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@gracie-j @devastate-lasting @r-m-archer

Think y’all can help me out? I’m struggling some. So I wrote my prologue and my mom and I edited it thru and it is SO MUCH BETTER!! I really like it, but now I’m stuck with the first chapter.

I think now I’ve realized I’m starting with my protagonist in the wrong spot….but I’m still just struggling.…[Read more]

@gracie-j

Maybe….but I’m still a bit wary lol. If I do, it’ll probably be later on. I’ll see. I’d like to see what my mom thinks of that, lol.

@gracie-j

I’m here! Got outta church a few mins ago! What are you up to today? Church was awesome, and got me excited to write more. Hopefully I’ll still have that excitement once I get home 😂.

I wrote the prologue yesterday. It’s not very long and my mom and I are gonna print it out so she can help me with some stuff. So today I’d be startin…[Read more]

@gracie-j thank you so much!! My main problem is usually word usage, stuff like that. My mom is gonna help me out by showing me what she means when she says that (she helps me a lot)

@devastate-lasting Drafting buddies!!

@scout-finch180 Nice! It’s a seven book fantasy series. I’m drafting the first one.

@devastate-lasting @gravcie-j @kathleen-ramm @r-m-archer

So I’ve decided to start drafting early! Gonna try to start today! I’m excited but also unsure if that makes any sense lol.

I wanna break the mold on “all first draft are terrible”. I know it’s supposed to be encouraging, and it is, but the better the first draft and more time I take, t…[Read more]

@william-starkey

think ive got a plan. Still wanna use the Cheyenne and Apache, but I’m just gonna make a few phrases and words I might need.

as for the other two, I’m really gonna start now in learning the languages a bit. I have time to work on those, and enough time to work on phrases and words for the 1st language. Thx for ur hel…[Read more]

@r-m-archer

Thx!!

@william-starkey

Thank you for the tips! And yea, probably the newer versions. So, I do think it would awesome if I could thoroughly learn about my languages to the point I could one day write using them, but as long as I’m able to achieve the phrases and sentences I need for my series (when I write the series) that will be good.

see, I’m a ver…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting

Thx! Couldn’t remember his new thingy XD

SO @william-starkey, any chance you could give me some tips??

@devastate-lasting

Apparently I write like Cory Doctarow or however u spell it…..not sure who that is. XD

So, don’t really have many social platforms….and due to the way my life is (sheltered homeschooler) I’m afraid I won’t be of much help. But good luck to you and God bless!! Hopefully it works out!

Hey, do you watch any authortubers or youtuber? If ur subscribed and a regular, if u ask or email them they might give ya a shout out. You tuber…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting

K so all of them would rather b faced with rats. Except maybe November.

Ara has had a bad experience as a child with a snake. So maybe November wouldn’t mind getting revenge by fighting a snake XD.

Jocelyn has a pet/best friend who’s small and furry, so she’d probably rather be faced with a rat. But snakes would be an…[Read more]

@gracie-j

Hmm. I think all 3 would prefer doing it for someone they know, but Ara would also be willing to sacrifice herself for strangers in a dangerous situation. The others might too.

my characters are too nice XD

Definitely been a hot minute since I’ve been chatting XD. Probs won’t be on here a whole lot, just to let y’all know. I’ve really just been kinda chilling, doing my own thing. I’ve been working one some character stuff and worldbuilding.

I will do one question tho.

@r-m-archer

Ara and November-The first way

Jocelyn: The opposite.

@r-m-archer Yea. I’m…definitely struggling a bit. I really want to worldbuild well, but some of the questionnaires just don’t work for me. I’m not sure what to do except come up with something myself, but that in itself is hard too.

Should I just start taking notes on what I know? Kinda like what you’re saying? I use Scrivener  (sometimes word…[Read more]

@gracie-j

I think it’s on this other site.
Not sure what it’s called.

@gracie-j

Heya!

So I do have a book published, but it’s not really for sale. I mean, you can buy it, but it isn’t really been edited as well as I’d like and I wrote it when I was 14 so…..ya.

BUT, I’m hoping to publish my standalone once it’s finished! (Working title: Reven) and that probably won’t be till next year (I hope it’s next year lol…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting

Yea I wanna be done with the first draft of my standalone, the work building for the first book in my series and the summary for that same book before December is done.

That way, when the new year rolls around, I can start on draft 1 of my first series book (if I’m ready to), edit my standalone (after my mom reads it 😂) and m…[Read more]