@highscribeofaetherium
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Allison posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 5 months ago
Welcome to KP! I’m Jonas, more enigmatically known as Cloaked Mystery. I write mostly in the fantasy genre, but usually with hard rules that verge on sci-fi. I like creating magic systems, usually hard ones, but I have a few soft-ish ones. My current project, which I am working on with my sister, @highscribeofaetherium, is a…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
I did list white. Iridescence is a good idea. I’ve been thinking of having the white one be like that.
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Oh darn 😅, thanks for letting me know! I’ll try to track it down and re-post it
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Cloaked Mystery started the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
This is a new topic for my Celestiar series set on Ildin. I don’t know how many books this will be, because I’ve only been working on the first one. Again, as with the Adonial Saga, “the Ildin Saga” is a working name, but not the final one.
I’m switching my attention from the Adonial Saga to this one. I have a couple reasons why. First of all,…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Okay.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
For me the struggle is with the lengths of the notes and not the note name. Especially with shorter notes, it’s often hard for me to tell.
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 5 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @freedomwriter76 @esther-c @jonas @calyhuge @beth-torres @grcr @smiley @whalekeeper @loopylin @thearcaneaxiom @savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer @acancello @keilah-h @princesachronicle22 @idk
I just got a great idea, but I’m not sure if it is so great.
For once, I am going to mandate you to reply in some form, I have…[Read more] -
Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @jonas @esther-c @smily @whalekeeper @hybridlore @idk
Ignore me if you wish, I literally just typed in tags since i didn’t know what else to do (If you can tell)
I’m trying to write a song for Alpha Grath. This is for after he looses Emmie (if you don’t know who she is, she was the love of his…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
The one that says ‘Uh’ above it. Bottom left.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
And no, @highscribeofaetherium, this will not let you decode the runic inscriptions I’ve been drawing, because I’ve made changes since then.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @trailblazer @acancello @esther-c @highscribeofaetherium @jonas @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @anyone-else
Update: We talked to a doctor who said that I was definitely somewhat diabetic, so he upped the amount of a pill I was already taking and gave us some other instructions about what to avoid and what I need to do daily. He’s…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago
@jonas @rae
I’m just gonna jump in on this conversation lol…
I also LOVE first person present tense…but I HATE…I mean HATE third person present…unless of course I’m writing a certain depressing short story about my life a couple months ago heh…heh….OH! I cannot STAND second person…*retches over the side of the bed* Like WHO in their…[Read more] -
Ruth replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 5 months ago
@jonas @grcr @highscribeofaetherium
Thanks, guys.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Yes, I think Riina would love to see Jr humiliated, and Nat would help her out! XD
Yes, he’s eighteen in this AU.
@highscribeofaetherium @sara too
Thank you for the offers! I just first would like to see what Riina does if you don’t mind.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@rae @highscribeofaetherium @both-torres @whalekeeper
(KP ate my post!)
Allow me to get us up and rolling again.
Kazriac
Kazriac stood silently in the dark room for sometime. He heard voices outside, arguing. Hunans and their petty squabbles. Still he waited. He was patient. There was no reason to rush when you were immortal.
Finally, things…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@rae @highscribeofaetherium @beth-torres @whalekeeper
Allow me to get us ip and rolling again.
Kazriac
Kazriac stoid silently in the dark room for sometime. He heard voices outside, arguing. Hunans and their petty squabbles. Still he waited. He was patient. There was no reason to rush when you were immortal.
Finally, things escalated to the…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
😬
You and I are the only ones who have RPed recently. Idk what to have happen. If this RP us to get back on its feet, we can’t be the only ones trying. Someone, help!
You haven’t gone in a long time.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 5 months ago
@jonas @esther-c @highscribeofaetherium @walkbyfaith @trailblazer
Thanks for everything guys! <3
I woke up this morning to my grandma waking me up and telling me that my dad took Mom to the ER this morning, and that me and my siblings had to go over to her house until they got back. So it was really sad for me and it was hard, but my friends…[Read more]
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I think that is awesome! I don’t have any theological problems with that. I tend to avoid doing robots and stuff, because I don’t believe that such a creation would have a soul, and I would usually rather avoid writing about those topics. I haven’t thought about how that would extend to a human created in a lab. There’s nothing biological about a…[Read more]
*either not dither
I don’t like to play with sentient and rational robots, honestly those creep me out. The idea of Alpha being originally a a robot made out of flesh came from me just thinking about him. It was really weird, I was talking as Alpha to his best friend Terry and it just spilled out. I was making it up as I went, but it sounded like it was a set piece…[Read more]
That makes sense to me. I think we’re pretty much on the same page.
I haven’t thought about it in depth, but from first glance, I don’t have a problem with it either. I guess it would depend also on how he was created. Did they take human DNA to create him? If that’s the case, then I think he would have a soul just like any other person, because the rest of us are created with human DNA, even though the process of…[Read more]
He was made from mixed DNA, to give him the traits Grathmere wanted. I believe most likely, he was made the weird 3D printer way at first, and developed from there.
He was actually interestingly enough, not made to have any moral compass. He was supposed to be a heartless assassin that did what Grathmere wished. He’d have limited free will, but…[Read more]
I think that’s a really good idea. I don’t find any theological issues with it. Er, I don’t really have any other comments ATM 😅
@rae
I like the idea! I think it makes sense that he would be without breath at first, and I think that God could definitely give him a soul if He chose
Ooh, ok. So I see where your doubts are coming from. Here’s my opinion…
I believe that as soon as a baby is conceived in the womb, he (referring to either gender in this case) is a human being with a soul that is loved by God. Obviously he cannot physically breathe yet because he’s only a few cells. But when he is born, God is ultimately the O…[Read more]
@rae
I really like this idea!!!
I think this is a fun idea. I don’t think there’s any theological problems. Is this your fantasy, or something else? If the first, then I wouldn’t think theological and scientific problems should be your primary concern, because what you say goes. Even if your more into hard worldbuilding, you can build up a distinct theological system that is…[Read more]
@thearcaneaxiom Yeah, this is in my sci-fi/fantasy Galaxy. Alpha is one of my main charries.
I don’t think this is too weird an idea for a sci-fi universe. It’s basically like God put literal, actual life in a body which was built, not born. Like a machine built out of flesh and bone, it was working, but it wasn’t alive quite yet. I think the way he explains it is a little strange, but that’s an explanation and can be modified a bit.
My only issue is that if his heart was going but not his breathing, he would die pretty quickly, so maybe he was effectively “dead” with neither organ working, and when they tried to “jump-start” him, his heart started but not his lungs, and then when they were confusedly trying to figure it out he started breathing.
That was a weird explanation, sorry….
It makes sense…in fact that was the way I pictured it in my mind, just Alpha sometimes says things weirdly, and leaves out parts.
I believe the term for during but still coming back to life by revival is called “clinically dead”. Not sure if Alpha falls under this or not, though…
Ok, good, it made sense…lol