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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 1 week ago
@highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom @savannah_grace2009 @rae @grcr
I’ve been thinking about my plan for this series, and I am considering changing it a bit. I would maintain the same basic plot, but I would stretch it out a bit more. My original three book plan just did not feel like the right size to me. It felt like it was too short for a…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
@savannah_grace2009 @rae @loopylin @whalekeeper
I don’t know what’s happening, but would anyone mind if one of my characters tags along? They don’t have anything to do right now. If not, I’ll just wait till you’re done, because I’m guessing this scene will end after that?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
Lol. I have read all of that part.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
I wasn’t in this RP for the party part at all, but I did enjoy the interactions between the characters when they were in the palace.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
So…how different would the replacement be?
It would be as different as we wanted. I think the best course of action would be to figure out what the biggest problems were with this one and try to fix them. We could use the same characters (although if sone people wanted to use different ones that would probably be fine.) We could still use L…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
@highscribeofaetherium @rae @savannah_grace2009 @acancello @trailblazer @beth-torres @princesachronicle22 @keilah-h (is that everyone?)
I am beginning to wonder if we would be better off restarting/replacing this RP. We keep trying to get it going again, but it never works. Before, people were concerned that that would just kill both RPs, but…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic hi it's meeeeeeee in the forum Start HERE 10 months, 1 week ago
I generally isolate one of my character traits and exaggerate it (Ie my character Leo, who could represent the introverted/ arrogant side of myself)
I often do that too. For one thing I can make more characters based on me that way, but it also makes it so they aren’t just inserts of myself. Ironically, I don’t think I would get…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Hello From Canada Lily! in the forum Start HERE 10 months, 1 week ago
Welcome to KP! I’m Jonas, more enigmatically known as Cloaked Mystery. I write mostly in the fantasy genre, but usually with hard rules that verge on sci-fi. I like creating magic systems, usually hard ones, but I have a few soft-ish ones. My current project, which I am working on with my sister, @highscribeofaetherium, is a large f…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic hi it's meeeeeeee in the forum Start HERE 10 months, 1 week ago
Welcome to KP! I’m Jonas, more enigmatically known as Cloaked Mystery. I write mostly in the fantasy genre, but usually with hard rules that verge on sci-fi. I like creating magic systems, usually hard ones, but I have a few soft-ish ones. My current project, which I am working on with my sister, @highscribeofaetherium, is a l…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 10 months, 1 week ago
Yes, I essentially believe that morality is a reflection of God’s character. A common question is whether God commands things because they are good (which would make morality something beyond God) or certain things are good because God commands them (which would make God’s commandments arbitrary.) I think that the two are int…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 10 months, 1 week ago
Interesting. So your point is that Omnibenevolence is not a requirement to be God, but He’s just good out of personality.
I would say that we can’t really comprehend “requirements” to be God. I think the requirements conform to who God is, but it’s not really possible to say, because a universe where God was different would be…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 10 months, 1 week ago
I think Descartes would argue that existing is not a necessary attribute of a perfect island. I’m not exactly sure why that would apply to the concept of a perfect entity, but not other things. I may not have explained it particularly well.
If you subscribe to immaterialism, then how does the immaterial influence the m…
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Cloaked Mystery posted a new activity comment 10 months, 1 week ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 10 months, 1 week ago
I just read about an argument that is similar to one of the ones you shared above but seems a bit stronger in my opinion. It was created by Descartes. He argued it like this:
- I have the idea of a perfect entity in my mind.
- The idea of a perfect entity could not come from an imperfect being.
- Therefore, the idea must come…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
Yeah, all our efforts to revive it seem useless. I’m wondering if we would be better off starting over/replacing this RP, like I mentioned we could do before. People were worried that it would just kill both RPs, but this RP is basically dead already, so I’m not sure we have anything to lose…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 10 months, 1 week ago
See you later. I should probably start doing school as well…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic What is the cringiest thing you've ever written? in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
Uhhh…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 10 months, 1 week ago
Er… let’s just say a steak then, you know what that is, right?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic What is the cringiest thing you've ever written? in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic What is the cringiest thing you've ever written? in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
Well to be fair, Robin Hood is something that people could make adaption of that take place in different times and/or places. Although it seems that you just transplanted the characters to Mexico. They even have the same names. It’s hilarious how you confusingly laid out your character’s history, and then made it completely irrelevant.
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