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@keilah-h

There should be 24, so 23 will die, leaving one as winner.

Alpha is the most complex and hardest character to capture I have ever written.

As he ages, he changes drastically which doesn’t help me at all. Nahim is easier cuz before he was fifteen, he was a jolly kid. After the Laxan Invasion he changed a lot but then the arc just goes up and he becomes wiser as he grows older and doesn’t change to much.…[Read more]

@rae

To me, all of those have a distinct flavor, except maybe Igua. I think that Nahim and Alpha definitely are distinct enough. For Silvanis, the fact that he focuses on protecting a specific person, makes him a bit more distinct. So, as long as each character as their own interesting characteristics, I think this is fine.

@whalekeeper ⬆⬆⬆

@jonas @anyone-else

Yes, Nahim’s main trait is being protective. I made him that way, and through the course of Guardian Angels, it is a huge piece of my plot. Nahim would never had been captured if he was protective to te point of being rash, and many people in the story would be dead if he hadn’t saved them.

Alpha isn’t protective to the same…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

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@rae

I agree with everyone else. That would’ve basically been what I’d’ve said.

@rae

I think readers do tend to notice when an author writes about similar ideas.

I don’t think it’s necessarily bad for so many characters to have that motivation, but I would try to avoid having too many of them have it as their main motivation, especially main characters.

I know that all of these characters are from the same universe, but…[Read more]

@karissa-chmil

Thank you, that makes sense.

@grcr

That does help. Thx.

I have been called upon!

@theducktator

1. Cool Username
2. I did make an intro post, but Wyoh ate it 😠
3. I indeed will explain Wyoh

It all began when a mysterious person posted one singular post on an RP, then deleted their account. The one post was their only post, and KP  showed not the slightest information except their username which we saw…[Read more]

@rae

In my opinion, I think you should keep them like that! Being protective is a good quality. I think it shows that they have love for someone (or something). I assume most people in real life are protective—deep down inside.

I don’t know if it is, but maybe it doesn’t have to be the strongest quality for some of them. It could be in the s…[Read more]

@karissa-chmil

I’m sorry, did you post here? If you did, Wyoh ate your post. She’s been real hungry lately…

@loopylin

Yes, it does. We used to have only a couple glitches here and there, but then the ads came, a couple days later I noticed people’s posts disappearing. Every serious glitch has started in February.

Well, Wyoh keeps eating my message.

@whalekeeper

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 I love it so much so far and I’m so excited!!!

@whalekeeper

Yeah, they’re from the same universe, but they’re from different countries. Markus lives in a far southern country (which is actually uninhabited besides him and his dad, and is very much like Antarctica), and Flaz lives in the northern country of Extroit (which is very much like America).

They don’t really know each other that well…[Read more]