GodlyFantasy12

@savannah_grace2009

Ok! So I finally have some feedback for your WIP. (Sorry it took so long 😭)

In the first chapter, the biggest thing I noticed was a lot of telling/info-dumping. It’s not wrong to give some background in the first chapter, but the key word is “some.” I felt like there was a lot of information about her father and how he had d…[Read more]

Though Ransom could just be a nickname some people call him…

@whalekeeper

He sounds awesome!!

Some name ideas…

• Axel
• Jett
• Orion
• Zayn
• Roscoe
• Benedict
• Kieran

@savanah_grace2009

Fynn

Fynn chuckled to cover how awkward his question had become. He fumbled with his bangs for a second, then put his hand back on Liv’s arm. “Well… there was one today…” He cast another glance Callie’s way and sighed. “She was trying to invite Chase to come to the dance and even invited him to come with us. I wasn’t exactl…[Read more]

@walkbyfaith @grcr @beth-torres @anyone-else-on-this-topic

So I haven’t been reading with the same plan y’all are doing, but I have been going through Genesis on my own. I think the thing that’s stood out to me the most is the beautiful balance of God’s justice and mercy. I’ve only made it as far as after the Flood, but still, I can see that God…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yeah I think It’s too much for me lol, also because I think she is based off of some peagen thing… yeah a little outside my comfort zone. I guess it’s weird to me because it’s not a idea that started in Marvel. Even if they clean it up a bit and make it not as weird, idk the origins and that’s a little shifty to me.

Oh and yeah the…[Read more]

@felicity

Thanks! I’m so glad you think so! I intend for it to be brutal lol, I’m hoping after they get back together there will be a deeper dimension to their relationship though. They were so close as just friends I didn’t think there could be a romance without some confusion XD

Oh my word this was so long agooo!! It will be a year in a couple months!! 😱

@whalekeeper

Thank you, thank you. *bows again because why not* You should get one too. Does wonders for writing muscle. (That’s only what I’ve heard… still haven’t seen it work yet… 🧐)

@calyhuge

Np don’t worry about it! Just wanted to let you know : )

@calyhuge

I get that online communication is kinda hard! Generally I think what we do here is only offer negative feedback if the person asked for it, and it’s constructive. For instance, if I posted a drawing saying, ‘How could I improve this?’ then you would be totally encouraged to reply with something like, ‘I think the eyes are to small, and…[Read more]

@calyhuge

I hope yall don’t mind me busting in here, but I feel like some sort of miscommunication happened and I couldn’t just stand by lol…

*looks back at page 123*

YIKES THAT’S A VERY–

Wait, that’s supposed to be Hugo? To be frank, it looks like a girl. Disturbingly so. Sorry, honesty. Also looks just a little creepy. Just gut react…

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@rae

Yes!! XD

I also loved drawing this pose; a good chunk of the story takes place near a beach and I picture Mars going crazy in a pool fight XD

@loopylin

XD Has school started again for you yet? (…If you’re still in school?)

Oh my goodness XD

@mineralizedwritings

Thx for the tag! Hehe yes I’m still alive, as you well know. 😉

That snippet tho…brutal. I like how you’re portraying their relationship realistically because it really is like that sometimes.

@savannah_grace2009

Okay okay *sighs* ❤️

@esther-c

I think it looks absolutely splendiferous!! Matches your eyes ✨

@loopylin

Yep, I’m here 😁 Mmm, just putzing around, as usual. A lot of drawing, as you know, and trYing to succeed in all the areas of life which I desperately need to succeed in. Actually I’m kind of depressed right now, which is why I sound so enthusiastic. Trying to…[Read more]

*Looks back and OFFICIALLY decides he needs a redraw already* Okay people, I’mma fix my mistakes and go for something a little grounded, because boy did I mess up on some of the proportions. Hopefully I will be able to repent of some of my actions.