GodlyFantasy12

@keilah-h

EWWWWWW CHARACTERS LIKE THATTTT!!!!!!! *slaps this villain across the face hard* Buuuutt hey if there weren’t villains there wouldn’t heroes to fight them so… *punches him the face anyway*

@godlyfantasy12

LOLLLL YOU ARE WELCOME TO HAVE 2 LOL Did I say only 1? I’m sorry you can have two. Especially if they’re inseparable like…[Read more]

@Denali-christianson You don’t have to add other skin tones etc. if, say, all of the characters in the story come from the same place. Look at how the world is separated. Yes, in America and a bunch of other places there’s mixed ethnicity all over the place, but for the longest time the light-skinned people were mostly concentrated in Europe,…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

AND THAT’S WHAT I SAID XD *appreciates rant very much* and that’s how my characters are diverse just wanted to get other humans thoughts on it. XD

@godlyfantasy12

*tosses that bucket of confetti from earlier into the air*

YES!!!!!!!!! I’M SO GLAD THAT WAS HELPFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

REEEEEEE

*dances in crazed circles*

@godlyfantasy12

WHYYYY THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it has been a long-time attempt at an accomplishment…

*follows your gaze and shrugs*

Do you think the Bumbles will fix it?

ALSO I’M GLAD YOU’RE NOT A BUMBLE!!!! I mean, I think. Unless bumbles are important to the survival of the world… Although a bumble sounds very similar to a…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

*jumps on ceiling*

*sighs when nothing happens*

*appears from staircase*

I have no clue where you got the wall busting power but I NEED IT

HOWEVER, that is not why I’m here.

Character deaths.

Are just…

Ah!

*cries*

I actually have a functional problem in my world where people can’t really stay totally dead but I have a…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting

Aw haha thanks! Yeah, I’ve been ghosting the KP forum a lot lately, idk why. Busy writing, I ‘spose.

I feel SO attacked right now…😂

Hmm, short stories and novels are probably my favorite, and if it’s a mix of fantasy and crime and time travel or something mind-bending it’s really fun, haha.

Lol that’s the best!!! I love mi…[Read more]

@GodlyFantasy12

I’m not struggling with the death (that is set) but with why he dies.

I’m sorry it is so confusing. I was having a difficult time explaining it clearly.

I do plan on having the antagonist go through a redemption arc, if he can (I’m not completely sure if it is compatible with his character). He will be given a chance to redeem…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Firstly, thank you for making this post. I don’t know how much wisdom I have to offer, since I am struggling with this same thing. Seriously, I have two characters that I am planning to kill,(one is doomed beyond hope since his death is literally the finale of his arc. The other may escape my sword. May being the operative word)…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

At least for me, even though I haven’t read a ton of stories with fake character deaths, I’ve read enough to know that it cheapens the plotline. I feel like killing MCs and resurrecting them is a common enough thing to do that when you do it, people don’t take you seriously. It takes away from the power of the MC’s death,…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 Ah, yes. Killing off a character, and then bringing them back. Happened to me. Poor Howzer, sacrificing himself to kill a villain. I’m not sure why, but I started feeling bad about killing him off and had his friend Feather pull off a crazy plan to bring him back. Which worked. Maybe that was a bad idea, because now he and two of…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Yeah, murdering characters is definitely one of those harder things about story plotting. I have a MIA in one of mine who won’t come back, even though part of me is testing that point pretty hard.

Oh… huge Wingfeather spoiler  was so well written, but, ahh, it hurt. *Sniff*

@godlyfantasy12

I’ve gone through this before too. It’s a hard decision. I did find this article, maybe it will help.

How to Successfully Kill a Character: The Checklist

God bless,

Mary

@unsung Yayyy!!! you’re hereeeee! now lemme get this party started

ahem @daisytorres @kathleenramm @devastate-lasting @abigail-m @joy-caroline @lydia-s @godlyfantasy12 @trahia-the-minstrel @mkfairygirl @sparksaraabbott11 @not-so-secret-secret-assassin @issawriter7 @i-haven’t-been-on-here-in-far-too-long-and-forgot-everyone’s-tags O_o

Y’all, this…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

This sounds cool!

Okay so the three things I really liked about this are #1 the whole circus/murder mystery #2 the fact we’ll be getting into the past of a circus #3 they have high stakes at risk.

The three questions I have would be #1 why are Ara and November, in particular, being targeted #2 what are they doing in the circus…[Read more]

@trahia-the-minstrel

Woah. I thought I had written a lot of sibling relationships, but I can honestly say you’ve beaten me.

And yeah, two friends so close they could be brothers pretty much counts as brothers in my eyes.

Since you have written many brother relationships, have you written any sister relationships in your stories? And if you…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 I have very similar problems with figuring out what my characters want? It is so important to the story and yet it can be so hard to find. With that being said, I would guess that your guy might have several goals.

Possible goal 1) He wants to live a ‘normal’ life, and doesn’t want anyone to know about his scars.

As a guy, I…[Read more]

@@godlyfantasy12 I have very similar problems with figuring out what my characters want? I would say that your guy might have several goals.
Possible goal 1) He wants to live a ‘normal’ life, and doesn’t want anyone to know about his scars.
As a guy, I can understand this. We tend to dislike and sometimes fear revealing our emotions. Even if we…[Read more]