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@daisy-torres

GIRL, this is amazing!! It made me cry!! It was so sweet and sad (I say that in a heartfelt way) and had some lovely descriptions!! Those first two lines? Already got me hooked. Also, I adore the name Bridgett. *applauds* Well done! 🙂

@joy-caroline That was great!

@hallie-jean @writerlexi1216 (Psst….helpful tip…just copy/paste from underneath everyone’s username on the left…I do it all the time…)

@nova21 Of course! Anytime!

@hallie-jean @nova21 These look fantastic!

@hallie-jean

It’s no problem, girl!!! 🙂 It’s hard to keep up with everyone’s @ things anyway (what even are those called???) I’m very happy that you’re going to read it!! I’m already looking forward to your incredible feedback!! WOOHOO!! 😀

@nova21 I just finished reading the chapter and it was A-MA-ZING!!!!!! I loved it from the beginning, but I got really hooked when we got to the part with the “uncle”!!!!!! I love the MC too! She makes me think of a spy a little bit. 😉 I thought the pacing was really good and I would definitely keep reading!!! 🙂 I absolutely enjoyed it!!!!!

@issawriter7

@hallie-jean Aww, thanks!! I’m starting to feel much better and I hope you do too. <3 I’m going to try to get back into drawing characters, I kinda took a brief break from them lol but I still have.. two to draw I think? And then there are people that want me to draw for them after that. (Sorry for the wait everybody XD) But it’s np, I’d love to…[Read more]

@hallie-jean

Thank you, Hallie!! 🙂

@hallie-jean

Awwww, THANK YOU for being so willing to read/critique it!!! Your feedback is super helpful!!! My chapters tend to be pretty long, so take your time! 🙂 Wow, really? Awesome! *high-fives* FIRST-TIME NOVELISTS CLUB! Thanks for wanting to read it! 😀

@Abigail-m

Thank you, Abigail!!! That means sooo much that you love him as much as I do!! 🙂 He’s my favorite character I’ve ever made and I fangirl over him wayyy too hard, so I try to build his character as perfect as I can. And he has the most drastic character/redemption arc of anyone in the story, so that’s exciting! 😀

@Gracie-j

Thanks! 🙂 I know, he captured my heart .5 seconds after I made him XD Yup, I may try that with the raven! Newton had his raven before Caira had her owl (she used to have an arctic fox), but when I switched it, I realized they both had birds 😀 Oh well.

@ribbonash

Aww, thank you for offering to read it! It’s my first novel (and first chapters) so I still have a long way to go, but I’d love any feedback you have! Here’s my first chapter 🙂 Thank you so much!!

@Gracie-j

THANK YOU, GIRL!! 🙂 And yes, I did plan on having a divider between them to smooth out the transitions (that must’ve slipped my mind). And *sheepish grin* I have a habit of ‘telling-not-showing” so thank you for reminding me! *flees to Google Docs to edit*

Yay!! Girl, that’s AWESOME!! I’m so happy that you’ve fangirled over them :D…[Read more]

@writerlexi1216

That is so good!! I just LOVE Newton! There are literally only three characters in all existence (and in my whole life) that I’ve ever fangirled about and Newton is so definitely one of them!! (the rarely seen fangirl side of me is internally screaming right now). 😀 😀 😀

@nova21

It was my pleasure! 🙂

@gracie-j

Personally, I’ve never had to use the Cast of Characters list (The Snow Warrior only has five immediate characters), but I think “reoccurring cast” lists are excellent:) In fact, I kind of wish I had enough characters to make a cast list.
As for the spoilers aspect; spoilers have never really bothered me (except in mysteries of…[Read more]

@hallie-jean

Everett is such an amazing name! I like him already:)
(And actually, I LOVE spoilers! Yes, I’m probably weird but I’m the girl who looks up how a movie ends scene by scene before actually watching it XD ).
And Molly’s collage is awesome! 😀