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Fynn

Fynn rubbed the back of his neck. “Ok, ok. I’m sorry.” He looked away and rolled his eyes, making sure the fiery little kid didn’t see.

Both Lukas and the boy glared at him, not satisfied with the apology. Fynn sighed. He crouched down near the white haired boy who was clinging to Lukas,…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin @janellebelovedpig @godlyfantasy12 @starshiness @mineralizedwritings

Oooooh! This story is getting really good! I dont know how to add on though…. Does anyone else? Here it is so far!

One bright sunny day, I watched a girl leap over a rotten log and land with a splash in a muddy puddle. She was beautiful,daring and braver tha…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

Hehehe… 😏

Ami

“We can continue through the garden if you’d like,” Clint said with a smile.

Ami was about to answer, but it looked like Clint was looking at something behind her. She turned and saw Tony and Ev at the entrance to the gardens. Tony waved, smiling, but Ev didn’t even look their way. Ami frowned.…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Oh my word…

Like, no kidding, that scene was so good!!! 😄

If that’s your first draft, I can’t wait to see the final draft!! 🤩

@godlyfantasy12

So, I can relate to the laziness/procrastination part 100%!!! 😂 What I do to overcome that, is just force myself to write something. Even if it’s just a sentence or two. At least I got some words written of my WIP. Some days I only write a paragraph or two, some days I write a whole chapter, some days I write half a chapter, and o…[Read more]

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*sobs in i love paxton so much and that aesthetic is amazing*

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Girl that scene was amazing!!!!! I adore Ara so much.

And grateful you could talk to your mom about it all and she was able to speak truth!

I get the putting yourself into a box thing. As I’ve been planning out my WIP, reading blogs, and seeking advice in general, I’m SO prone to just copying what everyone else says is the…[Read more]

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I’ll go ahead and do one for now.

Yosí

His steps had wavered between the front of the group or the back. The adults didn’t give him any instructions, though he had watched them carefully. At last he settled beside November, alert if he was needed.

But he wasn’t quick enough when the time came.

Guilt pressed…[Read more]

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Wow, that scene was so cool!! Ara has slowly become more and more interesting as a character the more I read about her. Your style in this scene kinda reminded me of the Book Thief. (Just a little bit. The style is still unique to you.) Have you ever read it?

I’m glad you were able to talk to your mom and get past your art block!

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Wow that was so good!

@godlyfantasy12 Yeah, Ara can totally join! @freedomwriter76

Dante

A hand shot out of the smoke and grabbed Dante’s arm. His instincts kicked in, and he immediately grabbed his knife and prepared to slash at the hand. But he froze when he heard her voice.

“Come with me, hurry!”

Dante lowered his knife and let Ara lead the way. She pulled him q…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

That is.. Amazing. I am seriously hooked. Thank you so much for sharing!

@godlyfantasy12 Yeah, Ara can totally join!

Dante

A hand shot out of the smoke and grabbed Dante’s arm. His instincts kicked in, and he immediately grabbed his knife and prepared to slash at the hand. But he froze when he heard her voice.

“Come with me, hurry!”

Dante lowered his knife and let Ara lead the way. She pulled him quickly throu…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

So glad you’re feeling better! Go ahead and share them!

Well, I’m here. 😅

As opposed to the norm…

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

Thanks, y’all, for being so patient. I really don’t mind you going ahead with the RP. Even if I don’t have time to respond, reading through the things the group gets into always makes me smile.

Now, I can hop in with Yosí a little this evening, although I can’t be…[Read more]

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I’ve really been struggling to write recently, and I know some of its just pure laziness/procrastination, but I think some of it is also just feeling like my writing has taken a downturn and isn’t as good as it was??

Maybe that’s just me thinking that, but I just don’t feel it’s very great…even though I want it to be and it’s…

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@keilah-h

Thorn

Thorn sighed cheerfully, and stood up, spinning a little in place. “I’m glad we have so much in common.”

Sunlight streamed in through the dorm window, highlighting the golden dust particles, as they swirled uncontrollably around the girl’s skirt.

For a second, Thorn’s mind was free. Free to wander the future ahead.

T…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I get it. Often we feel like we need to be good at and enjoy the things we are supposed to be good at and enjoy. We like to place ourselves in a box that can be easily measured in tidy units of personality and ability. The reality is that we are human, and we are far more complex, and the need to measure ourselves in such a way is…[Read more]

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Also, some other advice I would give is that you might want to read something (specifically something in the genre). Now this won’t help with comparisons but at least for me it helped me relax a bit and helped me get ideas/rethink some of my stuff.

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@otherworldlyhistorian ah yea most ppl on here are or have been homeschooled 😂 but good luck!

Thanks. Yea, I know most of you guys are homeschooled but one of the homeschooled guys at my church is doing some APs so that was one of the reasons I had thought to ask. I don’t really know all too much about how homeschooling works so I…[Read more]