Gold_Hummingbird

SO Because I don’t have many scenes written…I don’t have many lines of dialogue to share…BUT I REALLY WANT TO SHARE SOME SO HERE I GO!

These are from Arabella- (These may make no sense…a lot of my dialogue is like one sentence phrases…)

The girl with ebony hair.

Ara’s throat stung.

“Who are you?”

 

Her grandfather nodded and hande…

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Can we get this up and running again with brand new lines from characters? I still don’t really have many….but maybe we can expand this to be lines of not just dialogue but just very short bits of our books?

@kathleenramm @koshka @keilah-h@elanor @jodi-maile @scripter-of-kingdoms @morgan @elishavet-pidyon @annabelle @avacoulter @faith-q@power [Read more]

@thelobsterlover

What about “Pitch black fury, blind with rage.”

would that help?

@thlobsterlover

Oh my gosh thank you soooo much!!!! Because I honestly need help when it comes to “what to actually DO to fix things 😂” so this helps SO MUCH!! Ahhh!! I’ll definitely be taking your suggestions!!!! Thanks!!!

They don’t turn into the animals, but…. I am thinking there is a way that they can slowly start becoming more and more “creature/monster like” instead of human, but it all depends on if you allow the Animal within you to take control.

And as you can guess, the Middle boy struggles the hardest with this….

thus, he ends up growing a pair of w…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Thx so much!

As for the middle boy I haven’t figured out everything about him, so can’t quite answer all those questions but definitely some things to think on!!

The abilities aren’t much of a spoiler when it comes to how they work.

I’ll use the youngest as an example-

His creature is the mouse type one, so he ends up havi…[Read more]

Also, Im going to do approach the POV kinda like the wingfeather saga. All 3 siblings are POV characters. But there is one that is the real Protagonist of the entire story.

While honestly my favorite character is the youngest (it usually is) the protagonist I believe is the Middle boy. I believe he’s going to be the one whose voice will have t…[Read more]

@kathleenramm @koshka @keilah-h @elanor @jodi-maile @scripter-of-kingdoms@morgan @elishavet-pidyon @annabelle @avacoulter @faith-q @power @devastate-lasting @not-so-secret-secret-assassin @joy-caroline @mkfairygirl @abigail-m@autumn-rebecca  @e-k-seaver @daisy-torres @gracie-j @libby @kayleigh-idea @r-m-archer @maryg3 @scoutfinch180 @writerlexi1216…[Read more]

@power

ahhh gotcha! Thx!

@power

tho I am a tad confused what u meant by losing a line at the end??

@power

Whoa….

Ok so I honestly….don’t rlly get any of that but when you said everything evened out except a few things actual technical poem wise, I’m like….

What…? I…didn’t even try honestly but that makes me so happy! THANK YOU SO MUCH BECAUSE NOW I’M GOING TO GO AND MAKE IT PURPOSEFULLY RIGHT 😂 cuz it pretty much already is!

ahhh…[Read more]

@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h

So to answer some questions it is in paragraph form in the book. The way it posted is pretty much how it is in the draft as of rn.

It is for the Cirque book!

Spotlight and clown are in there because it is in the Cirque book. Hope that sheds some light!

I’m not rlly sure about meters or stanzas or anything. I…[Read more]

Now let me be clear…model the sacrifice, not the mistakes!! Lol! Janner is not Christ, nor a mirror for Christ.

Christ was our sacrifice, and then He called us to sacrifice for others, to show them His love as He showed it to us. That’s what Janner did, allowed the Maker to use him to show the Maker’s love.

just wanted to be clear I was n…[Read more]

@trahia-the-minstrel

Umm…this may be reaaaaaaal weird…maybe I’m just living under a rock but….

What in da world is the Author Conservatory? If ya don’t mind ma asking? Never heard of it!

Another thing that helped me was realizing that Christ was my Janner (minus the sins, selfishness and all of Janner’s mistakes)

Christ gave himself, to undo my brokenness, just as Janner had to undo Kalmar’s and all of the other people’s.

And I want to be a Janner for someone else. Does that make sense? It hurts, but there’s beauty in it.

Ch…[Read more]

@annabelle

I’m more at peace today, my mom helped me because she read it. There was beauty in it. It couldn’t be Kalmar, it wouldn’t work. Janner had to grow in order to Sacrifice.

he was selfish throughout the series and he realized that. In realizing it, he was able to succumb to the Maker’s will, and be the Seed that was willing to be p…[Read more]

I finished the series today. Everytime I think of Janner my heart gets depressed….I see the beauty in his sacrifice but I cry every single time. And I know it’ll take a few days to get over but I’m devastated. Definitely gonna read that doc to see if it at least helps some lol

@joy-caroline

Thx!! So this one isn’t my Allegorical fantasy fiction but it does have some allegorical elements, such as the Dark One representing the Devil and other things, God is in it, but it’s not based on a Bible story.

but the fantasy world they’re in is the same world my Allegorical Fantasies take place in (almost like how our Bible…[Read more]