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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
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Next Chapters!!! (2 of them!!!)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Thanks.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 Have fun!! 😁
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hybridlore replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 11 months ago
I definitely got that difference, but having you explain it helped even more.
Is Jace younger than the others? You described him as a boy multiple times.
Guy… we didn’t really get much there, but I got the impression he is haunted by his past. Lol.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Of course you would come out of an accident and say this!
🤣
But it did! Really!
See, the car that hit me slowed down like it was going to stop, and then passed me and kept going. All I could think about was, “Dad is going to be so annoyed if he has to take on this hit-and-run investigation and there’s no license plate”
It…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Noooooooo Tyler!😭Poor Easton.😭 I’m glad Hallie is starting to come back to God. Antonio is so sweet.🥰
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
I have a bunch of trips that I’ll be gone for, but you can start without me!!! I’m just not sure how available I’ll be until my schedule frees up in July. And I’m sure I can pop on every now and then in between being gone lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 months ago
<3
I don’t go to camp until this afternoon so I’m really excited and nervous!!!!!!
Aw girl you’re the best <3
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 months ago
One of my youngest friends has cancer. ♥️ It sucks. Don’t let it push people out even if it becomes a normal in your life.
Oh girl I’m so sorry *hugs* I don’t know exactly what you’re going through but I do know that cancer is horrible and sucks to deal with…if YOU need to talk to someone who (to some degree at least) un…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Okay that’s a cool character arc then!!
I’ll keep watching from the shadows and once the draft is over I’ll give you more input on that XD
And I’m glad that Hallie’s talking to God again <33 even if it’s slow progress
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Hey! Scythe! My dad and brothers LOVE that game. Funny thing is, I can’t stand it, but I’m the one that got them into it by buying it for them. 😂 Weirdly enough, I was picturing this kingdom like the scythe art, so that’s super funny.
i really, really like this!!! The narrative and flow and style is 100% a step above…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Thanks! Word was what I was having difficulty with. I’m going to see if I’m allowed to have an account there.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
I do all the time and randomly remember during the day. XD
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aIjmMlC28TT3c9eMUpg1-9ASZ71vtWpJMhcSz_dmI_Y/edit?usp=drivesdk
I’ll send the Word link to your email, if you want that one too.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Can you try resharing the link? It just takes me to the login page. 😭
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Yay! I forgot it was Tuesday. XD
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 months ago
Great! Does bio stand for biology? Because if so, wow. Biology is HARD.
Thanks!
I will! I’m not actually taking it until tomorrow, because when we arrived at the BMV, there was a 49 person wait. It’s not usually that crowded, so we’ll go back tomorrow.
Some of the material will depend on state and my…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 11 months ago
don’t all eyes have blood in them though?
True, just his are completely red in the sclera
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RAE replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 11 months ago
Guy with eyes that look like they have blood in them tries to get revenge on humanoid spider.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Sorry. Didn’t see this until now.
I’m fine, and they’re fine. Was pretty shaken up, but also weirdly cool. It was a very interesting experience all around.
Gave me some insight into writing adrenaline charged characters.
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