Kingdom Pen | Hobbitchild | Mentions https://kingdompen.org/members/hobbitchild/activity/mentions/ Activity feed mentioning Hobbitchild. Wed, 22 Apr 2026 18:47:41 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en-US 30 hourly 2 b5abb2172031e72b90117d31009aa0ed Keilah H. replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/im-giving-you-permission-to-rant-about-your-wip/page/23/#post-127767 Wed, 04 Jan 2023 19:39:33 -0500 @hobbitchild Very cool! I’d read it!

]]> 59c889cc8f85207c34bc43e015ac2c41 GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/im-giving-you-permission-to-rant-about-your-wip/page/23/#post-127751 Wed, 04 Jan 2023 17:24:30 -0500 @hobbitchild THAT SOUNDS AWESOME!!!

]]> 302df15da7e317a03b9c3144063ca593 Jodi Maile replied to the topic Wow, is anyone on here? in the forum Film https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wow-is-anyone-on-here/#post-102074 Tue, 13 Jul 2021 05:52:04 -0400 @hobbitchild @hallie-jean Hellooo, everyone! I actually have been interested in doing screenwriting for a while now, so I guess that counts as being interested in filmmaking. I have yet to actually write a script, but I’m devoting my summer to learning more about screenwriting/filmmaking so I have a clearer idea of where to start. I love…[Read more]

]]> cd61b2ef5554b3041379a5da23c3e596 Jean Coul replied to the topic Wow, is anyone on here? in the forum Film https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wow-is-anyone-on-here/#post-102061 Tue, 13 Jul 2021 01:28:30 -0400 @hobbitchild

I can see this is from a long time ago, so I have no idea if you’ll see this!!! But, hi!!!!!! I’m here! A little late to the party, but recently I’ve been interested in making my own TV show and possibly posting it on YouTube.

A documentary sounds cool! I’m not a huge fan of documentaries, but one about a theatre camp sounds pretty…[Read more]

]]> 026a715a2e4d08a2c8d474ee97f2963e ella started the topic Awesome Poll: Mystery/Thriller Book COVERS!! :) in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/awesome-poll-mystery-thriller-book-covers/ Sun, 11 Apr 2021 22:23:43 -0400 Hello everyone, I’m back… this time with book covers!  But before I share the link, here’s the stats for titles:

  • Spirals–5
  • Dark Thing Wandering–4
  • Midsummer–2
  • The Space In Time–2
  • If I Could See Myself–2
  • When I Dream–2
  • Like Hope I Never Die–2
  • The Cabin in the Woods–1

Soooo, it appears Spirals wins!  With that in mind, let…[Read more]

]]> 564d529e87fd608ffa838bab50c34bff ella replied to the topic Fun Poll: Mystery/Thriller Book Titles!! :) in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/fun-poll-mystery-thriller-book-titles/#post-97424 Sun, 11 Apr 2021 21:40:23 -0400 I’m going to tag some more people to finish it out, then I’ll post the results and the cover poll tonight:

@jenwriter17 @hobbitchild @keilah-h @epicaddie2 @nanisnook

]]> 11cb45bec05f2ee52ccf48882cccfd53 ella started the topic Lioness: Chapter One Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/lioness-chapter-one-critique/ Sun, 21 Feb 2021 02:31:41 -0500 Hey people!!!  I finished my first chapter of Lioness (YA, futuristic speculative fiction), and I’d LOVE it if y’all could read and critique it for me!!!  It’s about 2000 words long.  And please please please don’t hold back on critiquing–I’m trying to become a better writer so I absolutely need to know what has to change.  (And besides, I can…[Read more]

]]> 9e60d8271cc621c79a1e9063cb9bd5fe SeekJustice replied to the topic Rock Climbing Scene...Help! in the forum Plotting https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/rock-climbing-scene-help/#post-93473 Fri, 19 Feb 2021 22:09:09 -0500 @hobbitchild

Yep, that’s a completely believable scenario. I once went abseiling (like rock climbing but opposite) and I actually did fall off the cliff. Thankfully though, harnesses exist so no harm was done and I just had to climb back up again, but if I’d been in the position where I didn’t have a harness for whatever reason, I would have been…[Read more]

]]> c88f115866cc2d6533211ca98247e66f Abigail.M. replied to the topic Rock Climbing Scene...Help! in the forum Plotting https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/rock-climbing-scene-help/#post-93439 Fri, 19 Feb 2021 20:00:32 -0500 @hobbitchild

Ooh, that sounds like a great scene:) I’m writing a couple of scarp scaling scenes too, but since it’s set in the 9th-century era, I wouldn’t be much help with the lingo.

]]> 9b3e90c295187b5563a7dbad1668aaf4 Kads replied to the topic Rock Climbing Scene...Help! in the forum Plotting https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/rock-climbing-scene-help/#post-93414 Fri, 19 Feb 2021 17:49:16 -0500 @hobbitchild I think what you have is great! The only things I’d add would maybe be to describe the stumble of the falling character and the split second reaction, just to maximize the scene! Example (I’ll use random names here): Dillon handed Hayden the harness, and as he pushed it into his hand, Hayden stumbled. His eyes widened, mouth ope…[Read more]

]]> 4877424e2449a7c68cc38d79800cc6bc Lin replied to the topic You get to go out for lunch with your main character of choice: How would it go? in the forum Topic of the Week https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/you-get-to-go-out-for-lunch-with-your-main-character-of-choice-how-would-it-go/#post-91869 Mon, 08 Feb 2021 16:13:19 -0500 @kathleenramm “The mysteries of the forum”…that sounds like something I could get into haha! Lovely scenario, by the way!

@hobbitchild Aw, I hope you get your money back! But I hope you had fun, at least!

@ribbonash That sounds really nice! I get what you’re feeling!

@godlyfantasy12 Oo, that sounds fun! It’s always nice to interact with…[Read more]

]]> efc1b5da6de639baa4848a6499b3672c Kathleen replied to the topic You get to go out for lunch with your main character of choice: How would it go? in the forum Topic of the Week https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/you-get-to-go-out-for-lunch-with-your-main-character-of-choice-how-would-it-go/#post-91836 Sun, 07 Feb 2021 22:55:58 -0500 @hobbitchild

Haha, yeah, that makes sense. XD

@writerlexi1216

Cool! How long have you been working on that WIP?

 

]]> 974b912e28f5586561bb8d26c836fe11 Kathleen replied to the topic You get to go out for lunch with your main character of choice: How would it go? in the forum Topic of the Week https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/you-get-to-go-out-for-lunch-with-your-main-character-of-choice-how-would-it-go/#post-91809 Sun, 07 Feb 2021 18:51:32 -0500 @hobbitchild

When I made this topic I was expecting to read some interesting stories, but I must say, I was not expecting a to read story about going out to lunch with Gollum. XD Entertaining nonetheless. 😀

@devastate-lasting

Honestly, I’m just as confused as you are about the tag on this topic. XD I actually didn’t realize it was tagged that…[Read more]

]]> 39b398de05d972e578048531bd198837 R.M. Archer replied to the topic National Indie Author Day! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/national-indie-author-day-4/#post-86854 Sat, 31 Oct 2020 23:49:06 -0400 @hobbitchild Memory Lane Was Moved sounds really interesting! I’ll have to check it out!

Thank you! ^-^

]]> b7cbc2ee5cd05b63b2fd826074672132 allisongrace replied to the topic Beware: Crazy Writer and Weird Nerd in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/beware-crazy-writer-and-weird-nerd/page/3/#post-85270 Tue, 29 Sep 2020 15:47:15 -0400 @hobbitchild

Thank you! I love my profile pic. XD

I’m definitely Team Stark. XD But I agree, Cap’s ending was a little off. In a way, it felt right, but something was missing. *shrugs* Another Cap movie would be amazing!

]]> 198b475dbcef86a5f14ad4615646dfb9 Michelle Black replied to the topic Time to share my story!!! in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/time-to-share-my-story/page/2/#post-84375 Thu, 20 Aug 2020 04:08:09 -0400 @hobbitchild Let me see what I can do for you….. Try this:)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1w9Tj5_RImpZl61iZAdlJ1uSYp5eRatp_1zkoRG-aoeM/edit

Hopefully, this works.

]]> d75cdd323d9c15cb88828e8ac6ff0da1 Michelle Black replied to the topic Time to share my story!!! in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/time-to-share-my-story/page/2/#post-84352 Wed, 19 Aug 2020 20:27:49 -0400 @hobbitchild Oh yes, it is my book:) Would you like to read it?

]]> 73ad8d54490e43b9bb712f8bdb9abb2b Kathleen replied to the topic What piece of writing advice changed the way you write the most? in the forum Topic of the Week https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/what-piece-of-writing-advice-changed-the-way-you-write-the-most/#post-84306 Tue, 18 Aug 2020 23:24:19 -0400 @hobbitchild

My parents use “…” all the time when they text or email me. XD Not really related, but I thought it was a funny coincidence.

The mind mapping tactic is something that I have learned just recently. I used to write SUPER detailed outlines of my novels, but then I would get so invested into the main character’s POV that they would…[Read more]

]]> 507191736f924cbee324d36ee87a49a2 Kathleen replied to the topic My Book - Now Free! in the forum Publishing & Platform https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-book-now-free/#post-84304 Tue, 18 Aug 2020 22:54:54 -0400 @hobbitchild

Yay! I just downloaded it and can’t wait to start reading.

However, it may take me awhile to finish since I’m reading more books than anyone should be reading at a given moment. XD

Congrats again! You inspire me to start typing away at my novel and finish it!

]]> e9db80a825ba95aafd4d609558e4a5ad Michelle Black replied to the topic My Book - Now Free! in the forum Publishing & Platform https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-book-now-free/#post-84242 Sun, 16 Aug 2020 21:10:39 -0400 @hobbitchild Oh good!!! I will check it out right away:) congratulations

]]> 1ed81166f56bf7242bd1a6d3a6df2db7 Kathleen replied to the topic If you could be a student of any Author, who would it be? in the forum Topic of the Week https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/if-you-could-be-a-student-of-any-author-who-would-it-be/#post-84239 Sat, 15 Aug 2020 17:31:42 -0400 @hobbitchild

Yes Focus on the Family did a great job with those! I’ve read the books at least twice, but listened to the audio drama countless times. XD

@devastate-lasting

Some of the best books are the ones that change  the way you write. (Except for the awful books that teach you how NOT to write.) I too love it when I read amazing piece of…[Read more]

]]> 9eba722f7da38baeb6c4e088939e5a84 Kathleen replied to the topic Time Period Writing in the forum Historical https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/time-period-writing/#post-84185 Thu, 13 Aug 2020 22:24:33 -0400 @hobbitchild

Although I like trying out a lot of different time periods, present day is my favorite.

Mainly because I obviously know that time period the best, so it’s easier to write the world and characters. It’s also easier to put myself in the characters shoes since their life isn’t drastically different from mine. But whenever I do write in…[Read more]

]]> 1304baa4ef7a1f47fc2dc1023335722e SeekJustice replied to the topic Time Period Writing in the forum Historical https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/time-period-writing/#post-84175 Thu, 13 Aug 2020 01:27:13 -0400 @hobbitchild

WW1 and Roman Britain!

What about you?

]]> 5954c98ca6a4391812f6bd54991116e1 Kathleen replied to the topic What made you start writing stories? How old were you when you started? in the forum Topic of the Week https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/what-made-you-start-writing-stories-how-old-were-you-when-you-started/#post-84173 Wed, 12 Aug 2020 23:21:23 -0400 @hobbitchild

This captivating story by your 3 year old self has got me hooked! I have so many questions…

WHO exactly is this girl?

WHAT kind of grapes did the girl eat? Green? Purple? Did it have seeds, or was it seedless?

WHEN did this all take place?

WHERE was she when she ate the grapes? Where did she go when walked away from the…[Read more]

]]> 72776649f221c84bedf19581e0414cee Kathleen replied to the topic Anyone Interested in a Free Book? in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/anyone-interested-in-a-free-book-2/#post-84172 Wed, 12 Aug 2020 23:08:11 -0400 @hobbitchild

Totally going to read this!

The synopsis sounds really cool, and FREE BOOK! Wow! Awesome! I love free stuff. (With exceptions of course, I quite dislike free poisonous blueberry cheesecake).

How did you get the idea for this story? Did something inspire you, or did the idea come out of nowhere?

]]> 57f5abe73ea548f8ab998d28bc408cab Kathleen replied to the topic I’m publishing a book... in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/im-publishing-a-book/#post-84160 Wed, 12 Aug 2020 20:49:33 -0400 @hobbitchild

Ooooh, this sounds really cool!

Congrats on getting your book published! Are you self-publishing it, or are you publishing it traditionally? Can’t wait to read more about your novel!

]]> 3cc69028debe11abb1ffeb24e466c682 Kathleen replied to the topic What made you start writing stories? How old were you when you started? in the forum Topic of the Week https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/what-made-you-start-writing-stories-how-old-were-you-when-you-started/#post-84159 Wed, 12 Aug 2020 20:44:58 -0400 @hobbitchild

Wow! You definitely take the crown as the person that started writing the earliest!

What were some of the stories your mom dictated about?

]]> 8a2655e9fe2068a85c1ae95cdb77deea Michelle Black replied to the topic Time to share my story!!! in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/time-to-share-my-story/page/2/#post-84147 Tue, 11 Aug 2020 23:38:00 -0400 @hobbitchild Hi:) That’s so cool! I will have to get it when it comes out *sets reminder*  I am actually going to try and publish it the traditional way. Self-publishing is great too. What kinds of children’s books do you write?

Also, OH MY GOSH A CAT! you have a can as your profile pic! so cute XD is it your pet?:)

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