GodlyFantasy12

@trailblazer I don’t know much about this time period, but I really enjoyed it so far! It does draw you in.

I feel like it’s hard to have character development within one chapter, but I’d be interested to see where this goes! Please tag me if you post more ! 😉

@trailblazer

Hello! I’d love to give feedback! 🥰

1, does it draw you in and make you want to read more?

I drawn in by the character relationships! Knowing this is the first draft, I think it could be better if we jumped into the relationships before the historical events. I’ve read some classic his-fics (Johnny Tremain, five out of five stars),…[Read more]

@rae

I knew how Nar would be, though I also had never written her POV, but Jr is like…trying to describe the taste of mango without saying mango. Nearly impossible!

Relatable 😖 What helps me is to find some solid values and then play them out in an interesting way.

Not that I’ve written her much here, but Babs is a type 6 and wants security for h…[Read more]

@loopylin

*tries to hide an undignified snort* hehehehehe

I think his fragility will wax and wane XD Right now he’s strong.

@loopylin

I have no idea if any of my characters would like to write, but maybe they’ll chip in 😀

@rae

I am working on Ben’s voice because I’ve never written his POV, so please give me grace XD I’m testing this and that. The problem is, for he first book, he is literally nine years old in physical age and was way more gentle and fragile, so I’m trying to decide how much of that should carry forward ;P

Ben

“But I just came from…” Ben…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

AHHHHH HANS 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Noooooo not another one to sob over 😭😭😭😭😭

🥺🥺

@mineralizedwritings

Tysm for asking I really appreciate it! Yeah, it feels like it’s been forever.

Ofc girl! 💖 Yeah it really does.

And girl I’m so sorry 🥺 I know that must be so scary and overwhelming. I’m praying for you ❤ I wish I was better at saying encouraging things…but just know that you are loved and worthy of love no matter what. We…[Read more]

@liberty

Um, I don’t think so. I believe I was just pointing out some wording that I felt was a little awkward. My suggestion was a way to word it differently so that it would be smoother to read. As for the describing the forest, you could tap into his emotions a little bit then, but that wasn’t exactly what I was pointing out. I was just sug…[Read more]

@loopylin

Yessss, awesome idea!! love it 😎 And it will always give our charries something to do if the RP slows for a little bit. XD

I’m having a lot of problems seeing the updated page 😕 It just isn’t. Updated, I mean.

@mineralizedwritings

Kaine! Share yourself with others before you get pulled into drama so they can save you with love if you need it!! DUde!!

@loopylin

Good with me!

Btw, me, my brother and mum use noise-canceling earplugs too. They only cancel a layer of the noise so you can still hear what’s going on, but they do wonders for anxiety. I’ve also used – weirdly – rose tinted glasses. I only used them a couple times, but it’s the same concept – they cancel out a layer of visual.

@rae @g…[Read more]

@loopylin

Thank you <3

@freed_and_redeemed @whalekeeper @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @anyone else

I wanted to share a snippet! I’d say this is from book 4. Also y book has been changing so much recently and I realized yall don’t even know abt this plotline yet, so I guess it isn;t exactly spoilers.

I’m pretty proud of how this turned out,…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @jonas @rae @freed_and_redeemed @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Alright, gonna RP for two more charries real quick. Feel free to have your character interact with them or totally ignore them. 😛

Hallie 

“Are you sure my hair looks okay?”

“Hallie, it looks fine.”

She turned away from the window and narrowed her eyes at her brother.…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Everton 

“Woah, what the— Oh…” Ev pushed a hand through his hair and looked at the boy he had run into. “Tony right?”

Sorry it’s so short. I wasn’t sure if Tony would just give a simple answer or not. 🙃

@rae

He could draw the whole yearbook XP

Ben

Ben pointed at the drawing. “That’s me, isn’t it? You squinted at me real weird, and that’s what told me.”

The boy gave him a long, depressed stare. Then nodded.

“Score!” Ben bounced his knees – not just as a celebration, but because he was already itching to transform into one of those wolves. But…[Read more]

@jonas

The classes are way looser now, so you can use the teacher whenever.

@rae

Yeah, I figured Chase shifted like that. I just thought it would be funny to have a character who realistically shifts, and always has to deal with putting his clothes back on XD We’ll see how he manages! And yeah, Chase could write, if you feel like that’s…[Read more]

@rae @godlyfantasy12

Ben

It felt so free to be a single child!

Ben tossed his underwear out the window and scrambled out, along the frame and up the brick wall.

His tail twitched, so the sun rays flashed off and on in his eyes. Warmth trickled into his tiny rodent body – first through the skin folds connected to his armpits, then seeping into…[Read more]