@grcr
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Thanks for understanding!! I kind of am still a little worried that nobody will like it the other way XD but I’m happy that I got an answer from God and that makes me feel a lot more confident.
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
@acancello @grcr @hybridlore @esther-c
I’ve been praying about this today…and I just got a strong sense that God wants me to keep the beginning like I had it…like the second link.
I just feel a lot better about the way I had it before. I’m not sure why…I just get anxiety every time I think about starting it that way, and feel immediate…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
You guys, thank you so much for reading it and for everything!! I was kinda scared for some reason that nobody would be interested to even look at it!
The first one does pull me in better and I want to read more, but I just love the description and feel of the second, however, it may be a bit slow for the beginning…
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hybridlore replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Yeah, I did notice that! Maybe Lilitu’s chapter could come after Sef’s?
Definitely! I hope you figure it out!
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Ohh! I never thought of that before!!!
That makes a lot of sense, actually.
Maybe I could go something like this:
1. Prologue
2. Memory (chapter 15 of the second link, shows Sef and Neveah picking flowers with Hanna)
3. Nothing (go to Lilitu and Livia)
4. Stolen (where Sef and Neveah get seperated)
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
@jonas @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium @rae @vinagirl @trailblazer @grcr @esther-c @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @acancello @hybridlore @anyone-else
Okay, guys. I need serious help. My novel is kind of going nowhere…because I don’t know which way to start it!!!
I have two beginnings for my story. One jumps straight into…[Read more]
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RAE posted a new activity comment 10 months, 3 weeks ago
@grcr interesting concept! I think I would join if we had one, but I probably wouldn’t start it.
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Ok! Thank you!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 3 weeks ago
@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @grcr
Rally!
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Sara posted a new activity comment 10 months, 3 weeks ago
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Sara posted a new activity comment 10 months, 3 weeks ago
@grcr
I love that! I’m not really good at writing poetry XD
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 3 weeks ago
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RAE posted a new activity comment 10 months, 4 weeks ago
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RAE posted a new activity comment 10 months, 4 weeks ago
@grcr @hanako The names I thought of were:
Thurston
Asher
Derk
Some others I don’t remember mainly cuz I made them up and then scrapped them. I almost named him Twen, but it didn’t sound right.
He doesn’t seem like a nature guy, more a…Actually, at times e gives me a Steve Rogers vibe,you know, stubborn, doesn’t give into fear
Ugh! My cat is…[Read more]-
I see.
Alright! I’m gonna do some more thinking and I may have some ideas later…
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@grcr
Thank you!
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RAE posted an update 10 months, 4 weeks ago
@calyhuge @jonas @esther-c @freedomwriter76 @hanako @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @beth-torres @whalekeeper @loopylin @savannah_grace2009
* steeples fingers and puts elbows on table *
So, recently I’ve been drawing a charrie with blonde hair and blue eyes, he’s a young man, sometimes looks like no more than a boy in my drawings. He’s a soldier,…[Read more]-
Thoughts, not lights. Oh, and I meant to say whispers not ispers, if you can tell
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@rae I really like using the names of elements and abstract ideas for the names of my characters, like Victory, Hope, Wind, Silence…etc. I think they make pretty good ones. 🙂
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*taps fingers together*
Alright… names are my specialty (sometimes).
Did you want an actual “real” name, or would anything work? I only ask because nature-ish names were the first to come to my head… kinda like what Hanako said she liked.
Oh, and what were the names you thought of already? That might help me understand your “theme”.
Without…[Read more]-
@grcr @hanako The names I thought of were:
Thurston
Asher
Derk
Some others I don’t remember mainly cuz I made them up and then scrapped them. I almost named him Twen, but it didn’t sound right.
He doesn’t seem like a nature guy, more a…Actually, at times e gives me a Steve Rogers vibe,you know, stubborn, doesn’t give into fear
Ugh! My cat is…[Read more]-
I see.
Alright! I’m gonna do some more thinking and I may have some ideas later…
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@grcr
Thank you!
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Oooh, names. That’s one of my favorite parts of character creation. Let’s see here… Here are some ideas (with the help of Google XD):
Enzo
Orion
Grayson
Wyatt
Colten
Malcolm
Rex
Phoenix (I actually know a girl by this name, but apparently it’s a boy name too)
Bryce
Kian
Ryder
Griffin
Royce
Tryp
Zander (or Xander)
Theo
Gunnar
Maverick (I persona…[Read more]-
Woah, ok, that was a lot more than I thought. XD I got tired of scrolling through the baby name article and picking and choosing which ones I thought were cool so I didn’t add any more. 😂
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Ah, Kian is one of my favorite names 💛
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Hmm… names names names…
I can’t think of anything right now :/ I’ll let you know if I get any good ideas.
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@esther-c I like Justus, only problem, I know a really sweet guy named Justice, and every time I hear that name I think of him and…This charrie is so opposite of the Justice I know…anyways, thank you for the list!
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Ah, I gotcha.
Yeah, of course!
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RAE replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 4 weeks ago
Wyoh! Can’t I edit things without you deleting them!?
@scoutfinch180 @jonas @grcr @whalekeeper @anyone-interested
Chapter 2 part 2
Evening came, leaving the Banorian landscape lit by flickering torches under a deep blue sky. The trees still rippled in the wind, but they were now just dark shadows.
Nahim walked away from where he had left…
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RAE replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 4 weeks ago
@scoutfinch180 @jonas @hybridlore @grcr @whalekeeper @anyone-interested
Chapter 2, part two
Evening came, leaving the Banorian landscape lit by flickering torches under a deep blue sky. The trees still rippled in the wind, but they were now just dark shadows.
Nahim walked away from where he had left Mandin, the Ward in the annual meeting at the…
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Sara replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 months ago
Aww thanks girl! <333
Thanks guys.
I find it weird and dumb how there are kids who are so obsessed with sports and look down on more “academic” things (honestly what are they doing at school?)
Exactly!! You’re at school to learn, not to play sports….contrary to popular belief XD
because publi…
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RAE replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
@scoutfinch180 I know I haven’t replyed yet, but i got a idea and am trying to run with it, plus I’ve been sick. @whalekeeper @grcr @jonas @hybridlore
Chapter 2: Nahim, the Last Nayhelm
the first part
“Nahim. Nahim!”
Mandin waved his large hand in front of his 19-year-old friend’s hidden face. “Nahim, what’s up?”
Nahim seemed to be the only…
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Thanks!! 😅 Thats totally ok! my good ones are far and few… (and sometimes they actually start out as random songs… XD XD)
🙃 yeah… like, I’m good, but something in me is just… 😅
@grcr
“Never forgetting, I cringe over former wrongs.” especially this line…that’s totally me