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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Cover Art Sharing Space/Critique in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Wow, Trahia! I love these, especially the second one. I love the two girls in the center of the cover. The hairstyle, clothes, and expressions show a lot about them. Who is the girl on the top of the cover? She looks like a very intriguing character and makes me wonder what she’s so worried over. I really like her design. E…[Read more]
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Ava Coulter replied to the topic Heyyy in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 5 months ago
I just think he’s an awesome avenger and I love his character arc. He’s also just really funny (a pain sometimes) but has a good heart XD (pun intended) I also love the father/son relationship between him and Peter Parker. I just…I dunno lol. Do you not like Iron Man?
It is! Ahh you should totally watch it sometime! It’s heart…[Read more]
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Sing of Tomorrow in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
I’m SO sorry, I just saw that your question was already answered! Yikes, sorry about that
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Sing of Tomorrow in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
Yes, that makes sense:)
Ooh, yes! The apostrophes make it much more clear, I think that works great! 😀 -
Abigail.M. replied to the topic Sing of Tomorrow in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Breaking my silence. *EMOTIONAL* in the forum Announcements 3 years, 5 months ago
@not-so-secret-secret-assassin
Well then, I’ll take back the cross out ‘cause most comedians probably could take a couple lessons from you.
No problem, I love giving anyone and everyone that Yoda quote (like. All. The. Time.) XD Anyway, that IS a dilemma, but sadly I can’t help you too much there. I haven’t been on KP for a while, (I try to stop…[Read more] -
Abigail.M. replied to the topic How do I make a non-cliche escape scene? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 5 months ago
@not-so-secret-secret-assassin
That post you wrote is awesome! And is actually very helpful, (probably more so than several articles out there), so even though it was written for the awesome writer Elanor, I just wanted to say that it was very good and actually inspired me to write an escape scene for my current novel!
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic How do I make a non-cliche escape scene? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 5 months ago
This scene is stacking up to be very interesting the more I hear about it! My favorite part of this (I know, I’m a cruel writer to characters) is that Kedja knows she can’t escape and that only Zlya will be able to make it out of the prison. This is great story-wise because most escape scenes get pretty much everyone out without a ton of…[Read more]
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Sing of Tomorrow in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
Hi, Koshka! I love this poem 😀 I visualized it being sung by a captive like you said it would be and think that that works wonderfully:) It felt wintery and mysterious and sad and hopeful. I especially loved the last stanza and how each line in it was its own yet completely tied together. So I think that’s beautiful.
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Ava Coulter replied to the topic Heyyy in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 5 months ago
I knowww! Yeah, it’s definitely make it or break it for me too. Uhhh Marvel. XD you love it and you hate it.
Ugh, I know they’re all so good! I love Cap and Spiderman. Especially spiderman XD.
Ohhh my gosh Black Widow!!! I love her movie, it was even better than I expected it to be! Gahhh they’re all so good! I love black panther too…[Read more]
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Ava Coulter replied to the topic Heyyy in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 5 months ago
Oh awesome! I like that about short stories too. Although I tend to make them too long and drawn out XD
Ikr! I should!
Aww that’s awesome!! I was kind of similar. When I was around 5-11 I would write short stories and novellas and “publish” them with tape, staples and printer paper XDD. And then when I was…[Read more]
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Ava Coulter replied to the topic Heyyy in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 5 months ago
Yeah, for sure 🙂
I used to write a ton of
cringe worthyshort stories, but I think I got kinda tired of writing them XD. I’ve just been working on my main project, although I would like to get back into writing short stories cuz they’re good practice. But yeah. *shrugs*What about you?
Ikr?! Yess pasta is…[Read more]
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Katherine replied to the topic What's something you wish you knew when you first started writing? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 years, 5 months ago
@kathleenramm When I first started writing, I wish I had known that it’s okay to make sloppy first drafts. Trying to make my story great the first time slowed me down and often left me discouraged about my writing.
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Ava Coulter replied to the topic Heyyy in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 5 months ago
Very cool!! I like writing the endings too, it’s satisfying, although I have trouble not drawing it out too much or making it too happy XD
Oh cool! She’s actually the one who pointed me to KP and encouraged me to join the forum. That would be so cool! Yeah, she’s inspiring!
That’s so true (about…[Read more]
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Ava Coulter replied to the topic Heyyy in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
That’s awesome! I’m pretty new to writing seriously, so I’ve never actually completed a novel yet.
I think my fave part about the writing process is character arcs. I love finding my charries unique voices and being able to write them in their different journeys. What about you?
I love spider-man! Are you excited…[Read more]
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Ava Coulter replied to the topic Heyyy in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
AHhHh I love the end too! But then, I also hate it if you know what I mean *cries silently*
I know the themes in it are BEAUTIFUL! I love the poetry too! Peterson is an incredible author!
Do you like troll poetry? I don’t always understand it very well, but I must admit…those trolls are talented XDD
Yaaa me no like licorish XD
Yes…[Read more]
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Ava Coulter replied to the topic Heyyy in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
Hi Joy! It’s so nice to meet you!
Oh awesome! I haven’t read much biblical fiction, but the stuff that I have I absolutely loved. Especially Francine River’s Lineage of Grace Series.
That sounds SOO cool! I love St. Paul and Acts is one of my fave books of the Bible. And Temira is such a pretty name!!
Ooh my favorite food’s gotta…[Read more]
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Ava Coulter replied to the topic Heyyy in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
Haha, ikr!
I don’t, actually…yet. I’m a definitely a pantser when it comes to writing novels (especially a series), so I usually don’t have a good premise until I finish it lol. But basically *doesn’t know how to summarize without spoilers and without making it sound boring* it’s about a dystopian society called Kalopsia…[Read more]
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Ava Coulter replied to the topic Heyyy in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
I think my favorite has gotta be my current WIP, which is a dystopian trilogy. I just love the setting, the plot, and the characters are just awesome!
What about you?
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Ava Coulter replied to the topic Heyyy in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
Oh that sounds SOO cool! I’d totally read that! That’s cool that you write with your sister too! I have 4 siblings, but none of them like to write XD. Although, my little brother is one of my main beta readers, which has been interesting lol.
That’s awesome! I haven’t written many short stories (mostly cuz when I do, they end up…[Read more]
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