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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
Hmmmm…..
Well, she’s gotta meet her dad somehow. How about here?
After realizing what they’re doing to the clones (maybe thinking “oh, I’m next!”), she decides she has to escape. He might try to help her, or talk her out of it.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
Well, you could have her ask him how everyone knows her. He doesn’t have to provide a truthful answer….
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
@evelyn-collins Really?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
@evelyn-collins oooh I just read what you wrote recently! The plot is thickening lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@rae lol! Yeah, over where I’m at we feel the same about gnats and mosquitoes. (“Mayfly” is a better name than “Mosquito” anyway lol)
(oh, and when you add Silvanis, you can probably add him in the same general area if you want him and Jaylen to meet.)
Hunter
Mayfly pointed at him, tilting her head.
“You want to know my name?” He realized h…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Hunter
The tiny creature–female, by the looks of her–reached out to touch his tail. He made sure the six spikes on the end were flat against it so they didn’t impale her by accident.
She then seemed to pick up on his question and spelled something in the air using water, but it was a foreign language to him. She leaped through the water,…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic KP Glitch Problems in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 5 months ago
@theducktator yeah. It was 🤣
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Keilah H. replied to the topic KP Glitch Problems in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 5 months ago
@theducktator yep. He was forced to listen to it on repeat for 48 hours as punishment for a crime, and has never been the same.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Worldbuilding Mash-up RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@jonas I’m game either way.
Just expect many of my submissions to be absolute lunacy lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@rae He sounds awesome lol. I can’t wait for my charrie to meet him.
Teleporter incidents? Yeah, Jaylen’s actually no stranger to that. Maybe she’ll tell him about the bread incident of ’79 sometime.
Also, I liked seeing Ilsa’s thoughts. She’s so cute.
@whalekeeper lol Winston is not having it.
Hunter
Something small was moving in the…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@thearcaneaxiom Makes sense!! (Ha, yeah if he stole their souls that’s be really creepy. It makes more sense that he “copies” their minds instead. And it makes sense you could make a kind of AI out of it, too.)
I don’t really consider the roleplays canon either, unless it genuinely fits the story, in which case I’ll make a similar occurrence…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic KP Glitch Problems in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 5 months ago
@whalekeeper I know…..
I’ve got some hilarious stuff to show everyone.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@rae yeah! Definitely will make for some funny interactions.
We can just add anything to this world, right? I’m going to add Hunter into a palace not unlike his ancestor Snake’s, and Jaylen I’ll add into a house she’ll recognize.
Hunter
He awoke in a building, sprawling above him. He recognized it from the old…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Worldbuilding Mash-up RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@thearcaneaxiom Effectively, mental state is a solid form in this universe. Interesting. So a random chunk of mahn could theoretically have a consciousness stored inside of it?
Hey, I’m game for letting him have a few personalities. My characters don’t get much of a say in it lol. You could actually use some of them in your actual series if…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@thearcaneaxiom not a problem!
oh and it’s funny that your character copies the personalities of people he meets by hitting them over the head with rocks. If that’s what he does. It wasn’t super clear to me, but that’s what I got out of it.
I want him to whack all of my characters now and see what he thinks of their personalities lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 5 months ago
@loopylin yeah, definitely!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@rae wow nice character! Hunter will probably be like “oh, another Omega” and start being overtly protective lol.
oh, and Hunter will probably find Silvanis to be suspicious but cool.
Jaylen, meanwhile, will probably follow him EVERYWHERE, as he’ll probably remind her of both her brother and Mundy (especially with the knives and sniper rifle…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@whalekeeper all right, cool! @rae
Hmm…..
I might add two characters. They’re completely unrelated. One is a character I know and love deeply, and the other is technically a somewhat self-insert who became her own thing (and got a halfway decent boyfriend in the process apparently 😳😳)
Meet Hunter and Jaylen!
Sergeant Hunter R.…[Read more]
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