Jessi Rae

@rochellaine They’re gonna have a heart-to-heart and pseudo trust each other. Then I am going to shatter that trust with a jack-hammer, but only on one side.

@gh24682468999 @daughteroftheking @catwing

Thanks! I’ll definitely be taking your guy’s advice. Kirin is… weird. He’s my MC, but he’s hard for me to write because I usually write anti-hero MCs and he’s not really an anti-hero. He’s entertaining sometimes, but I’m just not quite as attached to him as my other characters. *sighs* At least I have…[Read more]

@rochellaine They’re actually behaving rather well right now. A couple of them, that don’t trust each other, are about to have a heart-to-heart. We’ll see how that goes. At least I do have a mediating character, although I just revealed a really horrible moment in his otherwise unexciting backstory.

@rochellaine I’m working on Clouded Fury. It’s at a slower pace than I’d like, but it seems to be a steady pace. So, not too bad I guess. 🙂

Watcha workin’ on?

@rochellaine I will be for a little bit.

@seekjustice I really think it depends on when your character became deaf as to what slang he uses. If he was born deaf or became deaf really early I don’t think he would use a great deal of slang except any slang used by ASL users in particular. The later he became deaf the more he would use slang.

@jenwriter17 I’m definitely praying!

@jenwriter17 Yes, I’d like to continue beta reading all the chapters you put up, if you don’t mind.

@jenwriter17  Awww…of course!  I know how hard it is to lose a pet.  ❤️

@jenwriter17 @kaya-young  Alrighty!  Here you go.  Thanks again!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/11AHdPPXbizqzep23-mmpjsj1HndllfhrEjVt5cOq1Oc/edit#

@sage-g @notawriter @ariella-newheart @sarah-anson

Could one or two of you possibly draw me a character, please? 🙂

Randal—is 17, has auburn hair, green-yellow eyes, and a soft smile.  He has a long white scar down the side of his neck.  Clothing-wise, anything casual, probably just a T-shirt and jeans.

Hopefully that’s enough info!  😉

@jenwriter17  @kaya-young  Thank you both so very much for putting time into commenting on this for me!  Would you like me to post the entire book here or…?

@kaya-young  Wow, thank you so much!  I can definitely post the entire book if you want.

Well, I have not completed any other full books, but the sequel to the one you’re reading now is in the works and I also have a Superhero WIP along with some short stories/novelettes.  🙂 🙂

@seekjustice @rochellaine @catwing

anyone on? I’m on early because my mom is on the math computer, and so I don’t have anything to do.

@jenwriter17  The whole book is written, I just don’t want to overwhelm anyone with critiquing the entire story…unless you want to.  🙂

To those of you who are interested, here are the next two chapters of the book.  I’m pretty sure the fourth chapter is kinda confusing, so if you’d give me some pointers there I’d appreciate it!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-jzVzEBjTyvq5vKUBAGZ-0Lt4-_bWLJw1Uofs_59wmQ/edit

@jenwriter17 @kaya-young

@jenwriter17 @seekjustice Heyo! Here’s part 12. It’s shorter than the other parts.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1P1xxxCXLFZG_M70KCAVB7WxJ_kZQdHtqojQrZIbPNmk/edit?usp=sharing

Woah, no idea what happened to that first picture.  *scratches head*

And here are the pics…

So I found this the other day…

I wrote it when I was seven and the spelling is just horrible.  *facepalm*

I’ll write out the story since it’s hardly legible (and I’ll fix the spelling and grammar mistakes):

Once upon a time there lived a cat.  Now this cat was not an ordinary cat.  The cat has lost a leg.  The cat’s name was Pretty. 

There w…[Read more]