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Esther replied to the topic BETRAYALS, PLOT TWISTS AND AHA MOMENTS, OH MY!! in the forum Plotting 3 years, 5 months ago
Poor November!!! 😭😭 They do forgive him in the end… right?? 😢
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Euodia posted an update 3 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @esther-c @acancello @whalekeeper @awsumfaith @gwyndalf-the-wise @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity
Hello everyone!
Sorry, I haven’t been on much, we lost power for 4 days and now have family in town. I just wanted to let y’all know that I’ll be on again in a few days and will catch up on things…[Read more] -
Esther replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Alright. 🙂
Derek
“Nice to meet you, Derek!” Madeline said enthusiastically. “I’m sure we’ll soon be best friends.”
Derek nodded, keeping his forced smile. He glanced over at the tall man. But maybe you and I won’t be great friends, he thought.
“Oh, that’s just Sam,” Madeline explained. “Don’t mind him. He doesn’t talk anymore. But…[Read more]
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Starshiness replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years, 5 months ago
@elanor Thank you!! Your poem is beautiful as well; what a joy to be inspired by the attributes of our God and create poetry from it in our meditations!
@janellebelovedpig Thanks! 😊 Well kinda! I’ve never had to lose someone close to me or have a friend who had to “fight to live” in that sense, but the prompt this grew from was “give someone a…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years, 5 months ago
@felicity@starshiness@elanor
Those are all amazing! They each are so beautiful and they paint a picture and are meaningful! If you have any more, please share! 🙂
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Allison posted an update 3 years, 5 months ago
@esther-c @kyronthearcanin @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @euodia-vision @mineralizedwritings @landric @booksbyjayna @landric
Hi! Im not going to be on KP to much this week. We are driving cross country and getting to our stops pretty late. Ill be on as often as I can, but it might take me a while to reply!-
Alrighty! Have fun! 🙂
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Alright! 🙂 Hope you have fun!! 😀
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Enjoy your trip!
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How was your trip?
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Hi! I’m soooooooo sorry that it took me so long to respond. We have no internet at our new house and we are getting it in a bit longer than a week. KP doesn’t work very well on my phone at all, so I’ll try to be on in a week! I miss you all!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
@keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @felicity @esther-c @janellebelovedpig @awsumfaith @anyone
Here’s the next section on Jade. It’s sort of small.
Jade wrapped her cloak tighter around herself, shivering in the bitter wind. The trip to Brekya would be a long one, but it seemed necessary. Dragon scouts were there, dragons that had used some kind of ma…[Read more]
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Elanor replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years, 5 months ago
@felicity I loved that!! (Ahh why do all the best poems come to mind while you’re in the very midst of doing something?!)
@starshiness I love yours tooo!! 💕
This is my most recent one to complete (I’ve started and not finished 5 in the last two weeks due to poet writer’s block🤦🏻♀️)
My Impossible
March 21st, 2023
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Elanor replied to the topic Poem Advice on Punctuation in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
I am terrible at punctuation and always let my bestie go to town on my poems because she’s the punctuation queen.
But I had to pop on and say that’s a beautiful poem.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@acancello @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings @starshiness @godlyfantasy12 @esther-c
Idk how often we’re circling back, but here:
The girl’s hands flew to her hips and she skewered me with her glare. “Why do you, a complete stranger, need to know my business? Isn’t that kind of nosy?”
I shrugged. “Maybe. Let’s just start with your name, t…[Read more]
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Starshiness replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years, 5 months ago
@acancello I do!! Poetry is such a fun genre to explore, not to mention it’s satisfying to write something short you can actually finish… unlike my novel WIP… 😂 Here’s one of my really short poems where I experimented with spacing and condensation of thought through metaphor.
Dandelions
Embodiment of
Dreams
S c a t t e r e d
With…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
I like the wings! And the webbed hands are cool.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Somewhat, I guess. At first I wasn’t sure who would be who, so it kind of just happened. But the main idea of the shifter thing is not like a shape-shifter, but of her ability to shift reality in someone’s mind. Her eyes change when she’s doing it, making them appear more dragon-like, at least in color.
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Starshiness replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Ooo how fun!! Mind if I join 👀
(I vote for a boy charrie too btw)
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I drop my gaze from hers. “I, um… well… I wanted to know your secret.”
She pushed her face closer to mine, her sea-green eyes staring at me suspiciously. “How did you know I had a secret?”
I shrug. “‘Cause you acted like it.”
Judging by the way she scrunched her…[Read more]
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Starshiness replied to the topic Poem Advice on Punctuation in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
@janellebelovedpig Helloooo! *waves* It’s a pleasure to meet you and read this gorgeous work of poetry! I love the use of slant rhyme, it’s so perfect for this piece; it sounds like a literal psalm from the Bible! Oo you’re writing an allegory?? Coolio, me too!!
As for a few words on poetry punctuation, I would say that it’s not always necessary…[Read more]
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Starshiness replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
@esther-c Of course, I’m glad I could say something useful!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
He sounds cool!!!
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Esther replied to the topic Poem Advice on Punctuation in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
Thanks!!! 😄😊
Oh ok, that’s a really good point. That’s a really good idea. Thanks for the help! 😀
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Bravo! 😅🤣
Idk how often we’re supposed to write, but here’s Eclipse again.
Eclipse walked down the hallway, focusing on the flames in the torches. If he was judging them right, he should be going straight to the… Well, in one direction. He wasn’t sure which.
Azar’s excitement was making Eclipse nervous. Stop…[Read more]
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I’m glad you’ve gotten power back. That must’ve not been fun. 😬 We’ve been having lots of rain/storms in our area, and today we have a tornado watch, sooo yep. Some bad weather.
Anyway… XD
Ok! Talk to ya later!! 😄
Me toooooo! It was horrible. XD We were watching a foster boy with a lot of energy during the power outage and then 4 little cousins all 8 and under were hear as well so it was chaos! But yes, the weather has been crazyyyyyyyy
Lol, XD. I TOTALLY understand. Almost all of my cousins on my Dad’s side of the family are younger than me; and we had all of my Dad’s side over at my grandparents house for Christmas last year. That’s like 30-something people… so… yeah, I can understand the chaos. 😬🤣
Ooof yeah, on my mom’s side, I have four older cousins and two ones that are barely younger but then my dad’s side is all VERY younger. 😅
Thanks Freedom! Amen to that, the weather has been so crazy!
Where in the US do you live? Cuz where I’m at it’s gonna be 80!!!!!!!
AGREED! Goodness, yes, it’s weird because they’re family and you want to be with them but then they’re also crazy and tiring. 😅😂