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RAE replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
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NAHIM
The girl in front of him slightly chuckled.
“Well… first question, I don’t know. Second question, I really don’t know either but they seem like a fun bunch. And third question, my name is Azar Hedieh*. Your name is…?”
His eyes quickly flicked to someone…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
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Kari
Now that Ottoline was dancing with Hugo, Kari found herself alone again. The new guy with the lightsaber thing didn’t seem very friendly, and this girl who had shown up out of the blue was being way too friendly with him, and with Amir. This whole situation was only getting stranger and stranger.
Kari noticed Lane…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
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Hedieh
“Were is this place? Who are these people? And who are you?” The man spouted off questions.
Hedieh couldn’t help but chuckle. He seemed sincere though, so she answered, “Well… first question, I don’t know. Second question, I really don’t know either but they…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic NaNoWriMo! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Ok awesome!!
Also I don’t do the official nanowrimo because I’ve heard some concerns about their focus being off… I don’t know enough about it to say though.
Yeah, I’ve heard a few things too. That’s why I didn’t really want to join their community. I definitely prefer KP. 😅
Alrighty! It will be fun. 😁 (And probably…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
I can bring Kari over to talk to Lane if you want. Currently she’s not doing anything either since Ottoline is dancing with Hugo.
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Esther started the topic NaNoWriMo! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @sarafini @smiley @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @rae @acancello @keilah-h @whalekeeper @anyone-I-missed-or-anyone-interested!
Hey everyone!
November will be here before we know it, so I was wondering if anyone is planning to participate in NaNoWriMo this year.…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
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NAHIM
‘This is wrong. I shouldn’t be here.’ Nahim saw no sign of hostility, but he didn’t want to turn his back to a crowd of people (mostly men too) when there was no one to protect his back while he cut down the door. He tensed as a door opened. Slightly re…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
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Hedieh
Hedieh did a quick twirl in front of the mirror, watching the skirt of her dress spin around her. She bounced on her toes, happy to be wearing the sparkling, baby pink ball gown. It was her favorite color.
She did one last check of her hair and makeup, then…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
And then something came over her.
In one deft motion, she let go of his hand and shoulder and wrapped her arms around his waist, pressing the side of her face against his vest in an embrace. She took a few shuddering breaths, trying to keep control of herself. She was not going to cry.
Once Hugo recovered from his shock, she…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
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Aranel replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 7 months ago
That’s cool! I love animation (though I can’t do it myself at all). Yeah, first person can be tricky, lol.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
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Okay guys, so since Hugo and Ottoline are kind of a thing, I realized that they have a pretty big age gap. Hugo’s 16, and Ottoline’s only 13! I’m not a fan of age gaps like this during teen romance, so I’m moving Ottoline’s age up to 14/15 so it’s not as weird.
Ottoline
“Well, I…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
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Ok, since we have a weird guy to girl ration, I’ll go ahead and add in Hedieh. It’ll be fun. 😉
Amir
Amir squirmed in his seat, trying to get comfortable. He hated wearing this tight-fitting suit, but if it was for tradition, then he told himself he wou…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@esther-c @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer
Heres a short one that might get the party started!
Hugo
Hugo waited on the couch for Ottoline to get ready, he could only imagine how she looked with makeup on. He had a nice chat with Amir, Lane and David who were already dressed up in suits like…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
This is totally out of the norm for anything Victorian era but what if they did some group dances?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Okay!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I’m pretty sure that the house only said that they had to participate in the party itself (I just looked back and read it), not that everybody had to dance. So this might work.
Everybody has to wear a mask and dress up, I’m assuming.
Except now we have to decide which boys are going to sit in the corner and which ones are going to dance.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I think we should have a small group of “annoying” guys that eat food and do “stupid” and funny stuff in the corner, lol. Then we still have some guys sharing the girls, but it’s not like a 10 to 2 ratio, and there’s still dancing.
What do you think?
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
If we’re going for anything similar to a Victorian ball, then I think the guys are expected to dance with different girls, but since we’re trying to put characters from multiple eras in the same room idk how this should work.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
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Yeah….I wasn’t sure if you danced at a masquerade ball…but that makes sense.
I mean, at some parties the boys just sit and talk about stupid stuff and eat food and make dumb jokes and do the macarena….so not everybody would have to have a girl to dance…[Read more]
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