@jonas
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Btw, I was thinking we’d assume they know who Vethe is, since Marcurious is there.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Ellis
“Oh, sure,” said Ellis. “You follow us, spy on us, and attack us, and then we’re supposed to let you go because you tell us to?”
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Cloaked Mystery posted a new activity comment 2 years, 4 months ago
I’m…not particularly comforted. Hey, you passed 2000 posts!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Zash
“We’re here on the Dark King’s orders, idiot!” Zash snapped as he strode out of the shadows. “Have you found them?”
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That’s all I have for now. Anyone is allowed to have their villains be with Zash. Dlek at least is.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
I’ll try to get to it by Saturday, I need some time to think.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 4 months ago
And you too (didn’t see it at first.) I’m praying God guides you through whatever you’re going through.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 4 months ago
I’m sorry about that. I find it weird and dumb how there are kids who are so obsessed with sports and look down on more “academic” things (honestly what are they doing at school?) I’m sorry you feel trapped. I can’t tell you what you should do about it, because public school is completely outside of my experiences, but I’m p…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009 @rae
Should this group run into another group? Their conversations don’t seem to be going anywhere. Too many introverts XD.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Most Common Character Traits? in the forum Characters 2 years, 4 months ago
I think I write mostly masculine MC’s cuz I worry if I’m portraying women right, I mean, I want strong characters, but I don’t want my feminines becoming basically masculines in women’s bodies. Ya know?
I gravitate towards writing male characters for the same reason, except for me, as a guy, it’s even harder XD. Initially…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Yeah, that’s fine. I was thinking about adding another too.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
The goal is undecided. They just got here, and they haven’t met the person who hired them yet.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Selius
”You’re insane,” Selius said shaking his head. “I just want to know where are we?”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Selius
“Wond?” Selius repeated. “Combat science? What are either of you talking about?”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
I didn’t notice it either.
Selius
Selius eyed the woman incredulously. “What–? You have no idea what you’re talking about.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Hello, good people! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 4 months ago
A “hard” drink refers to alcohol. A “soft” drink is a non-alcoholic drink.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
(I’m going to have Dalton start inside the haunted house, because there’s no way he would go in willingly.)
Dalton
Dalton blinked awake. It was dark. The floor was hard, but it felt like it was made of wood, not the dry earth he should have been lying on.
He was back in the nightmare.
No. No!
He sat up, panicking.
But wait, this wasn’t the…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
Oh okay. Maybe make that more obvious somehow. You could spell in speedearing, which looks more distinct. It’s easy to not notice when the only difference is the repetition of a letter.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Hello, good people! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 4 months ago
That’s baking soda. How’s this, we all start calling them “soft drinks” then we can stop arguing.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
The only thing I noticed was this:
“Nahim, I still think you should have joined the speeder races. Your speedering is excellent.”
“My brother’s speedeering was exquisite.” A small point was made on the last word.
“Speedeering? What kinda of a word is that?”
Mandin used “speedering” first, but then he calls Nahim out on the word when he uses it.
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You shouldn’t be *laughs evilly* Wait until Christmas!
I did? Oh, I guess I wasn’t paying attention…
@jonas lol for reallllll