

You say that this in-between character would at first appear to be active, but in reality be passive, because they have “No flaws” in the end they are just influenced by others, etc.

And I can see what you mean…but as a REAL human being who has been INFLUENCED by others (bec…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon NO!!! NOT J****!!! NOT THE BABE 😭

ALSO EVERYONE!! I was lying down and got hit with a small excerpt (not gonna share the exact excerpt cuz it needs editing and such lol)

but ya know how u get hit with bits and pieces of dialogue, etc? This was kinda like that, so I wrote it down.

Basically, I was thinking about this advice…[Read more]