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@theducktator

First off, funny forum signature.

Second, what are the ages of your characters? because in my experience, different ages respond differently to death. Children (under 10 maybe?) usually know that death exists, but aren’t very afraid of it because they don’t understand. Adults, especially people in their 20s, and 40s, for whatever…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @raxforge

Celarent

Mateo didn’t even know what school was? Celarent sighed. “It’s where you learn stuff. If you want to get anywhere in life, you better figure that out.” He paused. “Oh, right. You aren’t going anywhere in life anyway.” Mateo ought to get expelled. Celarent hadn’t spent days forging paperwork just to attend class…[Read more]

I have a related question. I need help on several other character’s reactions to the fact that one will die, particularly her best friend and grandfather.

@elishavet-elroi

I love Grace Livingston Hill so much! My great grandmother had a beach house, and it was full of old romance novels. Her GLH books were what got me into romance.

@trailblazer

I had several fanfics for the Boxcar Children when I was younger. The one actually had a coherent plot, which is more than I can say for most of my WIPs. XD

I have no idea. I read so many things as a child, and while I still love many of them, I’m not sure how much influence which ones have had on my writing. XD The Green Ember definitely influenced my first WIP though.

@raxforge

Sorry I took so long to respond here. I saw this when I was sick and forgot to get back to it. Anyway, I enjoyed that and don’t really have feedback beyond what others have said.

@esther-c

Hallie NO. I spent that whole scene with that sinking feeling that a character was about to do something stupid and she did. *sigh*

She felt petite next to him, although she had never been the tallest girl around at five feet four inches.

Antonio wasn’t that tall. Hallie guessed that he couldn’t be over five feet ten inches.

My dad is…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

*visible confusion*

@freed_and_redeemed

Well I’m really, really excited about it! I already have money set aside for when it comes out. 🙃

But yeah, certainly trust God on the timing.

aw yay! I’m glad you saw it. Not many people replied so I wasn’t sure. The tags are also being super wonky.

Book 3 is over 2k words rn tho, which is exciting in of itself even if that number seems small for now

@ellette-giselle I saw the announcement, that’s so cool! 💜

and I’m glad you like it🤭

and as for Book #3…welllll….it’s taking a lot longer than expected😅 I’m just now on Chapter 3 and will probably be reworking Chapter 3 still some. Book #3 may end up being longer than both Freedom’s Fire and Broken Shackles, and it has a lot to cover and…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Ahhh! So sweet!! LOVE LOVE LOVE!!

btw, when is the last book going to be out?!?!

Also, have you seen the announcement I had?!?!

@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @ellette-giselle @rae @keilah-h @smiley @theducktator @grcr @godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings @anyone-else-idk-lol

and the rest of the main part of the Baumann fam (also in the 1928 story🤭)

From left to right:

Top: Hans, Eleanor, Himmler (Hans/Felix’s younger brother)

Bottom: Johann, Arndt, Lee (Hans/Ele…[Read more]

@liberty I love that aesthetic, and the blurb!

@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @ellette-giselle @rae @keilah-h @smiley @theducktator @grcr @godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings @anyone-else-idk-lol

part of the Baumann fam in 1928 (the year Felix/Frida got married…and the year that I’m setting a new for fun short story in🤭👀)

From left to right:

Top: Felix, Frida, Adolphus, Dietrich

Bottom: Leo,…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Your censoring is hilarious. 😂

*bows* why, thank you🙂‍↕️

@theducktator @esther-c

Got it, thanks! Alright, it seems like we’re going to be missing some people either way 🙁. We’ll probably just have to pick the one that will be able to support the most people.

@rae

That’s great!! 🤗🥰