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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
And my other character…
Feather–A character I created. She’s sort of tall, has grayish eyes and blond hair. I’d put her in her early twenties. She was trained as a soldier along with her four sisters, so she wears clone/stormtrooper-like armor a lot (if you’ve ever seen any Star Wars films or shows, you’ll get the picture). A wood flute hangs…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Aww, that’s cute!
@Everyone else I’m going to introduce my characters now.
Rinzler–My brother actually created this character. He’s eighteen, very cocky, and he has tousled black hair and brown eyes. He looks something like this, although this isn’t actually a drawing of him. He wears a suit of this type, though.

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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Excellent idea! (Who is Corvina’s author, again? it’s a little difficult to keep track, heh.)
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 She is, heh.
Good for him 😂 because she’s going to be stuck there until someone comes and tells her to do something or gets her out of her head for long enough.
(Smh, most of my best characters have something really traumatic about them, and usually in their backstory, whether they know it or not; because, I do have a character…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
(Majorly making this up as I go, because 13 year old me struggled with descriptions even more than I do now, and was cringingly cliche about some things.)
Zoe
“[Nic]? [Ric]? Where are you?” She whispered the words, her terror strangling her voice to almost nothing, but her desperation forcing them out. Voices echoed through the large room of the…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic I need help, please! in the forum Plotting 4 years, 4 months ago
I am hoping that I can write this well, and will be spending much time on completing it and perfecting it in the expansive future. 🙂
Is your MC dying just because he won’t defend himself/kill someone, or because he sees that Anti isn’t ready to die/has something he needs to do. Obviously someone willing to murder isn’t ready to die, b…
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Meet Zoe. She is a submissive, traumatized, extremely shy young girl with major trust issues but who latches onto strong people and was cursed to be a werewolf by a sorcerer along with two boys (I forget their names, atm) around the age of 14, and as a result has glowing purple eyes. She cannot control when she switches, and cannot resist the…[Read more]
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E. M. Trepke replied to the topic THE WORLDBUILDING THREAD in the forum Fantasy 4 years, 4 months ago
Hello! I’m new to Kingdom Pen. I LOVE worldbuilding! I have a great fantasy world I am working on which I love, cannot describe to others yet, and used to be two different worlds until I realized they were meant to be one world. A large part of my worldbuilding comes from dreams, random ideas, and bit of books I’ve read which have morphed. All the…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic I technically count as new in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 4 months ago
OK, I WANNA WRITE A BOOK FULL OF CLICHES THAT’S HILARIOUS!! BC I JUST HAD THE BEST IDEA FOR SOMETHING TO DO IN IT!!
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
OK I’m just going to post with the shred of Sofia that I have so far!
To briefly sum up: she’s 20, very tall, has brown hair, violet blue eyes, is pretty physically something(what’s a word that means directed?), has a small ax as well as a recurve bow and a knife,  and her personality is one of “only do as much is required, go all the way for…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic I technically count as new in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 4 months ago
Yes, I tend to write when I have nowhere to put my emotions lol (And I have a lot of them!)
I used to do that, too; it’s changed and I’m not exactly sure what I do with my emotions, anymore, lol. I do still write at times when my emotions are high, though. It is relieving, to say the least. (I have a lot of them, too!)
Hmm… I don’t kno…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@denali-christianson Yeah, now you see why I hate Rampart. (Smacks him several times also) But yeah, the hero character in this show’s case–Hunter–I could talk for miles about him. He’s just plain awesome. As are his siblings (four brothers and one sister, although one brother turns evil).
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EmilySF replied to the topic I technically count as new in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 4 months ago
@unsung, ah, makes sense, haha. I probably shouldn’t have assumed, anyway.
Writing is really really good, and serves a lot of purposes in my life. (Some of which may not be the healthiest but are better than alternatives.)
Do you struggle at all with unsupportive family? (Just, out of curiosity…)
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
ALSO YALL….Other then @emilysfcharacter who hasn’t had a scene….Ara is the only girl in the castle and it kinda cracks me up XD
Uh, yeah, sorry about not posting yet. I went to and then realized I literally knew nothing about my character, like really, so I’ve been figuring her out a bit more.
*continues furiously typing out the summary of her…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic *Ahem* functional character problems in the forum Characters 4 years, 4 months ago
@denali-christianson Not me making like all my characters Asian because I’m Asian heh….
Okay I had this convo with someone else a few months ago so let me just copy/paste it here…
for me, i honestly don’t like it when diversity is forced in a book. if you feel like your character should be white, then make them white, if not, then make them…
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Lin replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@denali-christianson Pfft sorry probably shoulda tagged you earlier
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Lin replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago

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Lin replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@denali-christianson I still have all your text in my email from the post lol do you want it
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Lin replied to the topic I volunteer as tribute! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 4 months ago
@denali-christianson (hit send too soon to see newest post)
and now I have gathered another fan hehehehe it’s all coming together——
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