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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Yeah, I didn’t get an email for yours either. But then again, KP has been kind of weird lately XD
Thanks so much!!! I was actually kind of worried about this chapter, so that’s awesome!
Lol I think cliffhangers are my way of forcing myself to write the next chapter, because even I want to know what happens next. XD the motivation of…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Once Upon A Time My Story Began in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 5 months ago
Oooh the fairy tales made modern one looks cool, too… I love twists on fairy tales, but I’ve never tried them myself.
(I’ll admit, I’ve never read any Shakespeare, but the book about Mary looks cool too 🙂)
*after stalking XD* From what I’ve seen of your writing, I bet your poetry is/would be great! I don’t know…[Read more]
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Starshiness replied to the topic Raven's Quest, I'M FINALLY SHARING IT in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
@keilah-h Awesome, thx! Yea no worries, take your time, there’s a lot there and more to come still lol.
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Starshiness replied to the topic Raven's Quest, I'M FINALLY SHARING IT in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 XDXD I meant there’s worse to come lolllll
I died laughingggg lolll it was just your choice of using that term to avoid saying his name that for some reason was so funny to me XDXD
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Starshiness replied to the topic Raven's Quest, I'M FINALLY SHARING IT in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Y’all…. I feel like this is just a representation of my success rates with editing… right after I post this chapter I decide to overhaul a section of it and make it flow so much better, but ofc it’s only AFTER I’ve posted this XD
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Starshiness replied to the topic Raven's Quest, I'M FINALLY SHARING IT in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
@acancello Thank you so much!! <3
@kyronthearcanin Ahhhh thank youuuuu! Really!! I’m so glad, I know it gets choppy in some later chapters and it’s so hard to properly evaluate your own writing when you’ve seen it and read it over so many times. Ooh ok ok I won’t spill the beans 🤫🤐
@freedomwriter76 OMW REALLY ALREADY?!?!!! Girl you ain’t seen…[Read more]
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Euodia replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
oooooo noice! we have Wii Sports, and a handful of other things I don’t remember. 😆
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Euodia replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
AW RIDLEYYYYYYY 😭😭😭 Poor babyyyyyyy
@freedomwriter76 you wanna rp for the two bois and ridley joining them?
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Euodia replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
Gosh y’all, this is hilarious. 😂
And @godlyfantasy12 I don’t think so… OH! I haven’t had Tirion enter the school day yet, do you (or anyone) have someone in the 17-19 age kids who isn’t interacting with anyone rn?
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Esther replied to the topic WIP Idea?? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
I love this story idea!! 😄
I don’t think I really have any suggestions at the moment. 🙃
I would imagine Kuyper with extra dirty blond hair, blue (or hazel) eyes, a little taller than most girls her age, and thinner too.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Raven's Quest, I'M FINALLY SHARING IT in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Wow, your writing is AWESOME! The idea is really cool, and I love the names! I thought the dialogue was great, actually. And I do not know who was getting beat up in the first part, so please don’t tell me XD
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Allison replied to the topic Raven's Quest, I'M FINALLY SHARING IT in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Wow! I love it!!! It is so realistic and just pulls you in!
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Starshiness posted an update 3 years, 5 months ago
YALLLLLLLL CHAPTER ONE OF RAVEN’S QUEST IS UP!!!!!! I’d love if you’d give it a read and lmk what you think <3
@euodia-vision @freedomwriter76 @acancello @kyronthearcanin @awsumfaith @landric @keilah-h @janellebelovedpig
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Starshiness replied to the topic Raven's Quest, I'M FINALLY SHARING IT in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 😭😭😭 YES WE DO, poor boy gets beat on way too much *sob*
@esther-c Thank you!!! <3
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Starshiness replied to the topic Once Upon A Time My Story Began in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 5 months ago
@crocheter12 STOP THAT’S IMPRESSIVE!!!
Like seriously, I have so much respect for the people who just go ahead and get their books/stories published while I’m over here underestimating myself and rewriting and never being satisfied with my edits and good gracious, the cycle never ends XD. I am entertaining the idea of compiling and publishing a…[Read more]
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Euodia replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
*hides under a rock*
I meannnn, I played Mario Cart once with a friend but he destroyed me so it wasn’t an enjoyable experience. I kept falling off of the mushrooms. 😂 My fam doesn’t do videogames, we just got a Wii last year.
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Euodia replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 okay! @godlyfantasy12 I was RPing right when you messaged 😆 how’d you know?
Erebus
Ridley’s pushback hadn’t changed Erebus’s initial assessment of the boy.
He was still lost, scared, and in need of… something.
He and Erich couldn’t force their help onto him.
Force never worked out for him anyway. It just led to pain and confu…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Hey, it's been a while. ~ Chat Space in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Welcome back!! I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, homeschooled, God-loving, fiction-writing, teen girl!!
(I really have to shorten my introduction… 🤔😂)
I don’t have a blog, but I’ve considered starting one. 🙂
Oooh, I like this question. What’s my WIP about… Well, it’s a trilogy called the Endox…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Raven's Quest, I'M FINALLY SHARING IT in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Ahh, I love it!! 😆
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Euodia replied to the topic Once Upon A Time My Story Began in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 5 months ago
Hello! Welcome to KP! (are you on Writer’s Vision, cuz I think I’ve seen you around on there.)
I’m euodia.vision (you can call me Euodia, Vision, EV, whatever you like)! I’m a Christian homeschooled junior in high school who loves to read and write fantasy. I make my home in the world of Tolkien and Middle-earth, but I enjoy the occasional vis…[Read more]
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Ooooh, cool! I’m there!
Yayyy tyyy
Cool!! Where is it?
Under Novel Critique Requests, the most recent topic created 😁
Awesome! I saw it.
Haven’t gotten to read it yet but I will when I can!
👍🏽💕
Ahhhhh so exciting! Where would I find it?
Wait, just saw your reply to someone else…
Whoohoo! I just read it! Very nice. I’m excited to follow the journey!