@grcr
Active 3 weeks, 1 day ago- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Okay that’s a cool character arc then!!
I’ll keep watching from the shadows and once the draft is over I’ll give you more input on that XD
And I’m glad that Hallie’s talking to God again <33 even if it’s slow progress
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Hey! Scythe! My dad and brothers LOVE that game. Funny thing is, I can’t stand it, but I’m the one that got them into it by buying it for them. 😂 Weirdly enough, I was picturing this kingdom like the scythe art, so that’s super funny.
i really, really like this!!! The narrative and flow and style is 100% a step above…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Thanks! Word was what I was having difficulty with. I’m going to see if I’m allowed to have an account there.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
I do all the time and randomly remember during the day. XD
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aIjmMlC28TT3c9eMUpg1-9ASZ71vtWpJMhcSz_dmI_Y/edit?usp=drivesdk
I’ll send the Word link to your email, if you want that one too.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Can you try resharing the link? It just takes me to the login page. 😭
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Yay! I forgot it was Tuesday. XD
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 5 months ago
Great! Does bio stand for biology? Because if so, wow. Biology is HARD.
Thanks!
I will! I’m not actually taking it until tomorrow, because when we arrived at the BMV, there was a 49 person wait. It’s not usually that crowded, so we’ll go back tomorrow.
Some of the material will depend on state and my…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 5 months ago
don’t all eyes have blood in them though?
True, just his are completely red in the sclera
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Ruth replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 5 months ago
Guy with eyes that look like they have blood in them tries to get revenge on humanoid spider.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Sorry. Didn’t see this until now.
I’m fine, and they’re fine. Was pretty shaken up, but also weirdly cool. It was a very interesting experience all around.
Gave me some insight into writing adrenaline charged characters.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
*enraged because I was never tagged by KP*
I will look at this as soon as I can. aka tomorrow.
Maybe.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
I think we are almost two thirds in?
Okay, sounds good. If needed, you can always catch up after your break.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @linus-smallprint (Hey, do you still want to be tagged on this since I know you’re taking a break soon?) @theducktator
New chapters are out!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
I think the first chapter works pretty well! There was a bit of space in between Jonathan’s time in school and him talking to his brother that sort of felt like filler, but I’m not really sure what else you could put there so it might be fine for a first chapter to introduce the characters and the world.
One note: I was very…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 5 months ago
Wow, I really liked reading this! Are you planning to use the characters in a novel?
The POVs seemed pretty different, I think. Obviously, the longer we spend with the characters, the more we’ll get to know them and see their differences, but I got the impression that Zahn was the peacemaker, Kyler likes to tease and instigate things,…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 5 months ago
Yeah, that’s understandable. I’m sorry 😢 🤗 But hopefully you have a great time at camp! I’ll continue to pray for you guys!
I’ve been doing pretty good! Just started math again so I can finish my class by next year. So… yeah. 😅
@theducktator Praying!
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 5 months ago
I’m going to the BMV to take my learner’s permit test. Please pray that I pass.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 5 months ago
Perfect!
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