hybridlore

@hybridlore @grcr

Thanks!!

@savannah_grace2009 @euodia-vision

Sooo…what’s the big secret about Amir’s parents?

Hehe… Ok. So it’s a working idea, and it may change eventually as I flesh out the story more, but basically his parents are double agents. They actually work for the shah and are 100% loyal to him. But as part of that work, they pret…[Read more]

@hybridlore

YAY! So excited for you!!! It looks great!!

@hybridlore

Aw, thanks!

@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore

Oh no! 😢 Awh, she will be missed.

@hybridlore

True, I didn’t think about a name generator. Maybe I’ll have to try that.

This is the link to my blog, as is it right now: https://nessawrites04.wordpress.com/

@hybridlore

I love your blog! Also the name is catchy… I literally spent forever trying to come up with a good name for mine and couldn’t, so I just went with my name thinking maybe I can change it later if I figure something out. I’m terrible at coming up with good titles for things!

@acancello

WordPress is also a good blogging site. It’s…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Oh, yes I did. After discussing some things with my brother, I decided I’m going to write about one of my warrior teams. Thanks for offering, though! 😄

@hybridlore

I love your blog! I like the whole thing and dont have anything I dont like about it, its all working fine! I do have some questions about Wix though. right now, I’m using blogger and dont really like it. I cant have a follow button or email subscription buttons or anything I need, Wix has that right? And on the creating the blog…[Read more]

@hybridlore @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @kyronthearcanin @savannah_grace2009 @kathleenramm @spinner4him @lightoverdarkness6

(Uhhh, has anyone noticed that @sarafini has vanished? All her past posts say anonymous now… Did she just leave?)

Ok, here’s the third chapter! It may be the last I post of it for a while if at all, but we’ll…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Yep… it wasn’t the only time we found ‘once-alive-things’ in his pockets. XD Thank goodness he doesn’t do such things anymore. We’re more likely to find nails, screws, or rocks in his pockets now.

@euodia-vision @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @rae @spinner4him @smiley @grcr @hybridlore @whalekeeper @anyone-else-that-might-be-interesed

Ok… I’m so excited because I’m finally sharing my WIP idea for NaNo!!!

I think it’s the only WIP that I’ve actually put a lot of thought into before actually…[Read more]

@hybridlore

The only difference is, my brother would put frogs in his pockets… and they would come out in the wash.

@hybridlore

😊 Thank you!!

@hybridlore

Yeah, the toad one reminds me of my brother. XD

@hybridlore

I just updated this yesterday. I thought I had tagged you, but apparently I tagged someone else twice.

@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore @esther-c @whoever-else

There is something really wrong with this scene. I can’t figure it out at all. Help!

“I told you not to go anywhere.” Mandin was half-laughing.

Nahim turned around suddenly, forgetting his helmet rested in the flowers beside him. Mandin froze, a look of shock in his features.

“What is th…

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@rae

Thanks! That’s so sweet <3

And I’ll go back to EDITING on the first part like you said. You have great feedback! Wanna read the whole thing, XD I’ll post the link! https://editor.reedsy.com/s/p8SdhuQ (if you don’t want to that’s totally fine!) Unfortunately, I don’t have any more chapters following this one, but if you want to critique the…[Read more]

@trailblazer @hybridlore

Is this better?

“Last night, I had a dream…” Lilitu began. They stopped walking in a clearing. “I saw this girl…” he shook his head. “She was crying. She looked so sad, and hopeless…And it was so vivid. I could feel her pain, her suffering, and there was nothing I could do.” His voice was strained. Is he crying? Sef wonde…

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@hybridlore

You’re welcome!

There’s a lot of things I could say in reply, but I think the best thing to do would be spend a long time on worldbuilding. The more worldbuilding you do, the more will become clear, and the world will seem more real to the viewers. I know pantsing if fun, and you can totally do it, but it sounds like it might be…[Read more]

@esther-c @trailblazer

Yeah, it does end abruptly. I really don’t like this chapter, lol. I guess….more EDITING! SO MUCH FUN!!!! (not.)

@hybridlore

Maybe something like that? I mean, Lilitu already described what happened, sort of, and I feel like it gets a little graphic in the actual flashback part. But it’s really up to you, if you feel l…

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