@julia-r
Active 6 years, 6 months ago- Rank: Wise Jester
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@ariel-ashira, thanks! I don’t want to be a pest, but can you answer any of my questions?
Hmm, what do you think @livgiordano ? Do we know each other? Just kidding, yes we do. Quite well actually. At least I think so. Liv is one of my best friends in the world. She’s pretty awesome. *high fives*
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NC Stokes replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@catwing A spleen is worth about 500$. To get out of a straight jacket, you have to somehow get your arm over your head. (Don’t think I’m flexible enough to do that. Hopefully I won’t find myself in a straight jacket any time soon. 😛 ) Some fishermen in the 19th century claimed to have caught mermaids in their nets. And if you’re attacked by…[Read more]
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@livgiordano. Aw, that’s nice of you to say. Yeah, I would have tagged you too, but you have already read this part and know like the whole plot already. 😁
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LivGiordano replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@filewriterbase13x I would totally go for this if I hadn’t already read it. 😉 *nods* To everyone else, go for it!! It’s soo good.
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
Oh, and I guess I put the mock cover on there too. I didn’t mean to do that. Oh well, you guys will probably like that anyways.
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filewriter@base13x started the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
Ok, guys. I really wanted to try this, and I think (hope) I will learn a lot of stuff from this. I hope you guys will help me by honestly critiquing this. What is here is my prologue and almost all of chapter 1. My writing is basically the same all the way through style wise, at least.
What I mostly want to know is:
1) Do I give enough…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@skredder The sequel of my fantasy series. 🙂 And I actually have to go eat dinner now because I have to leave. (I have play performances for a show of Cinderella every night this week…) Talk to you later!
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Ingrid replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@skredder @rochellaine I’m joining for a limited amount of time… 🙂
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NC Stokes replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
You know you’re a writer when you could easily win a game show where all the questions are morbid/obscure/weird.
How much would your spleen go for on the black market?
Me: *raises hand*
How do you escape a straight jacket?
Me: *raises hand*
Name a 19th century belief about mermaids.
Me: *raises hand*
If you were being attacked by…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic Kindly critique this, will you? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Thanks for the feedback…very helpful!
@ariel-ashira YESS!!! Oh, I’m so glad you liked it!
@daughteroftheking Thank you kindly. And yes, those are some good points. *strokes chin*
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Kindly critique this, will you? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@ingridrd The suspense! I’m so excited to read about this Jaclyn I’ve heard so much about. I really enjoyed it and would gladly keep reading. One thing, if you could add a little more about what she is feeling during the chapter, that’d be great. I can already get a good feel for the overall mood, which is excellent, (something I’m having trouble…[Read more]
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
Bye, @jess-penrose Unfortunately, I also have to go. 🙁 Bye. This was fun and the first time I have ever done it. I bid you both a good night. *waves and bows*
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@jess-penrose, @skredder. Oh, okay. I get it know. Cool! I just finished Part three. As you probably already know, Skredder. Penrose, If you want to read what I just wrote, it’s on the topic, Truly lost our minds. 🙂
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
A Kingdom Pen Adventure: Truly Lost our Minds
By
The File Writer of Base13x (@filewriterbase13x)
Part three: After the Storm
I opened my eyes eyes slowly, groaning as I sat up. Confused, I realized that I was on the floor. I rubbed the soreness off of my cheek. I noticed golden sun rays shining through the little gaps of the window shutters.…[Read more]
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Christine Eaton replied to the topic Comics in the forum Book Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Tell me of your comics, Elizabeth 😀
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@skredder. Oh, I hope you finish it in time. I am kind of embarrassed about this but… what is steampunk exactly?
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
Thanks you two!!! How are you doing @skredder? Are you writing something now?
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@jess-penrose, Yay! Good Job! I am almost done with part three!
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@jess-penrose, Lucky! Go turn off those horses! LOL
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@skreeder, thanks
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