Gwyndalf the Wise

@walkbyfaith

Welcome to Kingdom Pen, Marie!! I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, homeschooled, fiction-writing, God-loving, teen girl! I’ve written fantasy and dystopian, but I have ideas for books in the genres of historical fiction and contemporary.

Time for questions!

1. Since you’re a semi-avid reader, 😉 , wha…[Read more]

Oh I love it!! Totally gonna be participating! This is gonna stretch me a bit, but it’ll be fun. 😏

@rae @whalekeeper

Felicity 

“Well, is there anywhere else to look? Other than that address you were sent.”

My brain is empty today so my rps are short

@whalekeeper

I know I always say this, but I feel guilty taking up so much space on the page.

Your writing is so cool, though. Make your rps as long as you want! It’s not like we’re going to run out of paper or something

@whalekeeper

yes it’s very important! If you don’t agree though, just remember it when you’re a little old lady 😂 elderly people can forget to drink and get really dehydrated.

If you don’t like cringe romance, you won’t like it. The first book is pretty solid and I really liked it, however the plot is only complete with the whole…[Read more]

@jonas

Yeah, the sleepless are interesting. That reminds me: I was surprised to see a sleepless in Edgedancer. That was one of the few things that surprised me.

I liked how he continued the trend of Lopen accidentally swearing his oaths after the action is over XD.

Yeah 😂

@jonas

Yeah those theories definitely make sense!

I agree on the fact that the Dawnshard was the most interesting aspect. I also thought it was interesting seeing how the Sleepless communicated, and more of what their goals are.

The rest was more simply entertaining in the Lopen-is-great sense

@whalekeeper

Oh noo! Hydration is important!!!

They are basically sci-fi retellings of fairy tales all jammed into one world. So like rupunzel, cinderella, snow white, and little red riding hood, but the stories have been adapted to fit a sci fi world. I do not recommend the second one but the 1st and 3rd have been really good so far! The main…[Read more]

@jonas

I’ve read them both, and enjoyed both, what were your other thoughts?

@hybridlore

Yeah it is, actually. 😂 I didn’t want to write about someone getting married so I chose adoption instead. XDD

Oh and for those of you wondering, Ami’s type 2.

@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @hybridlore @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @smiley @savannah_grace2009 @rae @grcr @anyone-else

Sooo… I was working on some “character-building” the past day or so, and I’ve fixed my MCs’ character arcs/internal conflicts to tie into the theme more and so I can write them better/more accurately. (With a l…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Nooo Marcel the poor boy! He needs to see someone for that head injury

(But also yay cuz I might finally have an excuse to light Felicity’s short fuse)

@smiley

Ack! Sorry I’m late, but I finally found time to read this. M’kay…

So the one big thing that I noticed was a lot of telling and info-dumping. I could handle the information, but it’s not always enjoyable to read a bunch of backstory. Stuff like that should be sprinkled throughout. Besides that, there were a few places where things…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Of course! (:

@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore @highscribeofaetherium @jonas @anyone

Ok, so I have bad writing, but my worst writing I deleted years ago!!! 😭 There was three chapters of a book I wrote on my parents computer when I was like 7, I tried to start a few books when I was 9/10/11, I had an almost completed book around 11, but I still have a book I…[Read more]

@rae

but I guess Sef isn’t there so… Whatever.

Oop, sorry, I assumed they started to switch partners like everyone else

@savannah_grace2009

I think so! You can go ahead and RP first if you want. 🙃

@whalekeeper

Lol I thought you didn’t see my post but it turns out I didn’t get a notif because I’m now mimeralizedwritings😂

Hi!! (Sorry about seeing this only now, the KP ghost regularly eats my notifs)

Totally ok!

Doing okay, especially since it’s Christmas. I got some drawing books and a really beautiful art book by a guy named Omar Rayyan. A…

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@whalekeeper

I love itttt. Marcel is the best