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@lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-h @loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings

Everton

“Um, hey…” A boy said to him. “Who are you? Do you know where you are? We don’t either, so… we can’t really help there…” He trailed off before continuing again. “Have you seen any food?”

Ev raised an eyebrow, trying to comprehend everything he just said. He cast…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Wow…Matthew…I really like him! And Lyla is adorable!

@arien @starofthenorth

Ooo..I like your characters! I can totally picture Aedan and Elinor now!

@wilder-w

Editing can be a pain…I think I’m on draft: I forgot how many and I keep making duplicate files so its very confusing…I think anyway lol. But I encourage you, step out of your comfort zone and embrace the wild! God wants us to step out of our comfort zone and relay on Him! (Sorry…got preachy there)…ANYWAY! I love your charries!…

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@lightoverdarkness6

Yes! Awwww. Yeah I don’t think he would love that 🤣🤣. In some ways I can’t wait for my brothers to turn 14, so they can mature a little😂. But also I want them to stay little forever 😩❤️.

Yeah I get that!

Wow!!! Thank you all so much for the tips and ideas!!! As soon as y’all started sharing ideas, my brain was just like gushi…

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@mineralizedwritings

Thanks for the feedback!!

I think I want to keep the POVs as just Ev and Ami, so I’ll have to work on making sure that everyone’s feelings are shown, without using inner dialogue. Thanks for pointing that out. I didn’t notice it before.🙂👍

@everyone

I love how all the subplots are so different from each other!!

@godlyfantasy12

Thx so much!! My lil sis came up with it, actually. I think..

@arien

Aedan’s pic looks so familiar and idk why!! 😂 I just feel like I’ve seen his face before.

@lightoverdarkness6

I loooooove their moodboards!!!

@mineralizedwritings @theloonyone @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 (I think that’s everybody 😅)

Amidala

Amidala woke up with a start. She blinked her eyes open and looked around her. Stone walls? She pushed herself off the cold ground beneath her and tried to take in her surroundings. Was this a dream? Next to her, Everton looked around with the s…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @godlyfantasy12

Btw, 13 is a little long and (i think) 14 is a little shorter.

Chapter 13

Amidala and the rest of the group finally reached the next district. It was dark by now, but not terribly late. Despite that, they were exhausted. They traveled eight miles that day and weren’t used to w…[Read more]

@wilder-w

😉

@wilder-w

Thanks so much!!! 😊

Aw… I’m so glad it meant so much to you!! I try to make my charries as relatable as possible.

And you’ll always be loved by God. ❤️😉

Ev still has yet to learn that. 😄

@lightoverdarkness6

Oooh. Good ideas!

@mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @koshka

Those character romances sound so cute!!! And fun to write! 😉

My charrie romances:

Everton and Amidala—

(Everdala)

Kind of similar to Ara’s and November’s, except that they both like each other and only drop hints, never actually telling each other the blatant truth the whole trilogy! 😆 By the e…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings

Awesome!! I don’t have time now, but I’ll definitely write a RP later this afternoon.🙂

@godlyfantasy12

Those points are really good!

In one of my WIP’s I have romance between a non-Christian girl and a Christian guy that ends up shattering because the girl doesn’t understand why he is so passionate about Jesus. She asks, “Can’t you just keep your religion in the background?” And he has to tell her, “No, that’s not how it works.”