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hybridlore replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 day, 11 hours ago
I definitely got that difference, but having you explain it helped even more.
Is Jace younger than the others? You described him as a boy multiple times.
Guy… we didn’t really get much there, but I got the impression he is haunted by his past. Lol.
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Esther replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 day, 12 hours ago
I know this is a massive article I’m sharing, lol, but I’ve agreed with anything I’ve read from this website (and everything I’ve seen/read at the Creation Museum and Ark Encounter). This article explains why they believe the earth was created in six literal 24-hour days.
And to answer the question, I am also a young-earth creationist.
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 day, 12 hours ago
❤️❤️❤️
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 12 hours ago
I’ll keep watching from the shadows and once the draft is over I’ll give you more input on that XD
Yes please do!
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 day, 12 hours ago
I will! I’m not actually taking it until tomorrow, because when we arrived at the BMV, there was a 49 person wait. It’s not usually that crowded, so we’ll go back tomorrow.
Oh goodness! that’s ridiculous 😂
Some of the material will depend on state and my driver’s ed program said that there were a lot of road sign questions and you c…
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 days ago
(mostly because Burne doesn’t have the restaurants we have)
I commend you for making up a restaurant. Mentioning real companies/brands in stories is a pet peeve of mine. XD
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whaley replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 2 days ago
yours are so wacky lol
The idea was to be wacky, but I wish I could say my last one is an exaggeration. It’s the most accurate out of the three. 🙃
Meanwhile, crocodile man desperately trying to hide his minor self-esteem issues wages a private war with everything, but mostly his own emotions.
Life be like that sometimes.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days ago
I do all the time and randomly remember during the day. XD
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aIjmMlC28TT3c9eMUpg1-9ASZ71vtWpJMhcSz_dmI_Y/edit?usp=drivesdk
I’ll send the Word link to your email, if you want that one too.
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 5 hours ago
@theshadow @theducktator @savannah_grace2009
Sorry for falling off the face of the planet there for a minute! XD Anyway, thank you so much for your feedback and I’ve read through it all and am FOR SURE taking every word into consideration (I just don’t feel like making individual replies to each one. I know. I’m lazy 🤣)
(Also, Sara, yes. It is…[Read more]
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Esther posted an update 2 days, 5 hours ago
Guyyssssssss… It’s been way too longgggg 😭 But I’m finally back!
Writing has been pretty nonexistent lately 😅 I haven’t really written anything since the end of March (and that was mostly editing anyway), and I’m really really hoping to make some progress and get into a better rhythm this summer. I feel like the unplanned break actually helped my…[Read more] -
Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 days, 6 hours ago
Oh my goodness Sara… I can’t even imagine how hard that is for y’all. 🥺 I know I’m replying late, but I’ve been praying for you. 💕💕
Oooh exciting! Let us know how it goes! (to be honest, I feel like the test is pretty easy because a lot of it is common sense [besides the oddly specific questions about insurance…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 6 hours ago
I think we are almost two thirds in?
Okay, sounds good. If needed, you can always catch up after your break.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 6 hours ago
@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @linus-smallprint (Hey, do you still want to be tagged on this since I know you’re taking a break soon?) @theducktator
New chapters are out!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 6 hours ago
I think the first chapter works pretty well! There was a bit of space in between Jonathan’s time in school and him talking to his brother that sort of felt like filler, but I’m not really sure what else you could put there so it might be fine for a first chapter to introduce the characters and the world.
One note: I was very…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 days, 7 hours ago
Wow, I really liked reading this! Are you planning to use the characters in a novel?
The POVs seemed pretty different, I think. Obviously, the longer we spend with the characters, the more we’ll get to know them and see their differences, but I got the impression that Zahn was the peacemaker, Kyler likes to tease and instigate things,…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 days, 7 hours ago
Yeah, that’s understandable. I’m sorry 😢 🤗 But hopefully you have a great time at camp! I’ll continue to pray for you guys!
I’ve been doing pretty good! Just started math again so I can finish my class by next year. So… yeah. 😅
@theducktator Praying!
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whaley replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 days, 9 hours ago
One of my youngest friends has cancer. ♥️ It sucks. Don’t let it push people out even if it becomes a normal in your life.
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whaley replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 9 hours ago
@ellette-giselle
Sounds good to me! Once I catch up with Linus’ work, I can help here, although I may stop at some point to make time for summer activities.
What kind of editing do you want? Super detailed? (Since you said this is several drafts in.) Just a quick read through? -
hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 days, 23 hours ago
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 days, 10 hours ago
Wow that looks so amazing!
The shading reminds me a lot of Chinese/Douyin art style which is something I’ve been trying to replicate since I started watching Donghua. It looks amazing!
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Hey Esther!! Nice to see you around again!!
Sounds like a lot of craziness! 😂 How are you liking driving so far? And what new project are you planning to work on first?
I’m doing pretty good! My family moved and so we’ve been settling in and stuff but this week I’m finally starting to finish up my math (hopefully the last math of high schoo…[Read more]
Hehe, yes, but good craziness nonetheless! I’ve liked it so far! I’m kinda nervous and a little scared, but I’m mostly excited so that kinda overpowers the rest, lol. My brother’s also going off to college in the fall and he had been driving us places sometimes, so it’s almost like a motivation for me to be the new driver in the house (for my o…[Read more]
HIIII ESTHERR <333
I'm so glad you're back, I was starting to wonder where you were…
(Like i'm one to talk, I'm notorious for randomly falling off the face of the earth so I get it girl haha)
THAT SOUNDS SO FUN!!!! I'm glad the last few weeks went so well for you!!!!
Writing's been nonexisitent for me too…I'm kind of stuck on my Andromeda…[Read more]
Oops I forgot you asked us to talk about ourselves too haha
Nothing much has been going on with me…I got a job at a coffee shop and I’ve been working 7 hour shifts almost every day which is exhausting but at least I get MONEY!!!
And I’m glad its’ keeping me out of the house too.
Besides the writing thing I mentioned earlier, I haven’t been…[Read more]
Thanks girl! <33
Ugh, yesss, I know that feeling. It can be really good to switch things up every now and then!
Oooh, that sounds like such a fun place to work! I got a job at a coffee shop near us and then was FIRED before I even started. 😑 It was because she thought they would be busier now that they had added ice cream to the menu, but…[Read more]