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Jodi Maile replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
@joelle-stone I’m pretty new to the forums, so I’m not sure, but you could just put it here I guess? Or in the critique forum. And then we can just read it and give you our thoughts! 🙂
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Kathleen replied to the topic Suilad! I eneth nin Joelle. in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 7 months ago
Oh cool!! I am still being raised by it. XD My family owns several of the tape albums and a couple random albums from the whole Novacom Saga, but we mostly use the AIO Club nowadays. Do you have the Club by any chance? I go by Aquarium on there.
We used to have AOA club, but it’s been years since I’ve listened to any Adventures and…[Read more]
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Jodi Maile replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
@joelle-stone Your excerpt is so mysterious! I want to know what happens next!
@gracie-j Thank you! I remember this part from Held Captive—I feel like Rina’s growing up on the ocean developed her into someone who expects inconsistency, and I love how being on the land exposes her to the truth that God is steadfast.
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
@daisy-torres @issawriter7 @writerlexi1216 @devastate-lasting @joelle-stone @gracie-j @lydia-s @lewilliams @nove21
Thank you all so much!! 😀 😀 😀
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
@joelle-stone @devastate-lasting @daisy-torres @gracie-j @writerlexi1216 @lydia-s @lewilliams @nova21
Aww, y’all, THANK YOU SO SO SOOOO MUCH!!!!!!! This has just brighten up my whole day to know y’all loved my li’l ole snippet. I was worried that moment wasn’t as inspiring as I had wanted it to be!!!! And honestly for those of you who said you…[Read more] -
ella replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
No prob. I love this intense, beautifully unique scene! I felt like I was on the ice with Mejia!!! Totally hooked–amazing work!
No prob. Yeah, you should totally get more involved on the forum–it’d be awesome to have you on here more often!! Your excerpt has me totally hooked–the premise, the dialogue: amazi…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
@nova21 Yes, this is such a great idea!!! And wow, thank you for sharing your excerpt!!! I’m so intrigued now–I love the style you have going in this–it’s so atmospheric. I’d love to read more if you ever decide to share it!Â
Also is this why one of the potential titles for your WIP in the survey I took was “A Pair of Yellow S…[Read more] -
Lydia S. replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
@joelle-stone
If I can help you at all with your blurb, I’d be glad to! I still have to come up with one of my own actually. It’s so hard to come up with a good one, especially when you have a complicated storyline…😛 -
Lydia S. replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
@nova21 @devastate-lasting @issawriter7 @daisy-torres @writerlexi1216 @jodi-maile @gracie-j @joelle-stone
Wow, those excerpts were great, ya’ll!
And thanks for tagging me, Ella. 🙂
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Alexa Autorski replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
@daisy-torrres
Thank you, girl!! I’m glad you enjoyed it!!:) Yours were AMAZING!!
Aww, thanks, Issa!!! <3333 That means so much to me!!! It’s from the POV from one of my antagonists (yes, I have multiple bad guys), so I thought it’d be interesting to share. THANK YOU!! <3333 And I just ADORED what you…[Read more]
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Katherine replied to the topic Suilad! I eneth nin Joelle. in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 7 months ago
@joelle-stone Aww, you’re welcome!!!!!💗
Do you like The Frog Prince fairy tale?
Awesome!!!! I love both the Disney one and the real version!!! 🙂 (I totally recommend you watch the Disney movie by the way!😉) The Frog Prince fairy tale is one of my favorites which is how I discovered E. D. Baker because her book The Frog Princess inspired Disney’s…[Read more]
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
@joelle-stone Ohhh that sounds so intruiginggg! I love the question of forgiveness posed throughout your snippet. Fantastic job!!!
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
@joelle-stone @issawriter7 I love these both so much! They’re really good!
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Alexa Autorski replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
@devastate-lasting @abigail-m @joelle-stone @nova21
WOW, all of you are such talented writers!! I enjoyed reading every part of your excerpts!!:)
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Jodi Maile replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
@nova21 Thanks for tagging me!! This sounds super fun (and like a great way for me to finally get involved in the forums).
@joelle-stone Hi! I’d love to help out with your blurb.
@devastate-lasting Your excerpt sounds amazing! I’d love to read the full short story.
@abigail-m GIRL I love the beautiful (and frightening) wintry description in…[Read more]
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
@joelle-stone You’ve come to the right place!
@nova21 Mm…sounds fun. Lemme see what I can dig up from the depths of my docs…
Half an hour later, while he waiting outside the small stationary store for the girls to stock up on stickers or something, the silvery, transparent, star-filled image of a boy was there, standing there, a little too…
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ella replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
Welcome Joelle!! If you need help, I’d gladly give some!! just let me know what you have in mind. (No one’s really on here recently, sadly. I’m gonna try to get it back up and running… )
@gracie-j, @devastate-lasting, @keilah-h, @writerlexi1216, @nanisnook, @issawriter7, @mkfairygirl, @abigail-m, @jenwriter17, @lydia-s, @when-…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic OFFICIAL WRITING SPRINT LEADERBOARD in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
I’m still sprinting now if you wanna join. Idk about @nanisnook and @joelle-stone tho. You down? 😄
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ella replied to the topic Suilad! I eneth nin Joelle. in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 7 months ago
I forgot to respond to this sorry!!  Spirals synopsis:
All she remembers is watching the world tear itself apart.
All she knows is that the monsters are out for her blood.
All she wants is someone to love.
With a stray dog as her only friend, she lives in the forest, foraging and hunting to survive. Her cabin, the only sign of a hu… -
ella replied to the topic OFFICIAL WRITING SPRINT LEADERBOARD in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
Of course, Yayay!!! Three people!!! GOGOGO girls!! Y’all GOT this!!!
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