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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
Oooo this is SUCH a fun idea!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! And I LOVE Dylan’s dialogue. The first one was just kinda funny without the story’s context. XD It was awesome!!!!!
So my MC is a sixteen-year-old girl named Layla. I just started this new story, so I don’t know a lot about her yet, but from what I can tell she’s stubborn, competitive, and…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic How do you continue a character arc in a series? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 4 months ago
Bahahaha! I know, me toooooo! My sister was really annoyed about how much I was gushing about Dylan… he’s just so amazing! If I could bring any of my charries to life, it’d be him (and then I’d marry him!) XD XD XD
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ella replied to the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
Thank ya kindly! <3 Ooo, cool! I’d say Corvina might be a conflicted character, and Arabella might be a really sweet, friendly personality. Am I right? XD
Girl, I’d totally read this! Totally keep writing… GO GO GO! 😉
Thanks! I know, it’s kinda weird to see the dialogue out of context. But th…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic Christian Dystopian novel– easy read in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
Congrats Emily!! I’ll do it! Dystopian is my all time favorite genre. I’m so excited to read this!
My email is ellafinkbeiner11@gmail.com
Thanks for the opportunity!
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Kathleen replied to the topic Christian Dystopian novel– easy read in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
I just got it! Thank you!
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E. K. Seaver replied to the topic Christian Dystopian novel– easy read in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
@kathleenramm, thank you so much for being willing to give feedback! Just sent it!
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Kathleen replied to the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
So fun! These are from the messy first draft of the story I’m writing with my siblings
“Geez, Ted, I thought you were a superhero.”
“We climb onto the roof and break into the skylight. You unplug the freezers and smash all the ice cream cones, and I’ll find the secret recipes and vault. Got it?”
“Did you bring the grappling hook and ha…
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Kathleen replied to the topic Christian Dystopian novel– easy read in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
Ah! Congratulations!!!
I’d love to read it and give some feedback! It’s been awhile since I’ve read a dystopian novel so I’m really looking forward to reading it!
My email kjoy2803@gmail.com
Again, CONGRATS!!!
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E. K. Seaver started the topic Christian Dystopian novel– easy read in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
*drums fingers on table* Yeah… it’s about what it sounds like. It’s a super easy read, and several people have read it in a day or two. My biggest problem is trying to integrate the Christian elements I want into the book, so that is mainly what you’ll be critiquing.
I don’t have an official synopsis, but it’s basically about a 16-year-old girl…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
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ella replied to the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
Hahaha! I already love Felicity! 😉
He totally sounds like you described him. If I had to go on an adventure now, I’d want him to be the leader! 😉
Can I hang out with Catherine for a day, please? Just a day? XD
Hahaha! Poor Horace. *cough* dumb teenagers *cough* 🙂
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ella replied to the topic How do you continue a character arc in a series? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 4 months ago
Hey Kayleigh!! Of course! That’s a great idea, I definitely get wanting that feeling of satisfaction. 🙂
Hey Elfwing! Thanks!! Oh I totally get that!! That’s an awesome idea, thanks for the advice!
Hey Daisy! Aw, thanks!! That’s super helpful, especially the part about realizing that he can love <…[Read more]
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ella started the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
The title says it all, folks. I just thought it might be fun to compare what your character says to see if the dialogue truly matches their personality or not.
So I’ll share mine first!
MC is Dylan, who is stubborn, quiet, and strong-willed. A little self-protective. Lmk if his dialogue fits his personality.
1) “Better.” (*rolls eyes…
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ella replied to the topic Overcoming Writer's Burnout : in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
This is ALL too relatable, Lexi! The way I usually (try) to overcome writer’s block/burnout is picking up a different project. I have *counts Scrivener docs* 25 WIPs from the last 2 yrs. Not that they’re perfect. (Or finished.)
This way really helps me to take a step back and pick a project that I’ve been developing pre…[Read more]
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Writers' Corner #1 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Heyyyy!!! Writing’s been going pretty good. I started a new novel and have been loving it probably more than anything I’ve ever written. Life’s been mostly crazy, but I’ve been hanging in there. Oooo Skyward Sword sounds fun!! What is it exactly?
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Kathleen replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 4 months ago
Hey! Nice to meet you! It’s Awesome to have you here in the Kingdom!
How long have you been writing?
Also, congrats on writing you first full length novel! The first one is definitely the hardest. ( At least from my experience).
As for tips on the forum, every week on Friday the forum moderator ( aka me) asks a writing related q…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writing A Christian Fantasy-HELP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Hello there! Sorry its taken me a while to get back to you 😀
There’s been a lot of good answers to your questions already, so I’ll do my best to give my two cents.
Personally, I write in two genres and my approach to putting God into those stories is different. My main genres are historical and fantasy, and my historical stuff…[Read more]
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Not-So-Secret Secret Assassin and Sami Eastwood are now friends 3 years, 4 months ago
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Kathleen replied to the topic What's the weirdest story you've ever written? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 years, 4 months ago
That story is actually amazing. The creativity is unmatched.
Who else write a story where the population is turning into vegetables?
Now I’m curious about how all these characters fit together in one story.
Also, chocolate covered raisins are underrated.
I actually laughed out loud reading…[Read more]
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ella and Mary G are now friends 3 years, 4 months ago
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