Kingdom Pen | Ingrid | Mentions https://kingdompen.org/members/ingridrd/activity/mentions/ Activity feed mentioning Ingrid. Wed, 22 Apr 2026 18:47:41 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en-US 30 hourly 2 62f95c90b6e6858a661872ddee8b1364 R.M. Archer started the topic Looking for Worldbuilding Guest Authors in the forum Non-Fiction https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/looking-for-worldbuilding-guest-authors/ Wed, 20 Jan 2021 03:14:41 -0500 Hi! I’m looking for a few writers who would be willing to write about developing fictional architecture, fashion, cuisine, and language (respectively). I’m prepping blog posts for a section of this year that I’ll likely be out-of-town and I’m finding that I have a lot of posts ideas for the intangible aspects of worldbuilding but I’m not so good…[Read more]

]]> dc03a0139ba439807e7e3f6abf57a494 Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-19/#post-75361 Fri, 20 Jul 2018 00:21:58 -0400 @dekreel @rochellaine @seekjustice @jenwriter17 @ingridrd Anyone writing or something? I’m doing some beta reading and then I’ll be writing.

]]> 9fbebd4b406ae605c5ac64f53194dc64 Joy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/41/#post-75313 Wed, 18 Jul 2018 16:55:10 -0400 @ingridrd  I love all five of those!! (the four siblings and Nicole’s character)

]]> f3922d4c321cbd46a387e2d33c823612 Emily D posted an update: @dragon-snapper @perfectfifths @dekreel @jenwriter17 @ingridrd […] https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/81898/ Thu, 28 Jun 2018 12:27:09 -0400 @dragon-snapper @perfectfifths @dekreel @jenwriter17 @ingridrd @rolena-hatfield @livgiordano @mariposa @clairec @jayniecatgirl08

Hello girls!

I’m SO SORRY…

I haven’t been on here in like FOREVER. Please forgive me. I wanted to let you know that I’ll be moving…just next door to Story Embers. Hope to see yas over there!

]]> 15 37be0d1b3dcaa077804cf1539b61a803 Joy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/40/#post-74340 Sun, 17 Jun 2018 19:01:56 -0400 @jenwriter17  @ariella-newheart  @gabbyj  @ingridrd  @notawriter  @dragon-snapper  @anyone-willing

I’ve got two characters for you guys!

  1. Korey. Sixteen years old. He has tanned skin, thick brown hair, brown eyes… and I’ll leave the outfit for you guys to play with. He comes from a fantasy-ish world, I think. (He’s still in the begin…

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]]> 5f41dec8d869cc88ca3f64b59fd605d6 Jenna Terese replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/39/#post-74125 Mon, 11 Jun 2018 17:37:49 -0400 @dekreel @dragon-snapper @ingridrd @notawriter @any artist peoples

Hi all! I need a character drawn and I’d love to draw one of yours in exchange.

It’s for my character Kaylee Dozier. She’s 17, an introvert, likes gymnastics, and vintage comics. She has dark brown type 3a-3b curly hair (I like to be specific, you can find a hair type chart…[Read more]

]]> dd606289e9215bfa6da27de76a0e1df2 Leumeister replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/39/#post-73639 Sat, 02 Jun 2018 14:57:47 -0400 @ingridrd

Nice! Interesting art style… Not sure it fits how I envisage the characters, but you did a great job! ^_^ Thank you. 🙂

Echo looks pretty nice somewhat shabby, and yeah, sorry for not specifying an age. She’s a mid-teen.

]]> f3fbf36d7df6b11da8d88ccd56f3423f Leumeister replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/39/#post-73595 Fri, 01 Jun 2018 03:32:00 -0400 @ingridrd

Okay, that’s fine. ^_^ I’m glad someone has found them, at any rate. 🙂

]]> c882e6b415857a656106268555e57ea7 NC Stokes posted an update: @ingridrd Hello! I finished reading Substitute Wednesday, but […] https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/80539/ Sat, 26 May 2018 18:33:46 -0400 @ingridrd Hello! I finished reading Substitute Wednesday, but I’m just now giving you the critiques. Oops. Because I can’t make comments, I just typed up my critiques. Please forgive me if I sound harsh. I tried to critique it like a book I didn’t know the author of and didn’t know anything about.

Pg 22 –waist not waste
Pg 24 –up to you if yo…[Read more]

]]> 2 4411ba801fec0552d0c94fd8667d9e08 Jenna Terese started the topic Daeus' Ambassadors in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/daeus-ambassadors/ Sat, 26 May 2018 16:50:40 -0400 did anyone else get the email from Daeus about being his ambassador to earn points for his show don’t tell course? Well if you did and you signed up to be an ambassador, then I thought we could share our personalized links here to help each other earn points by people using the link to get a free copy of Daeus’ book. And if you haven’t signed up…[Read more]

]]> cd67e4037f61eac54d8cb1cc730ba5d3 Alia started the topic Fairytale Reteling in the forum Novel Idea Critiques http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/fairytale-reteling/ Wed, 23 May 2018 19:04:57 -0400 Okay, so I have this idea that I have been working on for a while. Basically its that what if Rumplestilkin gave the queen his name because he was working for Gothel and didn’t want to give her the baby. Then Gothel went in and kidnapped the child herself so when when Rumple found out (2 years later) he kidnapped her again to return her but he…[Read more]

]]> d48ea7c6ba831d30631653ecaa8f6b97 Jenna Terese replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/prayer-requests-2-2/page/45/#post-73029 Wed, 23 May 2018 18:43:12 -0400 So, this is a problem I’ve been dealing with off and on for the past several years. Basically, I’m looking in the mirror and feeling disappointed. As some of you may know, I have curly hair. I’ve grown to love it, but there are days when I just don’t know what to do with it. It knots, it frizzes, it doesn’t lay right and it’s so hard to care for.…[Read more]

]]> 8968eeefd24c7e6f0412beb04fdae012 Jenna Terese replied to the topic My Superhero WIP in the forum Novel Idea Critiques http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-superhero-wip/#post-72994 Wed, 23 May 2018 15:16:40 -0400 Aaaaand forgot to tag people 😛 @rochellaine @kaya-young @alia @ariel-ashira @seekjustice @catwing @daughteroftheking @claire-c @skredder @ingridrd

]]> dbb51adbc3a8cafb2dd2e0fc90237e7b Kaya Young started the topic Poetry in general in the forum Poetry http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/poetry-in-general/ Tue, 22 May 2018 02:25:09 -0400 I’ve been reading more poetry lately, and wondered what you all thought.

So…

What are your favorite poems?

What is your best advice for writing poetry?

Has anyone tried blackout poetry?

Feel free to share any poetry you have written!

@ingridrd @alia @rochellaine @ariella-newheart @jenwriter17 @ariel-ashira @daughteroftheking

]]> 83502bb7e1a033a59fc04c912dedb28c NC Stokes replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wanted-alpha-readers/page/3/#post-72887 Sat, 19 May 2018 22:44:42 -0400 @ingridrd Ok, this is the part where I’m honest and admit I’m behind the times. Until today, I didn’t notice that you had posted the chapters after 1 and 2. Soooo, I have some reading to catch up on. I’ll get that done by Wednesday.

]]> 8dff62c010a110ffe365536e69c89c56 Kaya Young replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wanted-alpha-readers/page/3/#post-72869 Sat, 19 May 2018 12:45:23 -0400 @ingridrd  But I liked James? What do you mean he was going to assassinate her?!?

 

So those were my first thoughts… Here’s my answers to your questions. 🙂

1. I loved Jaclyn, and Ana was also intriguing to me.

2. No, not at all!

3. Jaclyn is very real and relatable, the only character I had a harder time relating to was Randal.

4.…[Read more]

]]> b308e278efd5cb1343902d715ee67553 Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-17/page/4/#post-72843 Fri, 18 May 2018 21:07:52 -0400 @jenwriter17, That is amazing!

TIL WE’RE OLD AND GREY

@rochellaine, @ariel-ashira, @kaya-young, @ingridrd, @skredder, @daughteroftheking, Jen

anyone writing?

]]> 957e9473c8af5751121542907c5b9cc3 Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-17/page/4/#post-72839 Fri, 18 May 2018 19:37:16 -0400 Guys…I can’t believe I actually did this 😛

https://www.canva.com/design/DAC4G5IHD20/share?role=EDITOR&token=uygcR_6YaQpMMFs6WkmDpw&utm_content=DAC4G5IHD20&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link&utm_source=sharebutton

@seekjustice @rochellaine @ariel-ashira @alia @kaya-young @ingridrd @skredder @daughteroftheking @everyone

If you agree with…[Read more]

]]> e793b0a9c195805ab798f35a04d3b5cd Jenna Terese replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wanted-alpha-readers/page/2/#post-72837 Fri, 18 May 2018 17:42:16 -0400 @ingridrd Well I copied Seekjustice’s idea of asking questions at the end, so really you’re copying her 😛

my answers:

1. Jaclyn was definitely my favorite! She’s just so spunky and relatable and, well I just lover ‘er! 😉 William was also adorable.

2. it’s been a while since I finished it, but from what I can remember, no unnecessary or…[Read more]

]]> ed9883bc03e38a003786c1e4013a79a0 Jenna Terese replied to the topic I Need Help with My American Character in the forum Characters http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/i-need-help-with-my-american-character/page/2/#post-72836 Fri, 18 May 2018 17:32:09 -0400 @ingridrd Oh yes this helps a lot! I have some more ideas of places I can go with my family 🙂 thanks so much! I have an obsession with British accents too, most accents for that matter 😛

]]> 897a2f018877fc3d098dfda95741d8eb Jenna Terese replied to the topic I Need Help with My American Character in the forum Characters http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/i-need-help-with-my-american-character/page/2/#post-72810 Thu, 17 May 2018 20:15:21 -0400 @ingridrd I just read your post that you said YOU WENT TO ENGLAND!!!! Oh. My. Goodness. I want to go soooo bad! *tries not to bombard you with questions*

*fails*

what was it like compared to America? how long was the flight? what did you do there? any advice for my family (we’d like to go next year 😀 )? did you end up watching any soccer there?

]]> a3da5ccbd4a4be591a21e3876c9912ee Jenna Terese replied to the topic Alpha/Beta Readers for My Dystopian WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/alpha-beta-readers-for-my-dystopian-wip/page/7/#post-72746 Wed, 16 May 2018 23:07:06 -0400 @warrenluther04 @seekjustice @ingridrd @skredder @ariel-ashira @sarah-anson @anyone else I missed

I forgot to ask one last thing: do you have any title ideas? I really like one or two word titles, so I don’t really like the one it has now. Any and all ideas would be appreciated 🙂

]]> b9007914c0d7bb1bb1a8f60fc1367eb4 Jenna Terese replied to the topic Alpha/Beta Readers for My Dystopian WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/alpha-beta-readers-for-my-dystopian-wip/page/7/#post-72721 Wed, 16 May 2018 17:08:44 -0400 @ariel-ashira here we are. i hope it works (*gasps* oh you changed your profile pic :D…[Read more]

]]> 46d5d538cf6c1245e308e2125a752187 Jenna Terese replied to the topic Alpha/Beta Readers for My Dystopian WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/alpha-beta-readers-for-my-dystopian-wip/page/6/#post-72612 Tue, 15 May 2018 21:00:17 -0400 @warrenluther04 @ariel-ashira @skredder @ingridrd @sarah-anson @seekjustice @whoever else I missed Here’s the questions now that y’all have finished reading my book. Thank you all so very much! Your comments always make me so happy and help me to improve. <3 I’m sorry if I’m posting this and not everyone has finished it yet; I’ve lost track of w…[Read more]

]]> 8fbcbeb3931379b5bb922ee8fc4eb0d6 NC Stokes replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-fiction-inspired-typography-art-2/page/3/#post-72593 Tue, 15 May 2018 04:00:48 -0400 @ingridrd @skredder Thank y’all!

]]> a1a1c6bcd77e451ff37be1ea3a05bcff Kaya Young replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-name-exchange/page/11/#post-72564 Tue, 15 May 2018 01:32:29 -0400 @ingridrd  Thanks! Lyra is a really cool name!

]]> ba5f49d3a4ad57d436934f4d6fda42ba Kaya Young replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wanted-alpha-readers/page/2/#post-72563 Tue, 15 May 2018 01:20:15 -0400 @ingridrd  I have not finished yet, but plan on reading more as soon as possible. 🙂

 

]]> 287a20d47370fbe9f9642c3073cc7811 NC Stokes replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wanted-alpha-readers/page/2/#post-72534 Mon, 14 May 2018 16:00:51 -0400 @ingridrd No, not annoying at all! I did finish reading. The thing is, I can’t comment on the actual document. Not any fault of how the doc is set up, just stuff on my end. Sorry about that.
I enjoyed the chapters. If they were from a book I noticed at the library, I would definitely check it out and keep reading! I don’t have any suggestions.

]]> eed02b5af26ef12498a12ac4326e430c WarrenLuther04 posted an update: GUYS! I'M PUBLISHED! /The Trials of Ualair Fencaryn/ is […] https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/79690/ Sun, 13 May 2018 15:35:43 -0400 GUYS! I’M PUBLISHED!

/The Trials of Ualair Fencaryn/ is available in the collection of short stories, titled /Transmogrified Tales/. It is available on Lulu, which will hopefully be accessible on…[Read more]

]]> 1 2df28dd5c27f63161295ade031964c72 Jenna Terese replied to the topic Alpha/Beta Readers for My Dystopian WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/alpha-beta-readers-for-my-dystopian-wip/page/6/#post-72491 Sun, 13 May 2018 02:07:35 -0400 @skredder @ingridrd @seekjustice @sarah-anson @warrenluther04 Alrighty everybody, this is the last chapter!!!! *sobs*

I’m not sure if the ending is quite right, so be sure to let me know what y’all think. 😉 When you’re finished reading it, I have some questions I’d like to ask you all if you don’t mind.…[Read more]

]]> 918552649e12da79291051225eeb9df1 Kaya Young replied to the topic Create-a-story in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/create-a-story/page/8/#post-72477 Sat, 12 May 2018 23:30:33 -0400 @ingridrd  @bekreations  @alia   @ariel-ashira   @rochellaine

Does anyone want to continue?

]]> 5fbdcb9b42a28367041c441fef555094 Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-16/page/47/#post-72461 Sat, 12 May 2018 21:29:01 -0400 @alia Surprise! I can be on for a teensy bit 😀

@rochellaine @seekjustice @skredder @ingridrd @kaya-young

]]> 7152c3dafa20a613bb25fadd0cb3b012 Kaya Young replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-name-exchange/page/10/#post-72434 Sat, 12 May 2018 14:21:28 -0400 @ingridrd  @ariella-newheart   @dekreel  @jenwriter

@rochellaine  (I know you don’t write fantasy but you have good name suggestions 🙂 )

I need short, sweet fantasy names for a girl. Thanks in advance!

]]> 3a26df8929a417d243505adcfd1c95ff Jenna Terese replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-fiction-inspired-typography-art-2/page/2/#post-72378 Fri, 11 May 2018 16:32:54 -0400 @skredder ooh that’s awesome!!! It’s so cool to see collages for the book I’m reading 😉

@ingridrd your collage looks awesome too! 😀

]]> 0dd9d99b77fb774cd922aa0a785739e2 Skredder replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-fiction-inspired-typography-art-2/page/2/#post-72375 Fri, 11 May 2018 15:01:37 -0400 @ingridrd Thanks. 🙂 Yours are pretty cool! 😀

]]> c9bdb50a73e62dabe5ba9d40ec95864b Jenna Terese replied to the topic Alpha/Beta Readers for My Dystopian WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/alpha-beta-readers-for-my-dystopian-wip/page/6/#post-72261 Wed, 09 May 2018 23:30:26 -0400 @seekjustice @skredder @sarah-anson @ingridrd Here’s chapter 9 everyone! 😀

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jeGlitQ4YGIDWcHT4CY0aSZAXpak0LnPmJq8jq6eZNI/edit

]]> 17df188105a4a946bb48b2bf2d379e29 Alia replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/38/#post-72253 Wed, 09 May 2018 21:20:21 -0400 @ingridrd, I love them. thank you. Its funny, even though they aren’t related I always pictured them as being similar in looks, and you got that

]]> 3ef50653b1e1121c8c8ae5f00901c782 The fledgling Artist replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/38/#post-72249 Wed, 09 May 2018 19:05:19 -0400 @ingridrd Aww. I like him already. *hugs Randal*

]]> f1cddb926184bd80e0f699274cdda366 The fledgling Artist replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/38/#post-72236 Wed, 09 May 2018 16:16:17 -0400 @ingridrd Thanks! I’m glad you like it. 😀 What kind of story is Randal from? (if you don’t mind me asking)

]]> 5f000c58736a940f7e66c9200f3229f2 Jenna Terese replied to the topic Alpha/Beta Readers for My Dystopian WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/alpha-beta-readers-for-my-dystopian-wip/page/6/#post-72229 Wed, 09 May 2018 15:30:27 -0400 @ingridrd I am SO GLAD you like it! I’ll try to post the next chapter soon, I’m still writing it. 🙂

]]> ca5c5c84bbca06f8005fe9bea972a1a8 The fledgling Artist replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/38/#post-72171 Tue, 08 May 2018 22:15:07 -0400 @ingridrd


Sorry for the long wait~! (I hate making people wait on me 🙁 ) As I said I was in an art slump..block..uh thing. I think i’m out of it for not though as I had a lot of fun in my sketchbook today. And thus Randal was born-I mean drawn. 🙂 Thanks for being so patent with me!

]]> 9960d28b1e1802bbea7012a022e1ad64 The fledgling Artist replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/38/#post-72170 Tue, 08 May 2018 22:06:15 -0400 @ingridrd Actually I just finished it! 🙂 Gimme a sec so I can upload the picture.

]]> ec7a193e9170b5b1b178571110f42bd4 NC Stokes replied to the topic Baby's First Story in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/babys-first-story/page/4/#post-72163 Tue, 08 May 2018 21:02:49 -0400 @ingridrd @jenwriter17 Thank you! Glad ya’ll enjoyed my debut novel. XD

]]> bfc10175e41f903f34a42cd954b0591f Ariel Ashira replied to the topic I Need Help with My American Character in the forum Characters http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/i-need-help-with-my-american-character/page/2/#post-72099 Mon, 07 May 2018 02:38:07 -0400 @ingridrd 😀 😀 oh, that is so funny!  Yeah, I dont think of myself having an accent, but I guess everyone has some sort of accent.

]]> 97a70a9eab1b718eeba158f41bdc6a4e SeekJustice replied to the topic I Need Help with My American Character in the forum Characters http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/i-need-help-with-my-american-character/page/2/#post-72089 Sun, 06 May 2018 07:22:49 -0400 @ariel-ashira

Everything 🙂 we make fun of your accents and politicians and weird things like ranches.

But I wouldn’t worry because we make fun of all those things (except the ranches) for every country, including our own.

I just made an account on Story Embers but I haven’t introduced myself yet.

@ingridrd just out of curiosity, are you…[Read more]

]]> 0bcb942623f952a538b1bb92d1944d67 NC Stokes replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wanted-alpha-readers/page/2/#post-72088 Sun, 06 May 2018 04:52:42 -0400 @ingridrd *falls in through the ceiling* *picks self up with dignity and brushes off cape*. K, so I just wanted to let you know I’m reading it, even if I’m not done yet. 😛

]]> 2505f862c59d0704c72182477a03c12f Ariel Ashira replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wanted-alpha-readers/page/2/#post-72052 Fri, 04 May 2018 23:06:11 -0400 @ingridrd I love it!  I left some picky comments, but overall it is just amazing!!!

]]> 9f6a281f65a330185cab8a5bf9b5b160 Kaya Young replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wanted-alpha-readers/page/2/#post-72036 Fri, 04 May 2018 13:42:47 -0400 @ingridrd  *Screams with pure joy*  🙂 🙂 🙂

I love the castle part!!!! Like where she walks into the room and it like materializes? That is my favorite part thus far!

It would be amazing and maybe scary to look into your imagination…

]]> 6cbe9db851b22468cd2231f97dd9d022 Jenna Terese replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/prayer-requests-2-2/page/42/#post-72002 Thu, 03 May 2018 22:25:44 -0400 @ingridrd @kaya-young Thank you both. <3 <3

]]> 6eaa5751bb6a3ad253810fd4d682c2a1 Ariella Newheart replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wanted-alpha-readers/page/2/#post-71998 Thu, 03 May 2018 22:16:19 -0400 @ingridrd So sorry for the late response! I have read through and critiqued chapters 1-2 and I’ll move on to 3-4 soon. 😀 The story is very intriguing. 😉

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