@grcr
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Allison replied to the topic Clearest Rivers | A poem I wrote in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years, 8 months ago
I really like your poem! So the way I see it is basically the last two lines you wrote,
“Even if our country goes insane,
The clearest rivers will still remain.”
So kind of like even if our country goes insane, the clearest rivers (people?) still remain?
If I totally did not understand it, dont worry I do not know if I am the best at…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Clearest Rivers | A poem I wrote in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years, 8 months ago
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KydonAndWillow replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Next chapter!
Arriving at the twin’s home, Kydon shook himself from his reverie. But just before he crested the hill, he stopped. He heard a sound that he had not heard since before O’Fell was a ruin—the jingle of a horse’s reins and the creak of a wagon. Kydon dropped to all fours and crawled to peek over the top of the hill.
A large w…[Read more]
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KydonAndWillow replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Ok! I will work on that!
Conrad and Caleb have a last name… but unfortunately, it can not be disclosed at this time in the story…
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KydonAndWillow replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
The next chapter ^
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KydonAndWillow replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
So… His giving the muffins to the twins is a flashback of sorts. I really need to fix it so it isn’t so confusing as to when the flashbacks start and end. Thanks for the input! I’ll try to add the next chapter soon.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@grcr um……probably both.
I use dragons a lot more in my stories, but I have a lot of dinosaur characters and use them sometimes to make dragons.
Plus, if you think about it, dinos and dragons are kinda the same thing. Before the word “dinosaur” was created, scientists actually called the fossils they found “dragons” and used the two words i…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@grcr Well, I’ve never watched it except in bits and pieces, but I’ve read all the books and such based on it and know about the lore, and I think Blue is awesome (most of the characters are but she’s special for some reason lol)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@grcr you’re welcome!
oh and thanks, she’s a favorite character of mine too!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @whalekeeper @grcr @lydibug @godlyfantasy12
I finally have a character!
Her name is Sky, but she insists on everyone calling her Skyraptor, so that’s what she’ll be called here.
She’s a small green Velociraptor with deep blue stripes, one on each side of her body (think Blue from Jurassic World but green, not gray, and…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@grcr I love your signature thing down on the bottom! I remember that movie! (my parents showed it to me a little while ago)
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Lydibug replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Thanks! 😊
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HighScribe replied to the topic Hello in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 8 months ago
Yep.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Hello in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 8 months ago
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Allison replied to the topic Hello in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 8 months ago
Heres some tags…
@esther-c @hybridlore @smiley @freedomwriter76 @janellebelovedpig @whalekeeper @kyronthearcanin @grcr @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @euodia-vision @everyone else! Sorry if I misspelled/forgot any!
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Light replied to the topic Hi everyone! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 8 months ago
Cool! That was a cute story idea. 🙃
Aww thanks! 🥰 Yeah it was cute. My mom and a friend of mine both think that I would be good at writing children’s books, and I do want to write those too, so who knows, one day I might turn in into a children’s book 🙃😊
Yeah… very scary… I used to want to be a marine biologist, but I think I’d rather just…
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Hi everyone! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 8 months ago
I really love the depth of your cultures! It all sounds so cool, and I am definitely still interested! How did you come up with your conlang? I really like it!
Thanks! Which one?😅 They each have their own, though I’m assuming you mean Lasi’el? Lasi’el is the most developed of my languages, and one of my favorites. I wanted a language made of…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Hi everyone! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 8 months ago
Oh, my apologies! Breaking people was never my intention😂
Thanks😅 Yeah, there’s a lot of unique perceptions of reality that would occur in each of them. Era five specifically though, I realized would create a very sad worldview in everyone, and it would become very worldly for many different reasons. So I’m thinking…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Sure! The Island is pretty much up for interpretation. There is at the moment a castle ruin and a lot of cliffs, so even a snow caped mountain would fit right in.
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whaley replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
They act so much like real bros 😂
Mine only goes on two legs too, so… *shrug* Actually, I think Koshka’s characters go on two legs.
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