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Chapter 2, part two

Evening came, leaving the Banorian landscape lit by flickering torches under a deep blue sky. The trees still rippled in the wind, but they were now just dark shadows.

Nahim walked away from where he had left Mandin, the Ward in the annual meeting at the…

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@hybridlore @freedomwriter76

It’s not as scary as you may think, lol! I’m a girl who tends to hide her emotions/stuff away her emotions, so I do understand men more in that vein. But I think it’s also important to remember that not all men are those tough guys that stuff everything away, have a stiff upper lip, and all those other stere…

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@hybridlore

Yeah, I get it now! It’s simply the power of resistance and the fact that none of the other Paynes know that they’re being lied to. So Sef will have to confront her lies in a more obvious way than most books.

Yep! Exactly.

That makes sense! And yeah, definitely don’t feel like you have to take any of my advice… It’s totally up to you…

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@scoutfinch180 I know I haven’t replyed yet, but i got a idea and am trying to run with it, plus I’ve been sick. @whalekeeper @grcr @jonas @hybridlore

Chapter 2: Nahim, the Last Nayhelm

the first part

 “Nahim. Nahim!”

Mandin waved his large hand in front of his 19-year-old friend’s hidden face. “Nahim, what’s up?”

Nahim seemed to be the only…

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@hybridlore

HEYYYYYYYY

thats a really good question!!!!!

I’ve never thought about it, but all of my characters, while not identical, are very similar in thinking and in character.

hair colors I choose tend to vary. I always make it a color I would love to have so it’s usually brown or ginger and occasionally blonde.
And I just realized tha…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Ehh… well they’re human… just in a different high tech country…😅

@hybridlore

🙂 Im not sure how else to describe it. Gold seems to fits it perfectly. Neither blond or brown.

@hybridlore

Hey, awesome! We’re twins xD

lol yeah!!

That’s really interesting! I don’t know if I’ve honestly tried to write from the perspectives of extroverted characters before … I guess I struggle with character development a little, so my voice tends to just cross stories but not become personalized for the character, which I know isn’t exc…

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@hybridlore

I try to write a ton of different characters. Mainly all are extroverted like me. My main character in my current WIP though, is an introvert  and I thought it would be a slight challenge and fun to do a different personality than my own. I have another character (as a few of you know) Hugo, he is slightly bad, but still good. I  b…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Oh, interesting topic!!

Personality-wise, my characters have all sorts of different traits… I’m an INTP, but I try to make my characters different myself, and–interestingly–I have a ton of extroverted characters. The traits they hold kinda depend on their inspiration and their look… so… idk… I think I’ve done a whole ton of…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Off the top of my head, I can only think of two things that are particularly common amongst my characters:

1. Most are introverted. I can barely think of any who are extroverts, although there are some I’m not sure about.
2. Most are in the range of 17 – 30. I have barely any younger than that, and a significant lower amount of older ones.

@hybridlore

Yeah XDXD Although I’ve had alien-like people with blue hair, too lol

Oh definitely, I see it all the time. I think that’s why it bothers me so much XD

@hybridlore

Yeah, haha, she was a runaway. Her blue hair made her stand out. But I wrote that a long time ago, and the style is terrible XD

And trust me, I struggle with plenty of other things. For one, not using the same words over and over lol.

@hybridlore

oooh *subscribes*

@anyone

I often pick Black hair, even though my hair is a light brown that bleaches naturally to a dirty blond in the summer. I also often pick men as my main charres, and they’re often in the ages between 15 and 25. They’re usually warriors cuz that’s me. All of them have some secret in their backstory that they…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Okay, so this is sort of like a spiritual battle? Sef can defeat the Pythonos because she is willing to stand up to their lies. Lilitu is a Payne too, though, right? The reason Sef is the only one who can defeat them is because she has believed their lies and he hasn’t?

Essentially, yes, and…no. It’s hard to explain the thoughts i…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Hello! Nice to meet you! Yay! XD

i love sci fi!!!! That’s so cool!!

Im excited to get to know you more too!
Thank you! 😊

Oh

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@hybridlore

I feel like the ending is very abrupt, almost. I know it’s meant to be a cliffhanger but it sort of feels like you cut the ending off. Then again, some books are like this so as long as there’s a second book I don’t think it’s a big problem.

I agree, the ending is abrupt, but I’m not sure how to make it any less so. It just kinda m…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I agree with @hybridlore (although I only skimmed it), the end seems abrupt. It almost feels like you’re stopping before the climax and resolution. Otherwise, looks good!