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@rae ahh makes sense. I mean, I don’t think I have a noticeable accent but I chop off the g’s and whatnot when talking sometimes, so I think I’d type my own speech pattern like that too.

ooh interesting! I like that idea, it’s unique. I think it’d be a cool idea that if you’re planning to publish this book/series, to include a guidebook with…[Read more]

@rae I’m ok with that! As long as you stay within the KP guidelines (like, no excessive gore or anything lol) I’m sure it’ll be fine.

@ellette-giselle Considering that you are 18 and fine with early marriage, I trust you when you write about that stuff. I now know you’re not just a 14-year-old thinking that 17-year-olds are super mature compared to you.

You don’t need to change the story in any way. It’s your story, and like I said, my mom was married at 17 and her…[Read more]

@rae ahhh ok sounds really cool.

maybe they just like wearing those hats. I mean, look at him, who doesn’t think that looks cool? I’ve wanted a hat like that since before I ever discovered where it came from.

Also, that style of “hat with brim all the way around” is kinda standard issue if you’re in a hot climate (I mean, think fishing hats…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle oooh yeah I’ve always liked that culture’s style too.

cause like American fiction defaults to sticking a slouch hat on a character when they want to make him obviously Australian, or at least a guy from a desert-y kinda place.

@rae ooh yeah definitely. Hat and all.

What was his nationality?

I don’t think I’m gonna be a part of it because I already put in my two cents.

@savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle I feel like this story forum isn’t the best place for that though.

I think one of you should tag the others in a status update and go at it there. Discussing it here is just gonna ruin the experience of anyone who’s just trying to read the story and has to sift through 3 pages of arguing about a…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings haha I will!

Sometime……

@mineralizedwritings that ship art is too cute

I should get to doing that more

@rae idk who he reminds you of lol

@theshadow thanks, I had a ton of fun drawing him.

@theshadow lol yeah I’ll get to it soon hopefully

Again, it’s your story, you can do whatever you want, I’m not going to stop reading it just because of a character’s age.

@whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @ellette-giselle WHOA WHOA WHOA I DID NOT MEAN TO START A FIGHT.

I’m more inclined to agree with Whaley and Sara’s point of view out of personal experience, but it’s Ellette’s story, and she can do whatever she wants. It’s just as someone who’s closer to 18 than 17, it was weird to me that Sabina’s considering…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings yeah Wingfeather isn’t too cohesive, but in the author’s defense I’m pretty sure it was the first series he ever wrote, and I don’t know how many drafts the story went through.

I do love some of the worldbuilding though.

@linus-smallprint Wow! That was good!

Alan, listen to your father, he’s making some very valid points.

@ellette-giselle god of war????

lol I didn’t expect that to be the one video game soundtrack you liked

absolutely no judgement though, I’ve listened to a few of the tracks and they’re great

@whalekeeper I KNOW. what the heck is wrong with me. HE’S A FLIPPING DECADE OLDER. and I’ve never been a simp before. NEVER. TILL LAST MARCH. WHY. WHYYYYYYYYY.

I am actually very concerned for myself.

I’m glad you like his voice though. The actor who did him totally killed it.

@theducktator lol I’m just gonna have Crosshair come across your charrie

Crosshair

Something crashed in one of the rooms.

Crosshair stepped closer to it, cautious. It banged again.

He darted into the doorway and raised his weapon at it.

Oh. Just a girl. Not Omega, but definitely a human girl. And not an inhabitant of this castle, either,…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle Video game music isn’t just one genre though. It’s very, very widespread over multiple genres.

Now, movie soundtracks and classical composers are the other two things I go to when I want music without words, so I would say it’s good to have decently broad horizons.

I would love to hear what all your soundtracks are tbh.

@ellette-giselle aww Joseph is so cute, and the fact that he’s like “I have parents! You’re my parents!” is too funny.

also, one little issue I have: maybe wait till Sabina’s at least 18? I’m 17 and I wouldn’t marry a guy now even if I knew him very well. My mom got married at 17 but I was under the impression she was the exception.

I’m…[Read more]