GodlyFantasy12

@godlyfantasy12 I can be like that too, actually…I don’t like being around a lot of loud people. What is she afraid of specifically? Is it that she has to be “perfect” because she’s the future leader? Is it because she just doesn’t like a lot of people? Is there someone in specific she’s avoiding? Do they dislike her for something she did (like…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 Welcome back!

I’m fine with that. It won’t mess too much with the group that @godlyfantasy12 and I are in, if we make it so Riker kinda strays off a little then reappears a few minutes later. Cross and Pax just won’t question why he’s wearing different clothing, I guess.

@godlyfantasy12

Learn to loooove without consuuuuuming 😂 I’m glad I influenced you

@godlyfantasy12

I like the start to this scene! It has this mysterious, anything-could-happen-next feeling.

A few random ideas I had reading it were:

– Ara accidentally bumps into somebody’s stall and an expensive thing falls and shatters at her feet. There could be shouting, Ara’s guilt and panic, shards of glass all around her…

– Or a…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I’m comfortable in large crowds, so I’m not sure how much I can help. 😅 But I like everyone else’s ideas of like the people just pressing against her, Ara seeing someone from her nightmares, or her overhearing some of the people gossiping about her.

@godlyfantasy12

Aww, Ara!

I struggle with crowd anxiety as well. I’m very observant in large crowds, sometimes a little too observant as I read things into a person or situation that aren’t there. Like, someone keeps staring at me therefore my brain starts thinking: am I acting weird? are they judging me? etc.

Maybe you could have Ara keep n…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Yay! I always love the scene clips from your books!

As for how to move on, it seems like the scene is ready to move into action/ active discription (I have no idea what the real term for that is). Having something happen such as someone/something bump into her could be a good transition, or saying something like  “She wove…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I get major anxiety in crowds XD so I completely get it

You could just have people bumping into her and then she feels like people are calling her name and it turns into

For me the slightest things can set me off in a crowd

@godlyfantasy12

I really like your writing style and your description! 😁 I don’t really know too much about your world/story but I’ll try to help 😅

Soo why does Ara have an anxiety attack? Is she like stressed out, or unhealthy, or is there something else . . . ?

@godlyfantasy12

I’m subscribing to this forum. 🙂 Awesome idea!

I really need to get my life in order lol, and sometimes the motivation to RP just comes and goes so don’t be surprised if I’m on like crazy one day/week and then off another, ya know? But yea I wanted to say that.

Totally get that, girl! No worries. Take your time and do what’s best for you!

@mackenzie

Hey!!!!! I’m Smiley (my real name is Miley) I’m a Christian homeschooled girl who loves writing. I’m currently writing three stories two are fanfiction and the other one is my original novel which is a sci-fi dystopian Christian book. I also love softball exercising and stretching, and I’m also a Marvel fan girl.

anyways here are som…[Read more]

@autumnlily

Hey!!!!! I’m Smiley (my real name is Miley) I’m a Christian homeschooled girl who loves writing. I’m currently writing three stories two are fanfiction and the other one is my original novel which is a sci-fi dystopian Christian book. I also love softball exercising and stretching, and I’m also a Marvel fan girl.

anyways here are…[Read more]

@esther-c @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Hey!! Is this rp still going on or are you all taking a break since freedom’s not here? Also I think godlyfantasy said she was busy . . .

Just wondering!! 😉

@freedomwriter76 (when ur back XD0 @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-h @kyronthearcanin @loopylin @esther-c

Ok so this is super embarrassing but I’m going to share some old writing… XD Because I read it and thought it was miserable and must be shared. I started writing last summer, so it’s been almost a year! Woo-hoo! This was my…[Read more]

@orangearmadillo

Hey, bro! Explanation: we write. Join with whatever. Do your thing. We’re not really strict.

(Get ready for some questions 😉)

Some tags: @esther-c @thearcaneaxiom @hybridlore @smiley @keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @godlyfantasy12 @felicity @janellebelovedpig @theotherworldlyhistorian @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Yeah!! 😁

@godlyfantasy12

This is such a cool idea, and I get the RP thing. I’ll be sure to read it as it comes out

@kyronthearcanin

Haha, thanks!!! it is fun 😅😅

*annnndd realizing I barely gave any information* Oops! Trying not to completely brain dump on you guys, but . . . yeah I could see how that would help 😂

And now I’m randomly smiling to myself again 🤣🤣

I was aiming for 16 or so, but I could always adjust it depending on the heist –also she kind of…[Read more]

Now that the pictures are working…

I shall post my moodboards!

Tags… @freedomwriter76 @esther-c @godlyfantasy12 @kyronthearcanin @and I know I’m forgetting people, so you guys too l