GodlyFantasy12

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Enjoy the story if you care to read it….and please critique it as honestly as possible!! &…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h

If you’re uncomfortable with talking about it, we’ll drop the subject. Besides, this is for the KotLC debate, people.

@godlyfantasy12 yeah probably a good idea for us not to get into that.

@loopylin ha that’s cute!

@godlyfantasy12 OOH I LOVE YOUR DRAGON IDEA!!! (at least back when the dragons and elves were friends) I’m currently writing a fanfic/AU where each member of my family and a bunch of my friends have dragons…

@theloonyone @esther-c

Feather

“Yes. There’s only ever been dragons and humans on my planet. My bro…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @felicity @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings

Welp… I guess posting it on Wednesday didn’t happen. 🤦🏻‍♀️ 😅 But here it is!! Sorry for making y’all wait so long. I may have forgotten about it… *hides behind pillow* *throws pillow, clears throat, and resumes poise*

Anywho, I put a little bit of the end of the previous chapter…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Don’t worry about it! 😁 Different opinions are fine XD Better to be honest about how you feel!

Yeah, that’s true. Thanks for understanding!

@godlyfantasy12

This is all dependent on you and what you want your book to be. Everyone’s going to have differing opinions, and it also comes down the tone of the book 😊

Agreed. Sometim…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

And yeah, I figured she was probably a big fan of his work. To be honest, I’m not hating on the author and all the work she’s done. She’s gotten published. I haven’t. That’s an enormous achievement, and if she’s done it she deserves a bit of slack. It’s just the content itself that I didn’t like.

You can totally love it! I mean,…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @loopylin

@lightoverdarkness6 (Helping you mom with Christmas is great! Maybe Matthew and Lyla will just quietly follow the group for awhile Xd)

Lesli and Tauren

Lesli listens carefully to the conversation about magic and dragons.

“Woah!” She looks over at the crystal in Lunas hand. “Does that do something?”

Tauren stands…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Okay yeah, it makes sense you haven’t noticed those things because you haven’t read HP or LotR. That’s understandable.

I’m not sure how the LotR elves’ abilities are categorized – they have strong connections with ancient peoples and powers, speak pretty much all languages, and…well, from being immortal, are probably…[Read more]

@loopylin @godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings

I’m not gonna be able to RP much for the next few days, (I’m helping my mom get ready for Christmas!!) so, y’all can make Matthew and Lyla just do whatever. I trust y’all. Or you could pretend that they disappeared, or maybe you could have your charries  get separated from Matt and Lyla. Whatever…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

These are the two charries.

@godlyfantasy12

Ok! I’m finally RPing! 😁

Everton

Next to him, Ami spoke up. “We’ll help you find them if you’d like.”

“That’d be great!” Jocelyn replied.

The small group continued down the hall. As they walked, Ev heard a man cry, “Hold still and you won’t be hurt!”

“Let go of me!” Replied a young woman’s voice.

It sounded as if th…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

the thing is when you think about it most of the elf powers are not that original and the magic system is not complicated. Also the elves in Tolkien do have biases just in different ways.

@godlyfantasy12

ah I didn’t think of that. Doesn’t bother me really, as I’m not gonna be breaking rules anytime soon but I totally see ur point!

 

but it helped that their rules were totally stupid and I was rooting for her the whole time XD

Hm, yeah. Rooting for characters to break the rules, even stupid ones, is something I’m not comfo…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @folith-feolin @starofthenorth @lewilliams @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @theloonyone

So yeah, the intense mind powers and extremely broken people was a turn-off for me, but I think an even bigger thing was how the kids were breaking rules (important rules!) and getting away with it/encouraged to keep doing it BY THE ADULTS IN…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

ahh now I can give advice!!!

Yay 😊😂!!

so for the chili/hot sauce scenes and the difference of opinion between ppls, no view is wrong!

This actually is dependent on Light and the tone of her book!

Oh, okay!

So, before you go and change anything Light, you first just need to ask what the tone of your book is.

Is it light, happy, a b…

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@godlyfantasy12

oooof…I usually don’t give critiques much just cuz I don’t really care too except for when they ask for like a CERTAIN thing, or if I just see something story wise if that makes sense XD….

I just don’t really like critiquing ppl unless they ask for a certain thing and then Ik what to critique, or if I see a certain story eleme…

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@godlyfantasy12

Slender, and the height of dogs, or cats actually!

*gasp!* teeny dragons! : D

I know this is probably not at all what your dragons are like, but I have a dragon from another story that is the size of a small dog and behaves completely like a dog. His name is Arthur and he’s completely ridiculous and I love him.

Sorry for the r…[Read more]