Hope Ann

@aella I have a Dell and like it… I’m afraid I don’t have much to offer.

@Daeus *tears at hair and wails to the night sky* I’m in the middle of this too and everything is such a mess right now… *draws deep breath* *calms self down*

Ok, firstly, if your book is ‘only’ 150,000 words I see no reason it can’t be one book. Especially if you plan on self-publishing. Authors are able to get away with longer books in…[Read more]

Never mind. I will leave you in @kate-flournoy‘s capable hands.

I like it. I love how the words flow. And thank you, @kate-flournoy. I shall give you a glowing recommendation whenever you need it. 😉

I like Silver Spark or Silver Flame…all the names are cool, really, but I like the meaning and things you could do with Spark/Flame. I really like Dimwood too, but that might be a bit long for a name.

@ethryndal I love the word ‘blade’. Like The Black Blade or the Glittering Arrow. Ok, so maybe those aren’t the best. But a cool name with ‘blade’ or ‘arrow’ could be fun.

@northerner Just making sure. 🙂

@Rolena-Hatfield The government would probably try to take children away from Christian parents, claiming they aren’t able to raise them themselves. At the very least, they’d probably make kids go to public school, where they’d be pressured to give up religion.

Drawing from history, there are governments who forbid teaching about Christianity to…[Read more]

@northerner I really like that too. Does Isaiah mind if I decide to use it?

This is for Scarlet Rose.

@aysia-serene UNITY is the name of the microchip

@northerner Hmm, I like that. The tracker is inserted into the arm. Right now it is new, so everyone will receive it but, in the future, it will be inserted in the first year after birth.

It can track people, so friends can keep track of each other. Though they can also turn it on privacy mode.…[Read more]

@aysia-serene UNITY is the name of the microchip

@northerner Hmm, I like that. The tracker is inserted into the arm. Right now it is new, so everyone will receive it but, in the future, it will be inserted in the first year after birth.

It can track people, so friends can keep track of each other. Though they can also turn it on privacy mode.…[Read more]

@northerner *stunned stare* What would ever make you guess it was me? 😉

And yes, by all means, I’d love to see if your friend has any ideas. I might just drop the acronym idea if I can’t think of anything, but I want to try to get a name if I can…

One more question. I’m considering calling this UNITY, but I’m not sure what the acronym should stand for. Any ideas? Or of a different acronym or name?

Guys, I think I figured it out! What if the government was giving everyone some tiny tracking device? It is supposed to be able to protect people so that in the case of capture or kidnapping, they can be found. It probably has other advantages, such as monitoring your health, calling for help in one collapses, an easy identification, ability to…[Read more]

Welcome! @Aysia-Serene from the resident lurker who pops on and off the forum depending on how much time she has. But this is seriously the best Christian writers’ forum. It being the only Christian writers’ forum I’ve been on has nothing to do with that fact, of course. 😉

@winter-rose Congratulations!!!!! And what everyone else said. 😀 There is only so many ways to say it, I suppose, but great job.

I like that cover. Perhaps the red could be a bit bolder so it stands out more. My one thought was that if the man was in action and/or wore some red it would pop more. But I don’t know if that is possible. Also…what is he holding?

I don’t care for the background picture, though a locket by itself could work. The hand and locket could work, but…[Read more]

I agree with getting your name the same color as the title. And I think the fonts should match better. Your name isn’t going to be fancy like the title, but they just seem mismatched right now. It would be cool if the pattern thing could be a symbol from the book, but I’m not sure if there are any overt symbols in your book…

And one picky…[Read more]

Any critique I have has already been mentioned. I like it. 🙂