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@keilah-h

Thanks for sending the link!

I started reading it (just got to the part where Huntress sneaks into Spy’s room) and so far I’m really enjoying it! Thank you for letting me read it!

@ellette-giselle

did you ever do a board for Barron? If so, have you posted it? If not, I’d love to see one!!!

I was working on a hand drawn board for him but I never finished it and I also lost the page *sad face*. Plus, at the time, it revealed some things about Baron that I didn’t want to reveal yet.

I’ll probably redraw it and post it

Mom: “Don’t forget you O’s”

Me: “I won’t forget my O’s! If i was to forge my O’s what kind of person would I be?!”

Mom: “A nut?”

Me: “YES!”

Mom: “You already are a nut!”

Me: “Cranberries cranberries cranberries cranberries cranberries cranberries cranberries!” Et cetera

Mom: “Of course her cranberries will come to Ruth when she calls.”

@liberty
THERE’S ANOTHER?

@the_lost-journal

Yes, that could work. You’ll just have to engineer a way for her to get separated. (Or I can help contrive something to let that happen if you want.)

@freed_and_redeemed

Oh, don’t make me cry…Poor Hans.

I need to write a fanfic one day in which Hans lives! it has to happen!

@kielah-h

like in Freedom’s Fire you see him as mostly heartless and cruel, but in all the other books he is more humanized–he has a brother, he has a family, he has reasons for why he did what he did. Not that the…

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And btw, for anyone wondering, evil characters will have a separate limit.

@the_lost-journal

I mean, it depends on what you want to do. Basically what’s going to happen is we’re going to cut to a different scene where the villain will have summoned his own group of characters. That’s when we’ll add our villains. But if you don’t care about your character showing up for that scene, I don’t care if you add them now.

@the_lost-journal

Yep, you can add another. (The current limit is actually 4 at this point btw.)

I was planning on having us add villains shortly after we finish the current “scene.”

@keilah-h

(Come to think of it, if you enjoyed this snippet of my worldbuilding you might enjoy my full on WIP I “borrowed” these characters for, I don’t think I’ve ever shown it to you specifically. It’s a junkpile but it’s at least a semi-coherent story and much cleaner than many works I’ve caught glimpses of in the fandom.)

I’m game! I think…[Read more]

@raxforge @ellette-giselle @elishavet-pidyon @calyhuge @liberty @keilah-h

The results are in!

Note: I’m listing these in no specific order to give you all my thoughts

Liberty: First of all, I love your style. I think I’ve read one other thing of yours before, but I don’t remember being blown away by the word choice like I was with the first…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

Rina — Elderstrand, Deepwater, on the ship

Rina panted for breath, dripping water. She was completely soaked after that dive. She glanced up towards the sky, which was now dropping water on them. Maybe it didn’t really matter anyway.

The ship was floating down the river, picking up speed. The soldiers were still chasing afte…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @loopylin @grcr @rae @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @raxforge

Ellis — Elderstrand (Group 1)

Ellis suddenly found himself whisked off the ground and deposited onto a nearby roof, along with the rest of the group…except Marcel.

“No way!” Ellis snapped. “We can’t leave anyone behind!”

Just then there was a thud and the rooftop s…[Read more]

Alrighty, I finally finished reading through all of your stories for the first time. I’m gonna read through them again and then give you my thoughts, so hopefully you’ll have the results by this afternoon.

@whalekeeper @loopylin @grcr @jonas @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @raxforge

Baron (Brutus)—with Group 1, Elderstrand edge

Brutus sighed. “If he calls for help, I will not hesitate to answer, but you must all go on. He is fighting so you can get a head start running, don’t waste it. I’m staying here to make sure he’s alright.”

@calyhuge

because girls think stuff is gross that guys think is funny

Oh…that honestly makes sense.

I’ll give you my thoughts when I give it to everyone else, but I think you’ll be surprised. I’m a farm girl, I’ve seen some gross things.

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @jonas @grcr @loopylin @hybridlore @raxforge

Baron(Brutus)—With Group 1, Elderstrand edge

Brutus nodded, even though he knew the strain on him would probably temporarily cripple him.

He lifted Leon from where he lay on the other rooftop first, bringing him back over to their group. He was still out cold, and…[Read more]

@calyhuge

I wish this forum wasn’t mostly girls

Uh…okay. Out of the blue but okay. I don’t understand how that relates to your story but okay.

@ellette-giselle

Yes, usually I do.