Jean Coul

@freedomwriter76 Wow, nice board!!

Also…..Riker was a villain when you first came up with him??? It’s crazy how much things have changed since then! Although, to be honest, his name does have that sort of connotation….. In the How To Train Your Dragon TV shows, one of the dragon trapper villains was named Ryker (They spelled it with a y there…[Read more]

@esther-c No problem!

(Not like my poor charrie wants to get bullied, lol.)

@smiley Awwwww!! I never thought of that, that’s so sad.

Oh and CCC sounds really cool.

My brother and some friends had a story like that about seagulls and eagles…..

It became a household joke. Now our name for political radical is “seagull” lol.

@gwyndalf-the-wise WHHHHAAAAAAA SOMEONE ELSE WHO SHARES MY OBSESSION???? (Cue all the squealing)

XD XD I probably love that show a little too much, but hey….it’s not like every TV show manages to be pretty clean, interesting, and has awesome characters with plenty of fanfic potential…..

@esther-c Ha, that ship name is too funny.

And what is eurochlydon? Why did they need to sacrifice someone to it? (I get why him specifically, because they hate him, but why anyone?)

@godlyfantasy12 Wow I love that! How does she survive?

I think you might’ve told me, but I probably forgot–it was a while ago. You can answer in your series forum if you don’t want to take up space here.

@godlyfantasy12 Aww, I love how Pax has nicknames for all his friends.

how, again, did he come to think of Ara as his sister?

@starshiness Nice! I’m liking it so far!

@esther-c Ok! I’m going to do mine now.

Tech

Computers……

Lots of them.

His talons itched to race across the keyboards.

No one else was there. Was he even allowed to do anything yet?

Tech ran his hand over one of the computers, the plastic and metal somehow calming.

He was named after it, so maybe that accounted for something.

He was…[Read more]

That’s at least what I do. I don’t know about your writing style.

@godlyfantasy12 I’ve been like that before! I still get like that sometimes, actually. And this is with fanfics!

I did what some of the others are advocating. I wrote one of the others first.

I’ve noticed we writers rarely start the story at the beginning……We find a scene in the middle and work from there. So you might want to do that if…[Read more]

@zemira Where are your characters at? I’m planning to bring my currently-wandering charrie into the group with my other one, and I’m wondering if you want them to meet up with her first, since they’re all going in the same direction.

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

Crosshair

“You have no idea who we are, do you?” one man snarled.

“Now, now…w…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 Oh noooooo! What are they going to do to them???

Oh, and my brother’s name is Ethan btw!!

@godlyfantasy12 @whalekeeper

Hunter

The other boy pushed them back with a screech, slashing paint over his art. Paxton whimpered.

So did Hunter, the sound escaping his lips before he really knew why.

He didn’t mean to make him mad! What had he done?

Paxton handed the other kid a piece of candy. How nice of him…….

The boy accepted it,…[Read more]

@joy-calle Hi again!

I think adding another POV is a great idea. It’ll let you show so much more. And you can detail more onto a character if you’re “listening in” on his thoughts.

@freedomwriter76 Those little scenes! are they part of your actual book or just examples?

I have a feeling I’ll love the book about them once you get around to…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 Good. At least he’s happy now…….

Poor Riker though, having lost what I assume is one of his only friends.

@gwyndalf-the-wise Hello again!!

Writing’s been going well! I found out that fan fictions for video games are a thing, so I’m going to try my hand there……we’ll see how it goes……

Oh, and yeah……If I 20 unread emails, I panic, lol. Unless I have them unread for a reason, like I’m going to save them for later.

@smiley Wow, that’s cool! (Y’know, all of the romance in my stories comes from other people’s stories. I have no experience with it myself and don’t really want any, but I love ships in stories for some reason…..)

@freedomwriter76 NOOOOOO FIN

At least he’s in heaven with Jesus now………

(He was a Christian, right? Please tell me he was.)