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Ruth replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
Wyoh! Can’t I edit things without you deleting them!?
@scoutfinch180 @jonas @grcr @whalekeeper @anyone-interested
Chapter 2 part 2
Evening came, leaving the Banorian landscape lit by flickering torches under a deep blue sky. The trees still rippled in the wind, but they were now just dark shadows.
Nahim walked away from where he had left…
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Ruth replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
@scoutfinch180 @jonas @hybridlore @grcr @whalekeeper @anyone-interested
Chapter 2, part two
Evening came, leaving the Banorian landscape lit by flickering torches under a deep blue sky. The trees still rippled in the wind, but they were now just dark shadows.
Nahim walked away from where he had left Mandin, the Ward in the annual meeting at the…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 6 months ago
Aww thanks girl! <333
Thanks guys.
I find it weird and dumb how there are kids who are so obsessed with sports and look down on more “academic” things (honestly what are they doing at school?)
Exactly!! You’re at school to learn, not to play sports….contrary to popular belief XD
because publi…
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Ruth replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
@scoutfinch180 I know I haven’t replyed yet, but i got a idea and am trying to run with it, plus I’ve been sick. @whalekeeper @grcr @jonas @hybridlore
Chapter 2: Nahim, the Last Nayhelm
the first part
“Nahim. Nahim!”
Mandin waved his large hand in front of his 19-year-old friend’s hidden face. “Nahim, what’s up?”
Nahim seemed to be the only…
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hybridlore replied to the topic Most Common Character Traits? in the forum Characters 2 years, 6 months ago
Ohh, gotcha! It’s a fantasy race, then?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Most Common Character Traits? in the forum Characters 2 years, 6 months ago
Those people didn’t choose to have brown eyes, and if they had a choice, I doubt many people would pick to.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Most Common Character Traits? in the forum Characters 2 years, 6 months ago
Personality-wise, my characters have all sorts of different traits… I’m an INTP, but I try to make my characters different myself,
Hey, awesome! We’re twins xD
That’s really interesting! I don’t know if I’ve honestly tried to write from the perspectives of extroverted characters before … I guess I struggle with character development a lit…[Read more]
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hybridlore started the topic Most Common Character Traits? in the forum Characters 2 years, 6 months ago
So this was an interesting idea I had yesterday… I was wondering which traits are most commonly picked for character appearances (and personality, too).
For example, even though my hair is more of a dirty blonde, most of my main characters have dark brown or black hair, and gray or brown eyes. I’m not really sure why I do this XD I guess I just…[Read more] -
Raegan Aubrey replied to the topic Hello, good people! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 6 months ago
Hello @grcr!
it’s nice to meet you!!! yeah it’s never boring around our house🤣 I’m probably a third of the way through.
my favorite color is teal, I have no idea how many characters I have. I’ve never counted 😂 I’d say somewhere around thirty to forty? First person (I walked) for sure. Characters! I am SO BAD at world building! 🤣&…[Read more] -
Ruth replied to the topic Hello, good people! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 6 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Anyone want to critique my plot? in the forum Plotting 2 years, 6 months ago
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Lydibug replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
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Lydibug started the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Heeey! So, I had an idea.
Your charrie is lost in a creepy old house and can’t find their way out. And it is haunted… BUT, it’s by the ghost of their past (credit goes to Whaley Zabinski for the idea of the ghost of their past). So lots of scary ghost and backstory drama. The person whose ghost it is can be the only one who can see it (or…[Read more]
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Allison posted an update 2 years, 6 months ago
@esther-c @jonas @freedomwriter76 @hybridlore @grcr @euodia-vision @everyone
Does anyone use Grammarly? I was wondering if it is as good as everyone says. I’m thinking about using it to make some minor corrections on my book, but want to know if its reliable.
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 6 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
@grcr @anyone-else
the last part of chapter one
He ran until he finally came to a staggering stop and glanced behind him. The air over his home was black with smoke. The horrible memories flashed through his mind. His dead brothers and parents. Vorgan. The duel. The hopelessness. The rescue. All was too vivid.
His young features contorted.…
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 6 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 6 months ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 6 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Lol for the longest time I thought Lefse was talking about the Norwegian bread stuff and I didn’t realize it was a ship name XD
Lol! yeah, I can see how that would be confusing though…
But anyway, that scene was cute! I like them
Thanks!
lol! Glad you like it!!
They are so cute!! 💖💖🥰 Poor Sef!! 😭
I know &…[Read more]
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That name sounds familiar, but I don’t have any idea what it is.
Heres an excerpt I found online:
“Grammarly is an American cloud-based typing assistant. It reviews spelling, grammar, punctuation, clarity, engagement, and delivery mistakes in English texts, detects plagiarism, and suggests replacements for the identified errors. It also allows users to customize their style, tone, and context-specific…[Read more]
@acancello
I’ve heard of it and used it once…but it’s kinda annoying because it corrects your style. So it would say sentances aren’t grammatically correct because they aren’t….but I wanted it that way because it sounds better and it’s just my style. It was annoying and I had no use for it so I deleted it. I think Google Docs works fine for…[Read more]
Hmmm, alright. I also think that would be annoying. Thank you! 🙂
Ehh… I’ve heard of it, but I’ve never used it before… sorry, I guess I can’t help much…
Thats ok 🙂 I just found out about it today too
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I have actually used it lots of times before! I don’t use it while writing though, because it gets kind of acting, but any type of editing it would be great for. Did you have any other questions in specific about it?
Haha whoops, I just realized you said you didn’t know what to ask. Umm, I think it’s definitely worth downloading. I never got premium but you can still do a good amount of stuff with the free version, like spell check, which is really good for just finding typos xD. And then you can look at your tone and see if any of your sentences aren’t…[Read more]
Yes it did, thank you! 😀
I’ve never personally used it, but I know a friend who’s used it. But I haven’t heard much about it from her, so I guess I’m not much help. XD Honestly, I’ve never had any interest in getting something like Grammarly because I don’t struggle with spelling and grammar too much and I have a friend who’s willing to edit my books for me. Lol. So yeah. XD
Yeah, I would mainly use it to catch all the little things I missed, and after, I may just hand the whole thing and a red pen over to my mom since shes good at things like that XD
Lol XD
i use the web extension! it gives me suggestions on everyhting i write, whether it be an email, short story or google search! i really like it!
👍 Thanks!