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Daisy Torres started the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 4 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-vbhn_QpzMJ_xlGO1Sb6epYzGJIB0HY55BwPVctj3Dk/edit?usp=drivesdk
@anyone-who-wants-to @nova21 @devastate-lasting @gracie-j
After this I’m planning on putting up one more chapter. Thank you to everyone who stuck with me on this!! I’m so grateful to y’all!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 2 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@gracie-j I will!! It’s up right now, and I’m about to add the next one as well <3
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 3 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
Thank y’all so much, @nova21 @devastate-lasting!! If y’all ever need the favor returned, just let me know <3
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Daisy Torres started the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 3 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1CYzWmClXlg_1aBN5BMwzylGrv0MZUlR2GKWl-7ndUqA/edit?usp=drivesdk
@devastate-lasting @gracie-j @nova21 @abigail-m
Next chapter is ready to be critiqued! This one needs a lot of work because I’m trying to make sure my explanations all make sense lol. Thank you in advance!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 2 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@nova21 Thank youuu!!! That makes me so happy!!!!! I really really appreciate all of your comments!! And absolutely!! Thank you so much for reading!!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 2 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@gracie-j Aaahh thank youu!!! I’m so glad you think so!!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 2 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@devastate-lasting Thank you!! I really love your comments!!
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Daisy Torres posted an update 5 years, 2 months ago
Happy Sunday, everyone!! How is everyone doing?
Just a friendly reminder that even if you think you’re a bad writer, don’t give up. Practice makes perfect <3 And if you're questioning whether or not you should pursue that hobby/career, yes. Yes you should XD The world needs more people willing to pour out ink from their souls.
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Daisy Torres started the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 2 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OfZrcV5g8xwZVQhGqOuR8THhgWdbrshO4f-LjsMFFYI/edit?usp=drivesdk
Here’s the next chapter! Thank you again to everyone helping me <3 I appreciate it more than you’ll know!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 5 years, 2 months ago
@devastate-lasting Thank you so much!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 5 years, 2 months ago
@abigail-m Thank you!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 1 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@abigail-m Oh yay, awesome!! (Same XD You’re fine.) No rush <3 Just make sure you read the prologue if you do! (I mean you might have, but I haven’t checked my notifications yet haha)
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 1 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@gracie-j Aww thank you so much!! That makes my heart happy!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 1 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@devastate-lasting Thank you so much for reading!! I really appreciate all your comments!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 1 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@nova21 Yayy!! Thank you so much!! I’ll try to! I have a few chapters in progress rn, so maybe I’ll get them out before too long!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Prologue in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
<@nova21 Yay!!! Thank you so much for reading!! <3 (Haha understandable!)
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Daisy Torres started the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 1 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
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Smoke and Mirrors
I panicked.
I jolted from the couch, blood rushing in my ears as I held the fork like a weapon. I was too frightened to even notice the small dribble of steaming broth that was running down the side of the bowl and over my hand. I quickly sat the hot bowl on the floor.
Stepping sideways, I kept my eyes trained on the…[Read more]
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 5 years, 2 months ago
@gracie-l Thank youu!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Prologue in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@gracie-j Thank you!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Prologue in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@devastate-lasting Okay, I’ll have to do that! Thanks!
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Awww, THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH, Daisy for this!!!! I REALLY needed to hear that today!!! <33 *infinite hearts*
Aww absolutely!! I’m glad it was able to help you!