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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
KP just ate my post and went really weird…
I like Jim a lot.
I knew his parents were going to die once they hid Jonathan, but before that, no.
Does the story time jump after this, or does the whole book happen when Jonathan is nine?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
I know!!!!
Really? Thanks so much!
What do you think of Jim?
Also, did you expect his parents to die?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper
( @kyronthearcanin @jonas @power )
CHAPTER 6 and 7!!!!
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Whaley replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 1 year, 5 months ago
Haha, I don’t mind
Ew, no. This is just for fun.
[Marcel glances down at his freshly cleaned coat and shrugs. Loosens up, flicking his wrist cuffs.] Cool with me. If I’d known, I would have brought Enid.”
7990s?? What year is it now? It’s only 2025 in my world.
“It’s 8035. Maybe your world records time differently. I’ve seen some of y…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 5 months ago
I love that the “mentally unstable” descriptor doesn’t narrow down who it could be in the slightest lol
Hey! lol Yeah, I guess you’re right XD
If you can guess him, try and guess who his friend is then (hint: i don’t talk about his friend too often, and last time they made an appearance other than a possible mention of their name t…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 5 months ago
This one isn’t written but I’ve thought about it:
A mentally unstable man and his mostly stable friend, among an also mentally unstable military faction, seek to end a war with an immortal being.
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Whaley replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Stopping at :55 and I think that’s enough to warrant a tasty drink and dinner. 😛
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Whaley replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
I want to work on a short story! If I get a substantial amount finished, I get a chocolate nutrition shake. Starting at :25.
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Noooooooo Tyler!😭Poor Easton.😭 I’m glad Hallie is starting to come back to God. Antonio is so sweet.🥰
I love the smorgasbord of emotions slapped into this post 🤣
I was just thinking about it last night in bed and i realized that what you pointed out about Easton isn’t a huge part of his character arc as far as…[Read more]
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Whaley replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Which plot twist? The one about Jonas’s dad?
Yep
It’s based off the book Fahrenheit 451 which I really want to read, but I haven’t yet, so I don’t know if it’s clean.
I read most of it at a getaway house by the ocean (one of my favorite recent memories), and it was a fun read. I didn’t finish it but at the time I ha…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
I was not expecting it at all!! 😂🥺
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Okay. Sounds good.
I know!!!!! Poor kiddos!!
Did you expect that to happen, or did it take you blindsided?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Ahem. Sorry. I meant to say, I don’t know if the glitch is on my side or yours. Probably mine.
and yeah, I could access the chapters, it just took a sec to reload so maybe that’s what I needed to do yesterday.
Now… 314???????!
And Jonathan!!!!
nothing to note in these really. I enjoyed them.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Oh my word!! *squeal of excitement* yay!! Well, the next ones will be out tomorrow.
Oh that would be SO COOL. *Hopes and prays temptation will win.*
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Yeah, I literally felt a tear at the goodbye scene. And I don’t usually cry reading things (at least, not fiction).
Can’t wait for the next chapters…!!
It would. I don’t know. I’d have to ponder for a while. no promises. I’ve already got me hands full atm… but the temptation is great.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Yes, it sure is a good one!
Oh, is that something glitchy on my end or on yours?
Equilibrium is a movie. It’s rated R for one scene at the end that we skip, and it has language but we filter it out with ClearPlay.
It’s based off the book Fahrenheit 451 which I really want to read, but I haven’t yet, so I don’t…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Wait really?!! You’re gonna cry!!??
*jumps around the room cheering*
*pauses and realizes that is not the right response to someone crying*
*offers tissue*
*goes back to celebrating*
Oooo, a comic would be pretty insanely cool!!! Oh wow. What would you think of doing a few of the characters in comic form? You don’t have top if you…[Read more]
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Whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
*Bounces up and down because I just researched this* Make full summary of the mystery solution and the story behind it. Something like, “the old lady killed the doctor. She raised alligators in her home because she was a reptile researcher. She trained the alligators to do this, and this, and this. Her plan played out like this. She did…[Read more]
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