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Daisy Torres replied to the topic You get to be one of your characters for a day. Who would you be and why? in the forum Topic of the Week 5 years, 2 months ago
Okay so same with the tragic lives, and this character went through a lot to get there, but probably my girl Catherine, because she’s a cyborg and can shoot guns out of her arm among some other stuff XD Annnd she’s super strong.
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 5 years, 2 months ago
Just came up with this on a whim and thought I’d stick it here!
In the woods.
In the meadow
in the woods
listen softly
to the woods
there’s a widow
crying there
and there’s a son
lying there.
In the meadow
in the woods
Listen closely
to all who told
for silver and gold
sing a melody
in the meadow
in the woods.
Sleep now…[Read more]
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Prologue in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@devastate-lasting I loove the short little stanzas you always add as your signature!! This one is soo pretty. Where did you find it?
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Prologue in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@abigail-m Ooh that makes me so happy to hear!! Thanks!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Prologue in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@devastate-lasting Yay!! Thank you <3
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Daisy Torres started the topic Smoke and Mirrors Prologue in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
Hello! I started a wip and was wondering if anyone would mind critiquing it for me? I’m trying a different style than I normally do and just wanted to see if this would work! Thanks <3
https://docs.google.com/document/d/14Q9H-uDnPKm-adbMKRGzGKxnrTwnwyBJwrmqT9O0Sl0/edit?usp=drivesdk
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Wings First Three Chapters in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@e-k-seaver No problem! Haha yes, I saw them. I kind of got busy lol. I’ll get to them soon! Thanks for telling me!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic First Chapter (Fantasy) Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@writerlexi1216 Aww absolutely!!! I’m glad you like it!!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic First Chapter (Fantasy) Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago

Okay so I knowww I already drew your character, BUT. The first chapter prompted this image BIG-TIME and I couldn’t resist, so heeere you go XD Hope you like it!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Stars (feel free to critique mercilessly XD) in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 years, 2 months ago
@joy-caroline Awwww thank you sooo muchhh!!!! That’s amazing to hear!!!
To be honest, when I first wrote it I was imagining her guardian angel, but that works too XD I love that interpretation as well!!! I kind of wanted to leave it open though. Maybe it was a long-diseased relative come to escort her to heaven, maybe it was an angel, maybe it…[Read more]
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Stars (feel free to critique mercilessly XD) in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 years, 2 months ago
💕💕
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Six O'clock: A Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 years, 2 months ago
@gracie-j It was a pleasure!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Stars (feel free to critique mercilessly XD) in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 years, 2 months ago
@writerlexi1216 *high-fives back* XD
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic First Chapter (Fantasy) Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@writerlexi1216 Of course!!! And yayy!!! Oh I’m sooo glad you decided to anyway! I thoroughly enjoyed it! Haha!! Relatablee. Aww, yay! I’m glad I could 😄
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Stars (feel free to critique mercilessly XD) in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 years, 2 months ago
@nova21 Helloo!! Glad to have you *curtsies* XD Thank you!! 😊
Awww thanks!!
This miiight sound slightly evil, but that makes me happy to hear 🤣
Thanks a ton!! You’re too sweet!!!
Ohhh yes, I like that better!! Thank you!!
Awww here’s a tissueee *hands you an invisible one through the screen so people can’t see XD* I’m sorryy <3<3<3
Haha…[Read more]
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic First Chapter (Fantasy) Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@writerlexi1216 ABSOLUTELY!!! Any time you have anything, I’ll be glad to give it a try!!! I’m serious, for your first novel, that was AMAZING. You write like you’ve been writing for years!! My first novel was literally so trashy that I have disowned it 🤣 You have this whole icy, enchanting, mysterious aesthetic behind everything AND IT’S…[Read more]
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Six O'clock: A Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 years, 2 months ago
WOOOOAHHH that was SOOOO well written!!! Your descriptions were beautifully done!!!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic First Chapter (Fantasy) Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
AHhhhhhh I LOVEEDDDD ITTTT SOOO MUCHHH!!!! I’ll read the next part asap!!!!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Stars (feel free to critique mercilessly XD) in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 years, 2 months ago
@gracie-j THANK YOUU!!!! You made my week!!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Stars (feel free to critique mercilessly XD) in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 years, 2 months ago
@devastate-lasting Awww thank you!!! I’m so happy to hear that!!!!
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