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				<title>Snapper replied to the topic Powerful Quotes about Writing from The Princess Bride in the forum Publishing &#038; Platform</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 21 Mar 2018 14:51:02 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Awesomesauce! 😛 <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@his-instrument</a></p>
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				<title>Skredder replied to the topic Powerful Quotes about Writing from The Princess Bride in the forum Publishing &#038; Platform</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 21 Mar 2018 14:36:50 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@his-instrument</a> I love this movie so much! And these quotes are absolutely perfect!</p>
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				<title>NC Stokes replied to the topic Powerful Quotes about Writing from The Princess Bride in the forum Publishing &#038; Platform</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 21 Mar 2018 04:25:03 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@his-instrument</a> That was great! I am very likely to kill my darling characters in the morning. XD I also read your short story based on Beowulf, and I enjoyed it very much! You did a great job of bringing together the original story and yours.</p>
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				<title>Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Encouragement Thread in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 11 Mar 2018 00:56:52 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@His-Instrument</a> Aaahh, you too. Many times over. 😀</p>
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				<title>Daeus replied to the topic Encouragement Thread in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 10 Mar 2018 21:21:37 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@his-instrument</a> Ah, that&#8217;s awesome. 🙂  I&#8217;m very proud of you. </p>
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				<title>Daeus replied to the topic Encouragement Thread in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 10 Mar 2018 20:20:38 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@his-instrument</a> For your encouragement on my first book and for writing one of my favorite 1st person POV narrators. 😀 </p>
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				<title>Rochellaine replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 14 Feb 2018 20:30:29 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/destiny/' rel="nofollow ugc">@destiny</a> Since the tags didn&#8217;t work, I&#8217;ll re-tag everyone:</p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/kaya-young/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kaya-young</a> (her tag might have worked&#8230;) <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/aislinn-mollisong/' rel="nofollow ugc">@aislinn-mollisong</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/dekreel/' rel="nofollow ugc">@dekreel</a> (Also might have worked) <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/daughteroftheking/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daughteroftheking</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/ingridrd/' rel="nofollow ugc">@ingridrd</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@his-instrument</a></p>
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				<title>Joy replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 28 Jan 2018 04:29:25 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@his-instrument</a>  Quoting from my email updates since your post disappeared&#8230;</p>
<blockquote><p>Those are some good names…</p>
<p>Piper is cute, probably my favorite. The only thing is, I think Piper is a character in the Percy Jackson series (though I haven’t read it). Not sure how much popularity that series has right now, or what your goal is for this project, so it m&hellip;</p></blockquote>
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				<title>Joy replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 28 Jan 2018 00:02:10 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>Which name do you guys like better: <strong>Peri, Phoebe, Piper,</strong> or <strong>Tegan?</strong></p>
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				<title>Ingrid replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 26 Jan 2018 15:15:18 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>Okay, so I have decided on a name.  *drumroll*</p>
<p>Devin!</p>
<p>I thought about what you said, Hannah, so I just changed the spelling slightly to avoid any pronunciation errors.  Thank you all for your input!</p>
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				<title>Ingrid replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 25 Jan 2018 15:46:31 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>Okay, so this isn&#8217;t exactly on topic, but I&#8217;m trying to name a guy character and need some ideas.  What I have so far:  Arian, Bryson, Corban, Devan, Crew</p>
<p>I&#8217;m having such a hard time choosing.  So, please either vote on which of the above names you like best or use your wonderfully creative mi&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-68143"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-name-exchange/page/4/#post-61306" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Joy replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 16 Jan 2018 15:33:00 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8230;&#8230;.That was weird&#8230;&#8230;..</p>
<p>TAKE TWO! *claps clapperboard*</p>
<p>Thanks <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/rochellaine/' rel="nofollow ugc">@rochellaine</a>!  I might actually use some of those for my novella! (assuming I ever get back to it&#8230;&#8230;)</p>
<p>Anyway, can I drop in some names, too?</p>
<p><em>Girls (I got these from a book, mostly)</em></p>
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<li>Airow</li>
<li>Aine</li>
<li>Altair</li>
<li>Ashe</li>
<li>Vekka</li>
<li>Cleo</li>
<li>Dae</li>
<li>Dove</li>
<li>Elke</li>
<li>Fae</li>
<li>Faune</li>
<li>Ginger</li>
<p>&hellip;</ul>
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				<title>Sam Kowal replied to the topic The Last Jedi in the forum Film</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 31 Dec 2017 02:07:59 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>😀 I finally can join this topic</p>
<p>I saw it, and I thought it was incredible! It&#8217;s definitely one of my favorite Star Wars now.</p>
<p>(Full Spoilers)</p>
<p>I really can&#8217;t decide about Kylo. He sort of had his chance to join Rey, but he also could grow over the course of the next&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-65251"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-last-jedi-2/page/2/#post-58506" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Snapper replied to the topic The Last Jedi in the forum Film</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 29 Dec 2017 01:37:14 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I can now join this conversation! <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/dekreel/' rel="nofollow ugc">@dekreel</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/supermonkey42/' rel="nofollow ugc">@supermonkey42</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@his-instrument</a> @introvert-girl </p>
<p>Introvert-girl Now that is an interesting prediction. Especially since Kylo has always had conflict&#8230; Then there was that scene where Rey was in lessons with Luke, and he said &#8216;You went right to the dark.&#8217; </p>
<p>Ben&#8211;what were those cute things with the big&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-64956"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-last-jedi-2/#post-58120" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>introvert_girl replied to the topic The Last Jedi in the forum Film</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 27 Dec 2017 15:26:07 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/dekreel/' rel="nofollow ugc">@dekreel</a> AAAA star wars!!! I finally got to see it yesterday. 😀<br />
Honestly my thoughts about the whole thing are a bit scattered because I was <em>so excited</em> about the Force Bond being real. I&#8217;ve been hoping for TWO YEARS it would be. *squeaks in delight*<br />
(Also that Rey would not be a Skywalker, Solo, Kenobi, or whatever. But I wasn&#8217;t as surprised in&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-64598"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-last-jedi-2/#post-57781" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Ben Powell replied to the topic The Last Jedi in the forum Film</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 24 Dec 2017 22:06:10 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@his-instrument</a> That’s a cool verse! I don’t remember hearing it before. I play cajon as a hobby, but I don’t think that’ll be my profession.</p>
<p>Yeah, I think those kids were part of what Luke meant when he said he would not be the last Jedi. He was talking about Rey, but he knew there were others who would be “Jedi,” even if they’re not trained b&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-64452"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-last-jedi-2/#post-57635" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Ben Powell replied to the topic The Last Jedi in the forum Film</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 24 Dec 2017 05:07:51 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@his-instrument</a> A story behind my username? Well, yes, but it’s not a very interesting one. I used to play a game on the Internet that had a character called a Super Monkey, so I used that for my username. I guess it just stuck. 🙂 By the way, I take it from your username that you’re a musician? Maybe?</p>
<p>Yes, I totally agree with you on the boy at&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-64433"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-last-jedi-2/#post-57616" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Would someone please tell me if these first chapters are too depressing? in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
				<link>http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/would-someone-please-tell-me-if-these-first-chapters-are-two-depressing/#post-57571</link>
				<pubDate>Sun, 24 Dec 2017 00:32:25 -0500</pubDate>

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				<title>Daeus replied to the topic Would someone please tell me if these first chapters are too depressing? in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
				<link>http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/would-someone-please-tell-me-if-these-first-chapters-are-two-depressing/#post-57522</link>
				<pubDate>Sat, 23 Dec 2017 15:55:56 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@his-instrument</a> Another option is to add in an extra prologue or chapter in the beginning that has a very different tone just to give the reader something positive to latch onto.</p>
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				<title>Sam Kowal replied to the topic Would someone please tell me if these first chapters are too depressing? in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 23 Dec 2017 15:32:25 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@his-instrument</a> I would be willing to read them, if you still need someone to<br />
That storyline sounds really interesting, 😀 by the way.<br />
The main point is, you don&#8217;t want to mislead the reader with a super dark ending and then have them confused and probably annoyed when the entire story switches tone. So if the entire story isn&#8217;t meant to be dark,&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-64340"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/would-someone-please-tell-me-if-these-first-chapters-are-two-depressing/#post-57519" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Would someone please tell me if these first chapters are too depressing? in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
				<link>http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/would-someone-please-tell-me-if-these-first-chapters-are-two-depressing/#post-57487</link>
				<pubDate>Sat, 23 Dec 2017 01:09:44 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@His-Instrument</a> What they said. Exactly. 😉 If you still want someone to read the first few chapters, I could probably do that. If you still think it&#8217;s necessary. The premise really interests me at least, and I know already I wouldn&#8217;t put a book down just after that.</p>
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				<title>introvert_girl replied to the topic Would someone please tell me if these first chapters are too depressing? in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 22 Dec 2017 16:55:09 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@his-instrument</a> My thoughts are that in the opening chapters, you want to be intentional about showing the reader what the tone of your story is, so they know what to expect. If the dark/sad elements in the beginning are conveying that, it may not be a problem. Unless you just want the story to be lighter in tone overall. In that case, I find the&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-64268"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/would-someone-please-tell-me-if-these-first-chapters-are-two-depressing/#post-57455" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Daeus replied to the topic Would someone please tell me if these first chapters are too depressing? in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 22 Dec 2017 11:48:10 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@his-instrument</a> I love the plot line.</p>
<p>I don&#8217;t know if I&#8217;ll be able to read the first chapters, but just some thoughts. I think you can set a tone in these first chapters that lets your reader know you&#8217;re not out to scare them. If you don&#8217;t get too graphic with the murder and torture scene and you give the reader one or two, morally good, hopeful&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-64260"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/would-someone-please-tell-me-if-these-first-chapters-are-two-depressing/#post-57444" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Joy replied to the topic Would someone please tell me if these first chapters are too depressing? in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 22 Dec 2017 04:48:27 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@his-instrument</a>  I love the storyline!</p>
<p>It does sound kind of dark. Maybe you could like spread out the dark a little bit&#8230;?</p>
<p>Anyway, sure! I&#8217;ll read it. 🙂</p>
<p>Someone who has more experience with plot line might be of more use, though&#8230;</p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/daeus/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daeus</a>  <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/aratrea/' rel="nofollow ugc">@aratrea</a>  <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/sam-kowal/' rel="nofollow ugc">@sam-kowal</a>  <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/seekjustice/' rel="nofollow ugc">@seekjustice</a>  <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/jane-maree/' rel="nofollow ugc">@jane-maree</a>  <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/princessfoo/' rel="nofollow ugc">@princessfoo</a>  <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/introvert_girl/' rel="nofollow ugc">@introvert_girl</a></p>
<p>(P.S. This is comple&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-64255"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/would-someone-please-tell-me-if-these-first-chapters-are-two-depressing/#post-57439" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>photobloggergal replied to the topic I need a character&#039;s name! + other stuff ;D in the forum Novel Idea Critiques</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 08 Nov 2017 21:22:26 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@his-instrument</a>! Thanks for your comment lovely!</p>
<p>Thanks! Maybe you could do a guest post over there sometime on modest fashion clothing hacks! 🙂</p>
<p>BTW, LOVED your comment! Thanks for it: it brightened my day! 🙂</p>
<p>~Hadassah</p>
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				<title>photobloggergal replied to the topic I need a character&#039;s name! + other stuff ;D in the forum Novel Idea Critiques</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 06 Nov 2017 16:12:18 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mariposa/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mariposa</a>! I should definitely try to get a baby name book next time I&#8217;m at a book sale or a thrift store! Thanks for the help!</p>
<p>Thanks <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@his-instrument</a>! I&#8217;m not really sure if I want the character to have a real meaning to her (yes, I finally decided that they&#8217;ll find a girl on the doorstep!) name yet, but thanks for the suggestions and&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-59243"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/i-need-a-characters-name-other-stuff-d/page/2/#post-51716" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Catwing started the topic Three and Seven ~ Finding Secrets in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 22 Oct 2017 02:30:05 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Well, at long last I finished this edit of my book. And I was wondering if anyone wanted to beta read it. ( <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/daughteroftheking/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daughteroftheking</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/aislinn-mollisong/' rel="nofollow ugc">@aislinn-mollisong</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/seekjustice/' rel="nofollow ugc">@seekjustice</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/perfectfifths/' rel="nofollow ugc">@perfectfifths</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/jess-penrose/' rel="nofollow ugc">@jess-penrose</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/jane-maree/' rel="nofollow ugc">@jane-maree</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/dragon-snapper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@dragon-snapper</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/epicaddie2/' rel="nofollow ugc">@epicaddie2</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@his-instrument</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/emily/' rel="nofollow ugc">@emily</a> [Tell your sister if you like&#8230;])<br />
The title is Finding Secrets, it is the first book of a&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-56981"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/three-and-seven-finding-secrets/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Daeus replied to the topic The Last Jedi in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 20 Oct 2017 21:23:23 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@his-instrument</a> Porgs are definitely Snoke&#8217;s secret minions&#8230; 😉 </p>
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				<title>Catwing replied to the topic Looking For Critique Of Realistic Middle-Grade Book in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 05 Oct 2017 21:33:22 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/raevynstar/' rel="nofollow ugc">@raevynstar</a> Hi! I am busy so I can&#8217;t right now&#8230; But a shall tag some people&#8230; Perhaps they can help you? &#8230;<br />
<a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/emma-flournoy/' rel="nofollow ugc">@emma-flournoy</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/jessi-rae/' rel="nofollow ugc">@jessi-Rae</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/daughteroftheking/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daughteroftheking</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/epicaddie2/' rel="nofollow ugc">@epicaddie2</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/that_writer_girl_99/' rel="nofollow ugc">@that_writer_girl_99</a><br />
<a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/salome01w4g/' rel="nofollow ugc">@salome01w4g</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@his-instrument</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/dragon-snapper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@dragon-snapper</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/emily/' rel="nofollow ugc">@emily</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/shannon/' rel="nofollow ugc">@shannon</a></p>
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				<title>Daeus started the topic For all who love speculative fiction in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 26 Sep 2017 12:03:51 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>I&#8217;m excited to announce that on October 2nd KP will hosting a panel discussion dedicated to the topic of speculative fiction!</p>
<p>Yes, fantasy, sci-fi, the stuff we love. I hope you&#8217;ll be there. 😀 😀 😀</p>
<p>Here&#8217;s the link.&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-54138"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/for-all-who-love-speculative-fiction/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Josiah DeGraaf started the topic New Website Party! in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 23 Sep 2017 19:57:22 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey all!</p>
<p>It is my pleasure to introduce you all to the new Kingdom Pen site&#8211;now faster /and/ mobile-friendly. 😀</p>
<p>As you may notice, it looks quite different. And while I <em>think</em> I&#8217;ve caught all the bugs, there may still be some that have evaded my eagle-eye. So if you find something, drop us a note here or email us at <a href="mailto:kingdompenmag@gmail.com" rel="nofollow ugc">kingdompenmag@gmail.com</a>.&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-53383"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/new-website-party/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Mentorship in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 22 Sep 2017 00:31:32 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/kate-flournoy/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kate-flournoy</a> If getting a good mentor is possible, I&#8217;d definitely seize on the opportunity. Like <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@his-instrument</a>, I downplayed the importance for a while. Then I found one. And while I currently only have one on the publishing/marketing/business end of things, it&#8217;s insanely helpful and is going to help me avoid a lot of pitfalls. If I could find&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-53195"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/mentorship/page/2/#post-44312" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Mentorship in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 21 Sep 2017 17:18:11 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@His-Instrument</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/daeus/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Daeus</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/dragon-snapper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Dragon-Snapper</a> thanks, guys. You people are the best. </p>
<p>I definitely agree with you about being cynical of most authors out there, Daeus. If I did seek out a mentor, it would be for the marketing/publishing side of things, even though I&#8217;m going indy.<br />
Honestly, I feel like I can learn just as much about actual writing&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-53140"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/mentorship/#post-44260" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Kate Flournoy started the topic Mentorship in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 21 Sep 2017 16:10:36 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Heyyyyyy guys! Look who&#8217;s posting again&#8230; *gulps and ducks under the table* I know I&#8217;ve been sadly absent. Life. Eighteen. Schedules. Editing. Life again. You get it. 😛 </p>
<p>This is actually not a question about writing specifically&#8230; but rather, I want to know what you guys think about mentorship. As in, finding a mentor who will help you along&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-53127"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/mentorship/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Snapper replied to the topic Guys... just check this out in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 18 Sep 2017 18:11:15 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Gotta love things like this. </p>
<p>The internet: a writer&#8217;s best friend. (besides dogs) </p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@his-instrument</a></p>
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				<title>Hannah replied to the topic The Master&#039;s Servants : Allegorical short stories in the forum Short Story Critiques</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 18 Sep 2017 02:34:03 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/catwing/' rel="nofollow ugc">@catwing</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/dragon-snapper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@dragon-snapper</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/emily/' rel="nofollow ugc">@emily</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/shannon/' rel="nofollow ugc">@shannon</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@his-instrument</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/daeus/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daeus</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/ck4always/' rel="nofollow ugc">@ck4always</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/winter-rose/' rel="nofollow ugc">@winter-rose</a></p>
<p>I&#8217;m tagging people I&#8217;ve previously shared stories with so if you don&#8217;t want to be tagged lemme know!<br />
Anyways my 5th short story (finally) went live I will tell you I had REALLY bad writer&#8217;s block this time around.&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-52460"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-masters-servants-allegorical-short-stories/page/2/#post-43591" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Hannah replied to the topic The Master&#039;s Servants : Allegorical short stories in the forum Short Story Critiques</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 18 Sep 2017 02:34:03 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/catwing/' rel="nofollow ugc">@catwing</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/dragon-snapper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@dragon-snapper</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/emily/' rel="nofollow ugc">@emily</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/shannon/' rel="nofollow ugc">@shannon</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@his-instrument</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/daeus/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daeus</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/ck4always/' rel="nofollow ugc">@ck4always</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/winter-rose/' rel="nofollow ugc">@winter-rose</a></p>
<p>I&#8217;m tagging people I&#8217;ve previously shared stories with so if you don&#8217;t want to be tagged lemme know!<br />
Anyways my 5th short story (finally) went live I will tell you I had REALLY bad writer&#8217;s block this time around.<br />
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				<title>Ingrid replied to the topic Guys... just check this out in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 17 Sep 2017 15:40:37 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@his-instrument</a><br />
THIS IS AMAZING!!!  🙂  A million thanks!</p>
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				<title>Hannah replied to the topic Guys... just check this out in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 17 Sep 2017 02:14:25 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@his-instrument</a> oooohhhhh!!! thanks for posting</p>
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				<title>NC Stokes replied to the topic Guys... just check this out in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 16 Sep 2017 23:52:56 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oops, I meant <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@his-instrument</a>. *runs speedily off to generate some more names*</p>
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				<title>Catwing replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 15 Sep 2017 02:03:59 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/daughteroftheking/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daughteroftheking</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/emily/' rel="nofollow ugc">@emily</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/jane-maree/' rel="nofollow ugc">@jane-maree</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/seekjustice/' rel="nofollow ugc">@seekjustice</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/epicaddie2/' rel="nofollow ugc">@epicaddie2</a> @dragonsnapper <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/jessi-rae/' rel="nofollow ugc">@jessi-Rae</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@his-instrument</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/salome01w4g/' rel="nofollow ugc">@salome01w4g</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/that_writer_girl_99/' rel="nofollow ugc">@that_writer_girl_99</a><br />
Another character for the VR. I&#8217;m thinking a name something like Monica. But suggestions would help.<br />
<img loading="lazy" src="http://kingdompen.org/wp-content/uploads/avatars/12136/image-260x450.jpeg" alt="" /><br />
For Legends of Conquest. She has poison and a dagger. The necklace is supposed to be a lotus. So she&#8217;s on&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-52253"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange/page/60/#post-43383" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Not sure where to put this, but... in the forum Novel Idea Critiques</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 09 Sep 2017 00:08:47 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/graceofspades2017/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Graceofspades2017</a> whoa! 😛 This looks like something I would normally love to do, but unfortunately I don&#8217;t have the time or mental energy right now. 😛</p>
<p>Let me tag some others for you though.</p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/dragon-snapper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Dragon-Snapper</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/shannon/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Shannon</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@His-Instrument</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/leumeister/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Leumeister</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/josiahdeboer/' rel="nofollow ugc">@JosiahDeBoer</a></p>
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				<title>Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Not sure where to put this, but... in the forum Novel Idea Critiques</title>
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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@Graceofspades whoa! 😛 This looks like something I would normally love to do, but unfortunately I don&#8217;t have the time or mental energy right now. 😛</p>
<p>Let me tag some others for you though.</p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/dragon-snapper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Dragon-Snapper</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/shannon/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Shannon</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@His-Instrument</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/leumeister/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Leumeister</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/josiahdeboer/' rel="nofollow ugc">@JosiahDeBoer</a></p>
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				<title>Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Not sure where to put this, but... in the forum Novel Idea Critiques</title>
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									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@GBCarter whoa! 😛 This looks like something I would normally love to do, but unfortunately I don&#8217;t have the time or mental energy right now. 😛</p>
<p>Let me tag some others for you though.</p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/dragon-snapper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Dragon-Snapper</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/shannon/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Shannon</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@His-Instrument</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/leumeister/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Leumeister</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/josiahdeboer/' rel="nofollow ugc">@JosiahDeBoer</a></p>
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				<title>Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Not sure where to put this, but... in the forum Novel Idea Critiques</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 09 Sep 2017 00:08:47 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@G-B-Carter whoa! 😛 This looks like something I would normally love to do, but unfortunately I don&#8217;t have the time or mental energy right now. 😛</p>
<p>Let me tag some others for you though.</p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/dragon-snapper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Dragon-Snapper</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/shannon/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Shannon</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@His-Instrument</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/leumeister/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Leumeister</a> @Josiah-DeBoer</p>
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				<title>Hannah replied to the topic Does the Bible forbid using an alias? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 08 Sep 2017 16:12:21 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@his-instrument</a>  I wanted to give my two cents in this discussion (Me and a friend had a talk about this.) Deception and Lying are both bad, I have to politely disagree with Daeus here.<br />
I think you could give your characters alias&#8217;s but like others have said, make sure you don&#8217;t use it in a good light, maybe with out being preachy explain that it&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-51880"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/does-the-bible-forbid-using-an-alias/page/2/#post-42994" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Snapper replied to the topic Does the Bible forbid using an alias? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 08 Sep 2017 11:45:25 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@his-instrument</a> Despite everything said on this topic, another thing to do would be to ask people who are really good authorities on the subject. Parents, pastors, youth leaders, they&#8217;d probably love a question like that, and they could probably give you a more solid answer. </p>
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				<title>Catwing replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 08 Sep 2017 01:03:26 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/dragon-snapper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@dragon-snapper</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/daughteroftheking/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daughteroftheking</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/salome01w4g/' rel="nofollow ugc">@salome01w4g</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@his-instrument</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/jessi-rae/' rel="nofollow ugc">@jessi-Rae</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/emily/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Emily</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/that_writer_girl_99/' rel="nofollow ugc">@that_writer_girl_99</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/seekjustice/' rel="nofollow ugc">@seekjustice</a><br />
This is another Catwing.<br />
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				<title>Snapper replied to the topic Does the Bible forbid using an alias? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 05 Sep 2017 21:39:19 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/emily/' rel="nofollow ugc">@emily</a> Agreed. Very much agreed. There are definitely gray areas, because, well, we are human&#8230;and we aren&#8217;t God. We aren&#8217;t made to understand everything. That&#8217;s why it is &#8216;the mystery of the cross&#8217;</p>
<blockquote><p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@his-instrument</a> Wow. This is really hard. Somebody else might have already said this, but in my opinion, I think that we won’t know everything u&hellip;</p></blockquote>
<p><span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-51713"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/does-the-bible-forbid-using-an-alias/page/2/#post-42853" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Does the Bible forbid using an alias? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 05 Sep 2017 18:35:15 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/lifeofkatie/' rel="nofollow ugc">@LifeofKatie</a> yep. I need to study this some more as well.<br />
Thanks for getting us thinking, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/his-instrument/' rel="nofollow ugc">@His-Instrument</a>. 😀<br />
<a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/jadamae/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Jadamae</a> good point&#8230;</p>
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