Jessi Rae

@jenwriter17 That is the best thing! 😀

@rochellaine Im on for an unknown amount of time.  Might have to go shortly.  Working on characters for The Crimson Cup.

@ariel-ashira Of course. I’m praying!

Could you guys pray for the relationships in our family and extended family please?  Can’t go in to specifics, but I would sure appreciate it.

@rochellaine I might still be. Can’t guarantee though.

@jenwriter17 Yeah, it’s one of my and my mom’s favorite sayings. We read that phrase in an English course where they were talking about unnecessary sentences that had nothing to do with the essay topic. It has become a staple writing phrase for us. It’s just way too fun to say! 🙂

Anybody else on right now? I’m gonna be writin’ for a little bit. 🙂

@jenwriter17 That’s no problem. 🙂

Oh, I did have a request. As you read, could you point out any places it feels like I’m head-hopping or changing POV? Also, if there are any scenes that seem slow or unnecessary or feel like the carrot in the cookie jar please point those out to me too. Thanks. 😀

@Christi-Eaton *pops in and says hello* Unfortunately no suggestions, though… Other than the classics of Calvin and Hobbes and Peanuts.

@seekjustice I got caught up finally! Sorry for not reading this earlier. 🙁 It was really good! I really enjoyed it! 😀

@that_writer_girl_99  Thanks for the feedback…very helpful!

@ariel-ashira  YESS!!! Oh, I’m so glad you liked it!

@daughteroftheking  Thank you kindly.  And yes, those are some good points.  *strokes chin*

@jenwriter17 @seekjustice I’m sorry I’m late giving this out. Here is part 6!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HQ1GUhtax3d_vpEo9452EnnEnDh3RbF-vkf_7Rt0fYM/edit?usp=sharing

I hope y’all like it! 🙂

WOOOOOOOOOOOOT! DONE! *collapses* There we go. 10 000 more wordsies added on. time for me to head off to bed. *waves* Have fun writing everyone!

I am back and writing. Only have 4k left til I’ve reached my goal of 10k for the day. *flops down and keeps writing*

@valtmy Praying!

@valtmy I’m praying.

@filewriterbase13x Bye! See ya later! 🙂

@filewriterbase13x Oh dear! That is worrisome! Very worrisome indeed! This is getting really good!! 🙂